Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答开头的“Meaning from my family”是句子残缺，应直接说“I mainly learned it from my family”。注意连接词和句子结构，避免用逗号连接多个完整句子；“besides”在这里使用不自然，可以改为“Moreover”或“学校老师也……”。“polite words”可以具体说明为“please, thank you and sorry”，并补充一个简短的实际例子，使内容更具体。

Ví dụ: I mainly learned to be polite from my family. My parents set a good example at home and taught me to use words like “please,” “thank you,” and “sorry.” Moreover, my teachers taught me to respect others and behave well at school.

Gợi ý: “Being blind”明显是用词错误，应改为“Being polite”。“A good manner”应改为复数“Good manners”，并使用“make social interactions smoother”。“colleges”应为“colleagues”；“For this example”应为“For example”。最后的例子中人称和逻辑混乱（“my classmate / He / them”），应明确说明礼貌行为如何帮助你建立友谊。回答内容较丰富，但建议控制在3—4个清晰句子内。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it shows respect and makes social interactions smoother. It can also help us build good relationships with classmates, colleagues, and even strangers. For example, when I started university, I smiled at my classmates and introduced myself politely, which helped me make friends more easily.

Gợi ý: 回答直接且有理由，但可以列举更多自然的场合，例如第一次见面、请求帮助、与长辈交谈或犯错时道歉。“smiled to my classmates”应改为“smiled at my classmates”；“gave them help”不自然，可改为“offered to help them”。最后一句的代词和主语不清楚，应明确说明“Being friendly helped me build relationships”。

Ví dụ: We should be polite whenever we meet someone for the first time, speak to older people, or ask someone for help. First impressions are important, so it is a good idea to greet people with a smile and use polite language. For example, when I started university, I smiled at my classmates and offered to help them, which helped me build good relationships.

Gợi ý: 这部分结构清楚，回答了问题，也提供了具体例子。可以把“said some polite words”改为更自然的“used polite words”或“said things like…”，并在句末补上句号。“elderly people”可以换成更自然的“older passengers”。为了增强连贯性，可以说明让座体现了对他人的尊重。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I showed politeness by using words like “please,” “thank you,” and “sorry.” I also tried to help people in my daily life. For example, I often offered my seat to older passengers on the bus because I wanted to show respect and do the right thing.

× Meaning from my family.

✓ I learned good manners from my family.

原句没有谓语动词，不能构成完整句子。由于问题使用过去时“did you learn”，回答也应使用过去时“learned”。

× My parents set a good example at home and they also taught me some polite words such as Thank you and sorry, besides my teacher in school also taught me a good etiquette when I was young.

✓ My parents set a good example at home, and they also taught me some polite words, such as “thank you” and “sorry.” Besides, my teacher at school also taught me good etiquette when I was young.

原句包含多个独立分句，使用逗号连接导致句子结构混乱。可以使用句号分开句子，并在“Besides”后面使用逗号。

× taught me a good etiquette

✓ taught me good etiquette

“Etiquette”通常是不可数名词，表示“礼仪”这一整体概念时不能使用不定冠词“a”。应说“good etiquette”。

× Being blind is very important because it shows respect to others.

✓ Being polite is very important because it shows respect to others.

“Blind”表示“失明的”，与上下文“礼貌”不符。这里应使用形容词“polite”，表示“有礼貌的”。

× A good manner can help social interactions smoother

✓ Good manners can help make social interactions smoother.

“Manners”表示礼貌行为或礼仪时通常使用复数形式。原句中的“a good manner”不符合这里的泛指含义，因此改为“good manners”。

× A good manner can help social interactions smoother

✓ Good manners can help make social interactions smoother.

情态动词“can”后需要接动词原形。原句中“help”后缺少使役结构“make”，应使用“help make something smoother”。

× For this example, last month when I came to the university

✓ For example, last month when I came to the university

“For example”是固定短语，表示“例如”。“For this example”在这里不是正确的表达。

× I smiled to my classmate.

✓ I smiled at my classmate.

表示“对某人微笑”时，动词“smile”通常与介词“at”搭配，不能使用“to”。

× He helped me build friendship with them.

✓ He helped me build a friendship with him.

原句中的“he”是单数男性代词，但后面的“them”是复数代词，指代不一致。如果“he”指前面提到的男同学，应使用单数宾格代词“him”。

× He helped me build friendship with them.

✓ He helped me build a friendship with them.

“Friendship”在表示一段具体的友谊时通常是可数名词，需要使用不定冠词“a”。因此应说“build a friendship”。

× I smiled to my classmates and gave them help.

✓ I smiled at my classmates and gave them help.

“Smile”表示“对某人微笑”时应搭配介词“at”，所以“smiled to”应改为“smiled at”。