Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and well developed, with a clear explanation of how politeness benefits communication. However, use the past tense consistently because the question asks about childhood: “taught us” rather than “teach us.” Add commas between “please, sorry, and thank you,” and use more natural phrases such as “show gratitude” and “be polite to others.” Avoid repeating “frequently.”

Ví dụ: My parents and kindergarten teachers taught me to say “please,” “sorry,” and “thank you.” They explained that these simple words show respect and gratitude. As a result, I learned that being polite can make people more willing to help and communicate with me.

Gợi ý: You give a clear opinion and support it with examples involving children and adults. Improve grammatical accuracy: say “more liked by adults,” “take part in activities,” “a polite person,” and “express politeness.” Avoid the repeated “to” in “to to attend.” Also, “being polite” does not directly create job opportunities; explain that it can help candidates make a positive impression during interviews.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Politeness is important because it helps people build positive relationships. For children, it can make teachers and classmates more willing to include them in activities. For adults, using respectful language in a job interview can create a good impression and improve their chances of being hired.

Gợi ý: Your answer directly addresses the question and includes a relevant interview example. Use the natural expression “at all times,” not “at all the times,” and say “especially when we need something” instead of “for a situation that you are in need.” Avoid claiming that politeness helps someone “get the job easily”; say it “can improve the chance of making a good impression.” You could also mention other occasions, such as speaking to older people or dealing with customer-service staff.

Ví dụ: I think we should be polite at all times, but it is especially important when we need help or want to make a good impression. For example, during a job interview, we should speak respectfully and show appreciation to the interviewers. This can help us appear professional and improve our chances of being hired.

Gợi ý: You provide specific cultural behavior, but the answer contains several grammar and clarity problems. Since the question is in the past tense, use “I often said” and “I used both hands.” Say “the items they handed to me,” not “that items” or “the people that they hands to you.” Avoid repeating “frequently,” and organize the answer with a clear topic sentence followed by the example of receiving something with both hands.

Ví dụ: As a child, I showed politeness by saying “please,” “sorry,” and “thank you.” I also used both hands when receiving a gift or an object from someone, especially an older person. In my culture, this gesture shows respect and gratitude.

× Our kindergarten teachers and our parents often teach us to say please sorry and thank you frequently.

✓ Our kindergarten teachers and our parents often taught us to say please, sorry, and thank you.

The question asks about your childhood, so the past tense taught is more appropriate than the present tense teach. Also, frequently is unnecessary because often already expresses frequency.

× Saying these three words shows your gratitude and you're polite toward the others and it can make others more willing to help you when you are in need.

✓ Saying these three words shows your gratitude and that you are polite toward other people. It can also make others more willing to help you when you are in need.

The original sentence joins several independent ideas with and, which makes the structure difficult to follow. Use that you are to complete the structure after shows, and divide the ideas into two sentences.

× If you are a child, being polite would make you more liked by the adult and you could in turn have more chances to to attend to the activity.

✓ If you are a child, being polite can make you more popular with adults, and you can have more opportunities to attend activities.

The answer describes a general result, so can is more suitable than would. The phrase to to is a repetition, and attend is normally followed directly by an activity without to.

× If you are a child, being polite would make you more liked by the adult and you could in turn have more chances to to attend to the activity.

✓ If you are a child, being polite can make you more popular with adults, and you can have more opportunities to attend activities.

The verb attend does not normally take the preposition to when it means participate in or go to an event. Say attend activities, not attend to the activity.

× If you are a child, being polite would make you more liked by the adult and you could in turn have more chances to to attend to the activity.

✓ If you are a child, being polite can make you more popular with adults, and you can have more opportunities to attend activities.

Adults is used in a general sense, so it should be plural rather than the singular adult. Activities is also more natural because the statement refers to activities in general.

× And as for the adult, if you are a polite people, you can get more job opportunities at interviews since you express your polite toward the interviewers.

✓ As for adults, if you are a polite person, you can get more job opportunities at interviews because you express your politeness toward the interviewers.

