Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰，直接说明了父母的影响，并提供了具体例子。建议补充最后一句的完整内容和结果，例如说明这些教育如何影响你现在的行为；同时在“saying thank you and please”中加入并列结构，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I mainly learned politeness from my parents. They set a good example by always saying “please” and “thank you” and treating other people with respect. They also explained why good manners were important, so I gradually learned to be considerate in my daily life.

Gợi ý: 观点明确，使用了“Firstly”和例子，内容较有逻辑。需要改正拼写和语法错误：“Plitness”应为“Politeness”，“create”应为“creates”；此外，可以把最后一句与前面的例子连接得更自然，并避免只列举行为而缺少具体结果。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps build positive relationships. For example, holding a door open or saying thank you can make other people feel valued. In addition, politeness creates a more comfortable atmosphere, especially when we are meeting strangers.

Gợi ý: 回答有明确观点，也提到了中国餐桌礼仪这一具体背景，但语法和表达不够自然。“during meals with elderly”应改为“during meals with elderly people”，“wait for the elderly eating, start first”应改为“wait for elderly people to start eating”；同时应使用“a positive atmosphere”，并避免把正式场合说得过于单一。

Ví dụ: We should be polite in formal situations, such as family meals, business meetings, and visits to elderly people. For example, in traditional Chinese meals, younger people usually wait for the elderly to start eating. These small gestures show respect and help create a pleasant atmosphere.

Gợi ý: 回答提供了具体行为和适用情境，内容较有效。需要改正平行结构：“greeting people and helping to hold the door open”；过去经历中应保持过去时，将“they are”改为“they were”；“candors”用词错误，应改为“kindness”或直接说“small acts of kindness”。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I showed politeness by greeting people and helping to hold the door open for them. I especially did this when someone was carrying heavy bags or seemed to be in a hurry. I thought these small acts of kindness showed consideration and respect.

× Plitness create a comfortable environment, especially when meeting strangers.

✓ Politeness creates a comfortable environment, especially when meeting strangers.

“Politeness”是不可数名词，作主语时看作第三人称单数，因此谓语动词应使用“creates”，不能使用“create”。另外，“Plitness”是拼写错误，应改为“Politeness”。

× I think we should be polite on formal occasions like during meals with elderly.

✓ I think we should be polite on formal occasions, such as during meals with the elderly.

“the elderly”表示“老年人这一群体”，是固定用法，需要使用定冠词“the”。“such as”也比“like”更适合用于正式举例。

× In traditional Chinese table manners, younger people should wait for the elderly eating, start first.

✓ According to traditional Chinese table manners, younger people should wait for the elderly to finish eating before starting.

“wait for somebody eating”结构不正确。应使用“wait for somebody to do something”，表示“等待某人做某事”。此外，两个动作之间需要用“before”连接，形成完整、清晰的句子结构。

× Small actions show respect and create positive atmosphere.

✓ Small actions show respect and create a positive atmosphere.

“atmosphere”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用冠词。这里表示“一个积极的氛围”，因此应使用“a positive atmosphere”。

× When I was a child I used to show my politeness by greeting people and help holding the door open for someone, especially when they are carrying heavy items or seemed in a hurry.

✓ When I was a child, I used to show my politeness by greeting people and helping to hold the door open for someone, especially when they were carrying heavy items or seemed to be in a hurry.

介词“by”后面通常接动名词。前面使用了“greeting”，所以后面的动词也应保持平行结构，改为“helping”。“helping to hold”表示“帮助扶住门”。

× When I was a child I used to show my politeness by greeting people and help holding the door open for someone, especially when they are carrying heavy items or seemed in a hurry.

✓ When I was a child, I used to show my politeness by greeting people and helping to hold the door open for someone, especially when they were carrying heavy items or seemed to be in a hurry.

整句话描述的是童年时的过去经历，因此“when they are carrying”应改为过去进行时“when they were carrying”。同时，“seemed”已经是过去式，和“were carrying”保持时态一致。

× I believe these small actions of candors could demonstrate consideration and respect for others.

✓ I believe these small acts of kindness could demonstrate consideration and respect for others.

“candor”通常是不可数名词，不能使用复数形式“candors”，而且它表示“坦率”，不符合这里“善意行为”的语境。表达“善意的行为”时，应使用固定搭配“acts of kindness”。