Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答抓住了父母和老师教育这一核心，但有较多发音、语法和搭配问题，影响自然度和清晰度。例如， “pull light” 应为 “polite”，“such as held by other people” 应改为 “when other people helped me”，“taught me about say sorry” 应改为 “taught me to say sorry”。建议先直接说明学习来源，再用两个具体例子展开，并使用 “For example” 或 “They also taught me...” 连接。

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. They taught me to say “thank you” whenever someone helped me. They also reminded me to apologize when I made a mistake. These simple habits became part of my daily life.

Gợi ý: 观点明确，但句子结构不完整且重复明显。 “Absolutely” 后应加逗号；“my career and my study life” 可改为更自然的 “my studies and future career”；“both of the aspects is needed to be politeeness” 应改为 “politeness is important in both areas”。建议说明礼貌如何带来具体结果，例如建立良好关系、获得合作机会，而不是直接说 “grasping opportunities”。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. Being polite is very important in both my studies and my future career because it helps me build positive relationships with teachers, classmates, and colleagues. For example, people are more likely to cooperate with someone who is respectful and considerate.

Gợi ý: 回答只提到了办公室场景，内容基本相关，但缺少清晰的主题句和完整的语法结构。“when we go in the office” 应改为 “when we arrive at the office”，“which is saying” 应改为 “we should say”，且 “it is reflecting they will respect” 表达不自然。建议先概括礼貌适用于正式和日常场合，再举办公室问候的例子，并使用 “For instance” 连接。

Ví dụ: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially in formal situations. For instance, when I arrive at the office, I greet my colleagues and boss by saying “good morning.” This shows respect and helps create a friendly working environment.

Gợi ý: 回答内容与问题相关，但时态错误较明显。问题问过去的习惯，应使用 “I would say” 或 “I said”，而不是 “I will say”。“good mornings or good evenings” 应改为 “good morning or good evening”，“greet with others” 应改为 “greeted people”；最后的 “descend upon literature” 不符合语境，建议改为 “showed respect” 或 “demonstrated good manners”。

Ví dụ: As a child, I would say “good morning” or “good evening” when I greeted people. I also said “thank you” whenever someone helped me. These small gestures showed that I respected others, and adults often praised me for my good manners.

× I learned to be pull light from my teachers and parents who told me in different situations of saying thank you such as held by other people.

✓ I learned to be polite from my teachers and parents, who taught me to say “thank you” in different situations, such as when I was helped by other people.

“told me in different situations of saying”结构不正确，应改为“taught me to say”，表示“教我说”。“such as held by other people”缺少完整的主语和谓语，应改为“such as when I was helped by other people”。另外，“pull light”应为“polite”，表示“有礼貌的”。

× Besides, they also taught me about say sorry if I have a mistake.

✓ Besides, they also taught me to say sorry if I made a mistake.

“teach”后面通常使用“teach someone to do something”，所以“about say”应改为“to say”。“if I have a mistake”不符合语境，谈论童年过去发生的事情时，应使用过去时“if I made a mistake”。

× Absolutely being polite is vitally important in my career and my study life because both of the aspects is needed to be politeeness for for grasping the opportunities.

✓ Absolutely, being polite is vitally important in my career and academic life because both aspects require politeness to help me grasp opportunities.

“politeeness”是拼写和词性错误，应使用名词“politeness”。“both of the aspects is”中，“both aspects”是复数，谓语应为“are”；不过这里使用“both aspects require”表达更自然。“the opportunities”中的定冠词没有必要，因为这里是泛指机会，应使用“opportunities”。“for for”是重复错误，改为“to help me grasp”后句子结构更清楚。

× Initially when we go in the office which is saying good morning or say hello to my colleague and boss it is reflecting they will respect and have a sense of politeness to others.

✓ Initially, when we go to the office, saying “good morning” or “hello” to our colleagues and bosses shows that we respect others and have a sense of politeness.

“go in the office”应改为“go to the office”，表示“去办公室”。“my colleague and boss”应改为复数“our colleagues and bosses”，因为句子主语是“we”。原句缺少清晰的主句结构；“saying ... shows that ...”可以作为完整主语，后面的谓语“shows”与单数主语保持一致。“say hello”与“saying good morning”应保持平行结构，所以统一使用动名词形式。

× I will say good mornings or good evenings when I greet with others.

✓ I would say “good morning” or “good evening” when I greeted others.

问题描述的是童年时期的习惯，因此“I will say”应改为过去习惯用法“I would say”。问候语通常说“good morning”和“good evening”，不使用复数形式。“greet with others”中的“with”多余，应改为“greeted others”。

× Besides I will say thank you when people helped me, both of them reflecting descend upon literature toward others, which gained a lot of respect.

✓ Besides, I would say “thank you” when people helped me. These actions showed respect for others and earned me a lot of respect.

“I will say”应改为“I would say”，因为这是对童年习惯的回忆。“both of them”指代不清，而且后面的“reflecting”不能独立作谓语，因此改为“These actions showed”。“descend upon literature toward others”不能表达“对他人表示尊重”，应改为“showed respect for others”。“which gained”指代不清，拆成两个句子后结构更加准确、清楚。