Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答父母如何教你礼貌，然后用一两个清晰的例子展开。注意过去时态一致：讲童年经历时用 taught、asked、couldn't；说规则时可以用 were not allowed to。修正表达，如 speak loudly、when we were eating，并避免重复和犹豫词。

Ví dụ: My parents taught me to be polite by setting clear rules at home. For example, they asked me to close the door quietly when entering someone else's room. They also taught me not to speak loudly at the dinner table.

Gợi ý: 回答结构清楚，理由和结果也充分。注意把 pilot 改为 polite；为了让表达更自然，可以把 your character and upbringing 改成 a person's character and upbringing，或统一使用 you。整体内容已经具体，不必再增加更多信息。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is essential because it reflects your character and upbringing. It can also help you build good relationships and resolve conflicts more easily. As a result, people are more likely to trust and respect you.

Gợi ý: 目前答案没有完整清楚地回答“哪些场合”，句子也在结尾处中断。先列出一到两个场合，再说明原因。注意说 take part in，而不是 take a part in；important 前用 an。避免不确定或含糊的词，确保例子表达完整。

Ví dụ: We should be polite in formal situations, such as business meetings or job interviews. In these settings, respectful language helps us make a good impression. We should also be polite when speaking to older people.

Gợi ý: 你给出了道歉和不在家里跑动两个具体例子，但第一句有多处语法错误。someone else things 应为 someone else's things；描述过去的习惯时，统一使用 apologized、returned 和 tried。we can them 意思不清楚，可以改成 returned them。减少 umm，让回答更流畅。

Ví dụ: As a child, I showed politeness by apologizing if I took someone else's things without asking. I would return them as soon as possible. I also tried not to run around the house because my parents said it was unsafe.

× For example they were they would ask me to oh to close the door while I get into other people's room.

✓ For example, they would ask me to close the door when I entered other people's rooms.

这段话是在回忆童年，描述过去发生的事情，因此应使用过去时。原句中的“get”应改为“entered”。“they were”和“oh to”属于口语中的重复或停顿，不是这里要纠正的语法错误。

× For example they were they would ask me to oh to close the door while I get into other people's room.

✓ For example, they would ask me to close the door when I entered other people's rooms.

这里说的是进入其他人的房间这一类情形，通常应使用复数“rooms”。注意所有格“people's”修饰复数名词时不需要改变形式。

× And also we can't speak loud when we eating.

✓ Also, we couldn't speak loudly when we were eating.

这句话描述童年时的规定，应使用过去时：“can't”改为“couldn't”。

× And also we can't speak loud when we eating.

✓ Also, we couldn't speak loudly when we were eating.

“speak”是动词，需要用副词修饰，因此应使用“loudly”，而不是形容词“loud”。

× And also we can't speak loud when we eating.

✓ Also, we couldn't speak loudly when we were eating.

过去进行时需要由“be动词过去式 + 动词-ing”构成，因此应说“we were eating”，不能省略“were”。

× I think when it comes to an important meeting when you are at your company or maybe you just need to take a part in a important course such as some chords or.

✓ I think we should be polite at an important meeting at our company, or when we need to take part in an important course.

以元音音素开头的“important”前应使用“an”，所以应说“an important course”。此外，“take part in”是固定表达，其中“part”前通常不加冠词“a”。

× I think when it comes to an important meeting when you are at your company or maybe you just need to take a part in a important course such as some chords or.

✓ I think we should be polite at an important meeting at our company, or when we need to take part in an important course.

原句以“when”引导的从句开头，却没有清楚的主句，并且最后停在“or”，导致句子结构不完整。建议补出主句，并结束未完成的并列内容。

× I also try not to run in the house because my parents said it was unsafe.

✓ I also tried not to run in the house because my parents said it was unsafe.

这段回答描述的是童年时的行为，因此应将现在时“try”改为过去时“tried”，与上下文中的过去时保持一致。