Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and gives a clear example, but several phrases are unnatural or grammatically incorrect. Say “set a great example of how I should behave” rather than “set a great example to how I should behave,” and replace “the example that she said” with “the example she set.” Also, “I’m still following her example today” is more natural than “I’m following to this.” Try to give the answer in a clearer structure: identify your mother as your role model, explain what she did, and state the result.

Ví dụ: My mother taught me to be polite because she was my role model. She always used polite language and treated everyone with respect, so I learned by watching her behavior. She also reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” and to listen when other people were speaking. I still follow her example today.

Gợi ý: You clearly express your opinion and give a reason, but the answer contains repetition, a sentence fragment, and awkward word choices. Avoid using both “crucial” and “very”; “very important” or “crucial” is sufficient. Replace “as mannered as good as well mannered as possible” with “as well-mannered as possible,” and avoid repeating “because.” You could strengthen the answer with one specific result, such as how politeness helps people form positive relationships.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it creates a positive first impression and shows respect for other people. For example, using polite language can make a conversation more comfortable, even when you are speaking to a stranger. It also helps people trust you and build better relationships.

Gợi ý: Your response is well developed because you give a clear opinion and add a thoughtful qualification. However, “should not come occasionally” is unnatural; say “should not be limited to certain occasions” or “we should be polite all the time.” Also, use “set limits on our kindness” instead of “put limits to the politeness.” Make the contrast more natural with “That said” or “However,” and explain briefly that politeness does not mean allowing others to treat you unfairly.

Ví dụ: We should be polite in all situations, especially when meeting new people, speaking to older people, or dealing with colleagues. Good manners help us communicate respectfully and avoid unnecessary conflict. That said, being polite does not mean allowing people to take advantage of us, so we should still set clear boundaries when necessary.

Gợi ý: You provide specific childhood examples and a personal reaction, which makes the answer engaging and effective. Nevertheless, “shocked at why they didn’t” should be “shocked that they didn’t,” and “all of the elderly” is better expressed as “elderly people.” Correct the repetition in “made made,” and consider saying “I made a good impression” rather than “which made a good impression.” You can also connect the examples more smoothly with “In addition” or “I also.”

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I used to greet people whenever I saw them in the street. Sometimes they did not respond, and I was surprised because I thought everyone should return a greeting. I also showed respect to my teachers and elderly people by listening carefully and offering help when they needed it. As a result, people often saw me as a kind and well-mannered child.

× She would always set a great example to how I should behave and act with others.

✓ She would always set a great example of how I should behave and act with others.

The preposition of is used after example when introducing the behavior that the example demonstrates. Use example of something, not example to something.

× So the example that she said is still my role model that I'm following to this.

✓ So the example that she set is still my role model.

The verb set is the correct past-tense verb for establishing or providing an example. The verb said means spoke words and does not fit this meaning.

× So the example that she said is still my role model that I'm following to this.

✓ So the example that she set is still my role model that I'm following to this day.

The fixed expression is to this day, meaning until now. The preposition to must be followed by this day in this expression.

× Personally, I think that being polite is very crucial because good manners are the first impression that you give when you meet others so one should always try to be as mannered as good as well mannered as possible because.

✓ Personally, I think that being polite is very crucial because good manners create the first impression you make when you meet others, so one should always try to be as well-mannered as possible.

The correct adjective is well-mannered, and the comparison pattern is as well-mannered as possible. Good is an adjective and cannot be used in the phrase as mannered as good.

× It's what matters.

✓ That is what matters.

In the original context, because incorrectly ends the preceding sentence, leaving an incomplete and confusing structure. Joining the idea with That is what matters creates a complete and logically connected sentence.

× I think that being polite should not come occasionally, but rather all the time.

✓ I think that being polite should not be occasional, but rather should be practiced all the time.

Occasional is the adjective needed after the linking verb be. The adverb occasionally cannot directly describe the state of being polite in this sentence.

× So we should try to put limits to the politeness.

✓ So we should try to put limits on our politeness.

The standard expression is put limits on something, not put limits to something.

× So we should try to put limits to the politeness.

✓ So we should try to put limits on our politeness.

When referring to politeness in general, the definite article the is unnecessary. The possessive adjective our makes the meaning clear and natural.

× I would try to be kind and be helpful, which honestly made made a good impression.

✓ I would try to be kind and helpful, which honestly made a good impression.

The verb made is repeated accidentally. Only one occurrence is needed, and be can be omitted before helpful because the two adjectives share the same verb.