Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答直接且结构清晰，细节具体，也使用了“so”衔接因果关系。可以将“a big part of our family values”改为更自然的“an important part of our family values”，并补充一个简短的具体场景，让内容更生动。

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and they always treated other people with respect. For example, they would greet our neighbours warmly whenever we saw them. Since politeness was important in our family, it gradually became second nature to me.

Gợi ý: 观点明确，也提供了原因和文化背景。不过前两句意思重复；“social interaction interactions”有重复用词，建议改为“social interactions”。合并重复观点，并用一个简短例子支撑答案，会更自然有效。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. Being polite is important because it shows respect and helps people build good relationships. It can also make conversations more comfortable, especially when you meet someone for the first time. For example, a warm greeting can help both people feel at ease.

Gợi ý: 第一句直接回答了问题，但后面的句子有明显的语法和表达错误：“First impressions really can't”意思不完整；“Helps starting start”结构错误；“shows”前也缺少明确主语。建议先说明场合，再用完整句解释礼貌如何帮助建立良好印象。

Ví dụ: We should be especially polite when meeting someone for the first time. A polite greeting and a friendly tone can create a good first impression. They also show that we respect the other person and help the conversation get off to a positive start.

Gợi ý: 回答提供了具体行为，但“plain language”不适合表达“礼貌用语”，可改为“polite expressions”或“polite words”。“My parents really come emphasize”语法错误；由于问题询问童年经历，建议统一使用过去时，并将“remember all my manners”改成更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: As a child, I showed politeness by saying “please” and “thank you” to adults and teachers. My parents also taught me to greet people respectfully. I tried to remember my manners at home and at school, especially when asking someone for help.

× It also makes social interaction interactions much smoother and more pleasant.

✓ It also makes social interactions much smoother and more pleasant.

“interaction interactions”重复且单复数形式不一致。此处泛指人与人之间的多次社交互动，用复数“social interactions”即可。检查名词前后的重复，并根据表达的含义统一使用单数或复数。

× First impressions really can't and shows politeness.

✓ First impressions really count, and politeness shows respect.

原句中的“can't”使句意和结构都不完整，且“and”连接的两部分不能构成通顺的并列结构。结合上下文，可表达为“第一印象很重要，礼貌体现尊重”。说话时如果需要修改或重启句子，应完整说出修改后的表达，避免把未完成的词句留在句中。

× Helps starting start things off on the right foot and shows respect for the other person.

✓ It helps start things off on the right foot and shows respect for the other person.

原句缺少主语，因此是句子片段；“starting start”也包含重复和未完成的自我修正。补上主语“It”，并用“help + 动词原形”结构表达“有助于开启良好的互动”。回答时要确保每个完整句子都有主语和谓语。

× My parents really come emphasize the importance of greeting people politely, so I always try to remember all my manners.

✓ My parents really emphasized the importance of greeting people politely, so I always try to remember all my manners.

“come emphasize”在这里不能构成正确的谓语。句子是在回忆童年时父母的教导，因此应使用过去式“emphasized”。描述过去发生的事情时，注意将动词变为过去式。