Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly by explaining who taught you politeness and how they taught you. Avoid vague and repetitive phrases such as “politeness itself” and “adults are mostly known for politeness.” Also, “I always talk to my children” does not fit the question because it refers to your current behavior, not your childhood. Use a specific example and link your ideas with words such as “because” and “for example.”

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me to greet adults, say “please” and “thank you,” and listen when other people were speaking. For example, whenever I interrupted someone, my mother reminded me to wait for my turn.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion at the beginning and explain why politeness is important. The phrase “HRS HR part for my life” is unclear, and “humble is key” should be changed to “being humble is important” or “humility is important.” Complete your example instead of stopping after “she,” and avoid unnecessary hesitation. You could mention that politeness helps people build positive relationships and avoid conflict.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps people communicate more effectively. My mother always taught me to be humble and considerate, especially when speaking to older people. As a result, I try to listen carefully and choose my words politely, even when I disagree with someone.

Gợi ý: State that people should be polite in both formal and everyday situations. The expression “in front of the important person” is unnatural; say “when speaking to important people” or “in formal situations.” Complete the reason and provide specific occasions, such as speaking with parents, teachers, colleagues, or strangers. Use a linking word such as “in addition” to connect examples.

Ví dụ: We should be polite whenever we communicate with other people, not only in formal situations. For example, we should show respect when speaking to teachers, employers, or elderly people. In addition, politeness is important in daily conversations with our parents, friends, and even strangers because it creates a friendly atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Use the past tense consistently and answer with a complete example. The correct structure is “I listened carefully to what my parents and teachers said,” not “I listened a lot what parents and teacher said.” “Respectiveness” is not natural here; use “respect” or “respectfulness.” Explain one concrete childhood behavior, such as greeting adults, helping at home, or waiting for your turn to speak.

Ví dụ: As a child, I showed politeness by listening carefully to my parents and teachers. I also greeted adults when I met them and said “please” and “thank you” when I asked for something. For example, if my teacher was speaking, I waited until she had finished before I asked a question.

× I believe it's based on communicating with adults.

✓ I believe politeness is learned through communicating with adults.

The original sentence is grammatically possible, but the pronoun it has an unclear subject. Adding politeness makes the subject clear and creates a complete, natural sentence. Make sure the subject of a sentence clearly refers to the idea you are discussing.

× Yes, definitely I believe HRS HR part for my life because my mother always told me humble is key for uh, not only young people, but also adults.

✓ Yes, definitely. I believe politeness is a huge part of my life because my mother always told me that humility is key, not only for young people but also for adults.

A singular countable noun such as part needs a determiner, so a huge part is required. The phrase humble is key uses an adjective where a noun is needed; humility is the correct noun. The conjunction that also makes the reported idea clearer. Use a noun after expressions such as my mother told me that.

× For instance, uh, she.

✓ For instance, she always reminded me to treat other people respectfully.

The original is an incomplete sentence because it contains a subject but no complete predicate. A complete sentence needs at least a subject and a verb that expresses a finished idea. Avoid ending with a subject such as she unless the sentence continues.

× I believe, umm, it's important at the, uh, daily communications with, uh, parents and friends as well.

✓ I believe it is important in daily communication with parents and friends as well.

The preposition in is used for a situation or activity, so in daily communication is correct. The phrase at daily communications is not idiomatic in this context. Use communication as an uncountable noun when referring to communication in general.

× I believe it's not just in front of the important person.

✓ I believe it is not just when we are in front of important people.

The plural noun people is used when referring to important people in general, so the definite article the is unnecessary. The revised structure also makes the meaning clearer by using when we are in front of. Use the only when referring to a specific person or group already identified.

× Basically I listened a lot what parents and teacher said to me because it shows my.

✓ Basically, I listened carefully to what my parents and teachers said to me because it showed my respect for them.

The plural subject parents and teachers requires teachers in the plural. The original also ends with an incomplete clause after my. The revised sentence completes the idea with respect for them. When two or more people are mentioned, use plural nouns.

× Basically I listened a lot what parents and teacher said to me because it shows my. Respectiveness to the people.

✓ Basically, I listened carefully to what my parents and teachers said to me because it showed my respect for them.

The verb listen is followed by the preposition to, as in listen to what someone says. Respectiveness is not the appropriate noun in this context; respect is the natural noun. The phrase to the people is also less natural here than for them. Use listen to when describing attention to someone's words.

× For example, uh, when I.

✓ For example, when I was polite to other people, I showed my respect for them.

The original is an incomplete subordinate clause. The word when introduces a clause that needs a complete subject and verb, and it must be followed by a main clause. Complete clauses introduced by when with a full idea.