People is plural and cannot follow the singular article a. Use the singular noun person after a, or use people without a. The general expression is also adults rather than the adult.

× And as for the adult, if you are a polite people, you can get more job opportunities at interviews since you express your polite toward the interviewers.

✓ As for adults, if you are a polite person, you can get more job opportunities at interviews because you express your politeness toward the interviewers.

Polite is an adjective, but the sentence needs a noun after your. The noun form is politeness, so say express your politeness.

× Honestly, in my opinion, we have to be polite at all the times, but especially for a situation that you are in need.

✓ Honestly, in my opinion, we have to be polite at all times, but especially when we are in need.

At all times is a fixed expression and does not use the definite article the. The phrase when we are in need is also more natural than for a situation that you are in need.

× Honestly, in my opinion, we have to be polite at all the times, but especially for a situation that you are in need.

✓ Honestly, in my opinion, we have to be polite at all times, but especially when we are in need.

For is not the appropriate preposition before this situation. Use when we are in need to express the circumstances in which politeness is especially important.

× We often say thank you sorry and please frequently because these three words are the most important terms that our parents taught us to say it frequently.

✓ We often say thank you, sorry, and please because these three words are the most important terms that our parents taught us to say frequently.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to three words. Use them if a pronoun is necessary, or omit the pronoun because the object is already clear. Here, omitting it produces the most natural sentence.

× And furthermore, we would when we are receiving something from the others, we have to use our both hand to get over that items instead of using only one hand because it can show our respect and gratitude toward the people that they hands to you.

✓ Furthermore, when we received something from other people, we had to use both our hands to receive the item instead of using only one hand because this showed our respect and gratitude toward the people who handed it to us.

Would is incorrectly placed before when and does not express the intended past obligation. Use had to for an obligation that existed in the past.

× And furthermore, we would when we are receiving something from the others, we have to use our both hand to get over that items instead of using only one hand because it can show our respect and gratitude toward the people that they hands to you.

✓ Furthermore, when we received something from other people, we had to use both our hands to receive the item instead of using only one hand because this showed our respect and gratitude toward the people who handed it to us.

The answer describes a childhood habit, so the past tense received and showed should be used instead of the present forms are receiving and can show.

× And furthermore, we would when we are receiving something from the others, we have to use our both hand to get over that items instead of using only one hand because it can show our respect and gratitude toward the people that they hands to you.

✓ Furthermore, when we received something from other people, we had to use both our hands to receive the item instead of using only one hand because this showed our respect and gratitude toward the people who handed it to us.

Hands must be plural because the sentence refers to both hands. Also, people is plural, so the sentence should refer to people who handed the item to us.

× And furthermore, we would when we are receiving something from the others, we have to use our both hand to get over that items instead of using only one hand because it can show our respect and gratitude toward the people that they hands to you.

✓ Furthermore, when we received something from other people, we had to use both our hands to receive the item instead of using only one hand because this showed our respect and gratitude toward the people who handed it to us.

Both comes before the possessive determiner our in this expression. The correct word order is both our hands, not our both hand.

× And furthermore, we would when we are receiving something from the others, we have to use our both hand to get over that items instead of using only one hand because it can show our respect and gratitude toward the people that they hands to you.

✓ Furthermore, when we received something from other people, we had to use both our hands to receive the item instead of using only one hand because this showed our respect and gratitude toward the people who handed it to us.

The relative clause should use who as the subject referring to people. They is unnecessary, and it should be used as the object of handed because it refers to the item.

× And furthermore, we would when we are receiving something from the others, we have to use our both hand to get over that items instead of using only one hand because it can show our respect and gratitude toward the people that they hands to you.

✓ Furthermore, when we received something from other people, we had to use both our hands to receive the item instead of using only one hand because this showed our respect and gratitude toward the people who handed it to us.

Hands is incorrectly used with they. The corrected relative clause, people who handed it to us, has the plural subject people and the matching past-tense verb handed.