Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly by explaining who taught you politeness and how they taught you. Correct the grammar in “learned to polite” by saying “learned to be polite,” and use clear vocabulary such as “respectful” and “good manners.” Avoid unclear phrases like “Blite people some want to need to respect.” Add one specific example and connect your ideas with “because” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents when I was a child. They taught me to respect older people and use good manners. For example, I was expected to say “please” and “thank you” whenever I asked for something.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion, such as “Yes, I think politeness is very important.” Then explain why it matters, using natural phrases like “show respect” and “make other people feel comfortable.” Avoid repetition and incorrect structures such as “is need to be” and “your talking person.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect for other people. It also helps us communicate more comfortably and avoid misunderstandings. For example, saying “excuse me” and listening carefully can make a conversation much more pleasant.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer by naming several occasions, such as family gatherings, formal situations, and conversations with older people. Replace “be flight” with “be polite,” and avoid unclear expressions like “we have the orders.” Use a logical structure with “for example” and explain how you should behave in those situations.

Ví dụ: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially in formal situations and family gatherings. For example, when I visit my relatives, I greet my uncles and aunts respectfully and listen while they are speaking. We should also be polite at school or work because good manners create a positive impression.

Gợi ý: Use the past tense consistently: say “I showed” and “I always used.” Answer with a complete topic sentence and explain how you behaved toward older family members. Add specific examples, such as greeting elders, saying “please” and “thank you,” or offering help.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I showed politeness by saying “please” and “thank you” to my family members. I also greeted my elders when they came to visit and listened to them without interrupting. These were simple habits, but they showed that I respected them.

× I learned to polite when I was a child.

✓ I learned to be polite when I was a child.

The verb learn is followed by to be before an adjective. Polite is an adjective, so be is required: learn to be polite.

× Blite people some want to need to respect.

✓ Polite people need to respect others.

The original sentence has an unclear and incomplete structure. Use the subject Polite people, the modal-like verb need to, and the object others to form a complete sentence.

× Yes, of course, to be polite is need to be ask a good person how to respect, how to show respect and feel respect to your talking person.

✓ Yes, of course. Being polite is important because it means respecting others, showing respect, and making other people feel respected.

The original sentence contains several incomplete verb structures. Use Being polite as the subject, is important as the main verb and adjective phrase, and parallel -ing forms: respecting, showing, and making.

× Yes, of course, to be polite is need to be ask a good person how to respect, how to show respect and feel respect to your talking person.

✓ Yes, of course. Being polite is important because it means respecting others, showing respect, and making other people feel respected.

After be in the passive voice, use the past participle form. However, ask does not fit this meaning. The natural expression is make other people feel respected.

× Yes, of course, to be polite is need to be ask a good person how to respect, how to show respect and feel respect to your talking person.

✓ Yes, of course. Being polite is important because it means respecting others, showing respect, and making other people feel respected.

The phrase feel respect to your talking person is not natural in English. Use respect others or make other people feel respected.

× When we have occasion to be flight, for example we have a family gathering or reunion for the family, we have the orders you need to talk like your uncle, aunties need to be polite for them.

✓ When we have an occasion to be polite, such as a family gathering or a family reunion, we need to talk to our uncles and aunts politely.

A singular countable noun such as occasion needs an article. Use an occasion because occasion begins with a vowel sound. Family reunion also needs a or the when referring to one specific event.

× When we have occasion to be flight, for example we have a family gathering or reunion for the family, we have the orders you need to talk like your uncle, aunties need to be polite for them.

✓ When we have an occasion to be polite, such as a family gathering or a family reunion, we need to talk to our uncles and aunts politely.

Polite is the adjective needed after be, while politely is the adverb needed to describe how we talk. Flight is not the correct word in this context.

× When we have occasion to be flight, for example we have a family gathering or reunion for the family, we have the orders you need to talk like your uncle, aunties need to be polite for them.

✓ When we have an occasion to be polite, such as a family gathering or a family reunion, we need to talk to our uncles and aunts politely.

Use talk to someone, not talk like someone, when describing communication with a person. Also, polite to them is more natural than polite for them, although politely is the best choice here.

× When we have occasion to be flight, for example we have a family gathering or reunion for the family, we have the orders you need to talk like your uncle, aunties need to be polite for them.

✓ When we have an occasion to be polite, such as a family gathering or a family reunion, we need to talk to our uncles and aunts politely.

The plural nouns uncles and aunts are needed because the answer refers to family members in general. Aunties is possible in informal English, but aunts is more standard.

× When we have occasion to be flight, for example we have a family gathering or reunion for the family, we have the orders you need to talk like your uncle, aunties need to be polite for them.

✓ When we have an occasion to be polite, such as a family gathering or a family reunion, we need to talk to our uncles and aunts politely.

The original sentence joins several incomplete ideas without a clear main clause. Use one clear structure: When..., we need to.... Use such as to introduce examples.

× I show my politeness when I was a child.

✓ I showed my politeness when I was a child.

The time expression when I was a child refers to the past, so the past-tense form showed is required instead of the present-tense form show.

× I used always please thank you In my family elders.

✓ I always used please and thank you with the elders in my family.

The adverb always normally comes before the main verb used. Placing it after used is unnatural in this sentence.

× I used always please thank you In my family elders.

✓ I always used please and thank you with the elders in my family.

The two expressions please and thank you must be joined with the conjunction and.

× I used always please thank you In my family elders.

✓ I always used please and thank you with the elders in my family.

Use with to show the people to whom you said these expressions. In my family describes which elders you mean.