Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly without starting with “Yes.” Use the correct structure “learned to be polite” rather than “learnt to be polite guy,” and say “taught me how to be polite.” Add a clear linking word before the example, and use a natural situation such as receiving a gift instead of “someone who gave money to me.”

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents when I was a child. They taught me to say “please” when asking for something and “thank you” when receiving a gift. As a result, these expressions became natural habits for me.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion and explain why politeness matters in society. Replace unclear phrases such as “for our social,” “good guy,” “less peg,” and “saying priest” with accurate expressions. Use a specific example, such as showing respect to a colleague or thanking a stranger, and connect it with “because” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people build positive relationships. When we show respect and use polite expressions, others are more likely to treat us kindly in return. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” can make everyday interactions much more pleasant.

Gợi ý: The main idea is relevant, but “every time,” “it will be your nature,” and “see everyone is social” are unnatural or unclear. Explain that politeness is especially important when meeting new people, speaking to older people, or dealing with service staff. Use the phrase “make it a habit” to express your idea naturally.

Ví dụ: I think we should be polite in almost every situation, especially when meeting new people or speaking to older people. It is also important to remain polite during disagreements because respectful language can prevent conflicts. If we make politeness a habit, it becomes easier to behave well in different social situations.

Gợi ý: Use the past tense because the question asks about childhood: say “I would” or “I used to,” not “I will.” The phrases “saying as praise,” “gave bless,” and “show them” are unclear; use “say please and thank you” and “receive something.” Give one specific childhood example to make the answer effective.

Ví dụ: As a child, I used to show politeness by saying “please” when I wanted something and “thank you” when someone helped me. I also greeted adults respectfully and apologized when I made a mistake. My parents reminded me to use these expressions until they became a habit.

× Yes, I learnt to be polite guy when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I learnt to be a polite person when I was a child.

A singular countable noun such as person needs an article. Use a before polite person. Also, person is more natural and appropriate than guy in this context.

× My parents taught me about how to polite since I was young for example, I would say thank you to someone who gave money to me.

✓ My parents taught me how to be polite when I was young. For example, I would say thank you to someone who gave me money.

The structure how to polite is incomplete because polite is an adjective. Use how to be polite. Also, use a full stop before For example to separate the two sentences. The natural word order is gave me money.

× Yes, I think being polite is very important for our social.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important for our society.

Social is usually an adjective, but a noun is needed after our. Society is the correct noun in this sentence.

× People in social like someone as a good guy and polite.

✓ People in society like someone who is a good and polite person.

The original sentence has an incomplete and unnatural structure. Use who is to introduce the description of someone. Society is the correct noun, and good and polite should modify the noun person.

× For example when you give less peg to someone as saying priest, they will give less peg back to you.

✓ For example, when you show respect to someone by saying please, they will show respect to you in return.

Use the preposition by before an -ing form to explain the method: by saying please. Use to after show respect when identifying the person who receives the respect. The phrase in return is the natural expression for something given back.

× I think you should be polite every time because it will be your nature and you will keep polite when you see everyone is social.

✓ I think you should be polite all the time because it will become part of your nature, and you will remain polite whenever you meet people in society.

Keep polite is incomplete because remain polite is the appropriate verb-and-adjective structure. The clause when you see everyone is social is also not structured naturally for this meaning. Use whenever you meet people in society.

× I will show them by saying as praise and thank you when someone gave bless back to me.

✓ I showed my politeness by saying please and thank you when someone helped me.

The question asks about what you did as a child, so the answer should use the past tense. Change will show to showed. The past-tense verb helped is also used to describe the past situation.

× I will show them by saying as praise and thank you when someone gave bless back to me.

✓ I showed my politeness by saying please and thank you when someone helped me.

The phrase by saying as praise is incorrectly structured. Use by saying please and thank you to describe how you showed politeness. The expression gave bless back is not grammatically suitable here; helped me creates a complete and natural clause.