Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly by saying that your family taught you politeness. Use the past tense consistently, such as “taught” and “reminded me,” and avoid unclear expressions like “your voice is the most important thing that you can attract the people.” Explain specifically how your family taught you, for example by asking you to greet people respectfully and listen carefully. Use linking words such as “because” and “for example” to connect your ideas naturally.

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my family. They taught me to greet people respectfully, listen when others were speaking, and use polite expressions such as “please” and “thank you.” For example, my parents reminded me to speak calmly whenever I met older relatives or guests.

Gợi ý: State your opinion with the correct form: “Yes, I think being polite is very important.” Give a clear reason, such as politeness helping people communicate comfortably and build trust. Avoid confusing phrases like “our voice is the main thing” and “we don’t know whenever they are healthy,” because they do not clearly support your opinion. Also use “treat everyone equally” instead of “polite every people,” and avoid repeating words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people communicate comfortably and builds mutual respect. We should treat everyone politely, regardless of their age or social position. Even when we disagree, speaking calmly can prevent unnecessary arguments and leave a good impression.

Gợi ý: Mention specific situations in which politeness is necessary, such as speaking to teachers, older people, colleagues, or strangers. The answer should directly say “We should be polite whenever we interact with other people,” rather than using unclear phrases such as “we expect our each and every member.” Use the correct structure “respond to anger” or, more naturally, “control our anger.” Add a brief example and connect it with “especially” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially in formal or unfamiliar situations. For example, we should speak respectfully to teachers, older people, customers, and colleagues. We should also remain polite during disagreements instead of responding angrily, because calm communication can solve problems more effectively.

Gợi ý: Use the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: “I calmed myself down,” “I listened,” and “I answered.” Describe two or three specific polite behaviours, such as listening carefully, speaking softly, and not interrupting. Replace incorrect phrases like “listen what other people saying,” “sout,” and “enjoy the cuisine” with “listen to what people were saying,” “shout,” and a relevant ending. Organize the answer with “First,” “then,” and “as a result” for better coherence.

Ví dụ: As a child, I showed politeness by listening carefully when adults were speaking and waiting for my turn to talk. I also tried to speak softly and never shouted at people, even when I was upset. My parents praised me for staying calm and treating others respectfully.

× So I learned to be polite as a child from my family who teach me every time you should be polite when you should talk with others.

✓ I learned to be polite as a child from my family, who taught me to be polite whenever I talked to others.

Because the answer describes learning in the past, teach should be changed to taught. After taught, use the infinitive structure taught me to be polite. Whenever I talked keeps the time reference consistently in the past.

× Remember your voice is the most important thing that you can attract the people.

✓ I remember that my voice is the most important thing that can attract people.

The definite article the is unnecessary before people when people is used in a general sense. The relative clause should have your voice as its subject: something that can attract people, not something that you can attract.

× Yes, I think polite is very important because our voice is the main things who can attract people and our work is to polite every people equally and don't miss up with anyone because we don't know whenever they are they are healthy.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because our voice is the main thing that can attract people. We should treat everyone equally and not argue with anyone because we do not know whether they are healthy or not.

Being polite is the correct noun phrase for the subject. Thing must be singular after the singular subject our voice, and that is more suitable than who for a thing. Polite is an adjective, so it cannot be used as a verb; use treat everyone equally. Use whether ... or not to express two possible conditions.

× So, for example, whenever we speak as as a child, we expect our each and every member then our responsibility is to polite each and every person very simply and quickly.

✓ For example, whenever we speak, even as children, we should remember that our responsibility is to treat each and every person politely and calmly.

The original sentence contains repeated words and several clauses joined without a clear structure. Children is needed when referring to people in general. Polite is an adjective, so the adverb politely is needed to describe how we treat people. Calmly is more appropriate than quickly for describing polite behavior.

× We don't respond our anger issue.

✓ We should not respond to people angrily.

Respond is normally followed by the preposition to. Angrily is the adverb needed to describe how someone responds. Should not is suitable because the speaker is describing appropriate behavior.

× So, first of all, I should calm down myself, then I should just listen what other people saying to me, then I can answer them as a good child like a softness in my voice and I don't sout at any of them I just enjoy the cuisine.

✓ First of all, I should calm myself down. Then I should listen to what other people are saying to me. After that, I can answer them like a good child, using a soft voice. I do not shout at any of them; I just enjoy the cuisine.

With calm down, the reflexive pronoun is normally placed between the verb and the particle: calm myself down. The correction also separates the ideas into complete sentences so that each action is clear.

× then I should just listen what other people saying to me

✓ Then I should listen to what other people are saying to me.

Listen requires the preposition to before its object. The present continuous form requires the auxiliary verb are before the present participle saying: other people are saying.

× then I can answer them as a good child like a softness in my voice and I don't sout at any of them I just enjoy the cuisine.

✓ Then I can answer them like a good child, using a soft voice. I do not shout at any of them; I just enjoy the cuisine.

Soft is the adjective that describes voice, whereas softness is a noun. Shout at is the correct verb-preposition combination. The original contains several independent clauses joined without suitable punctuation, so separating them improves the sentence structure.