Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response more fluent and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., “learned to be polite”), and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mostly from my parents. For example, they role‑modeled saying “please” and “thank you” at the dinner table, so I copied their behavior. Also, my teachers at school reinforced polite habits by praising me when I used polite language.

Gợi ý: Make your opinion clear and give a coherent reason. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “reflect”) and linking words. Avoid fragmented phrases and spelling errors; keep to one topic sentence plus one supporting sentence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it reflects the values you learned from your family. For instance, polite behaviour can create respect from others and help you build better relationships.

Gợi ý: Your idea is good—state the topic sentence clearly and use a linking word to explain. Eliminate repetition and tighten phrasing (e.g., “should be polite all the time” and “come naturally”). Add a brief example for specificity.

Ví dụ: I think we should be polite all the time, not only on special occasions, because politeness improves everyday interactions. For example, saying thank you to a cashier or holding the door for someone makes daily life smoother for everyone.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and give one specific example of behaviour. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a linked detail describing a situation and its result to make the answer more vivid.

Ví dụ: As a child, I showed politeness by always saying “please” and “thank you.” For example, when my neighbours helped me carry groceries, I thanked them and they often complimented my manners, which encouraged me to continue.

× I learned to people light mostly from my parents.

✓ I learned to be polite mostly from my parents.

The phrase 'to people light' is incorrect. The intended expression is 'to be polite.' Use the infinitive 'to be' + adjective 'polite' to describe learning a manner. Also keep 'from my parents' as the correct preposition to indicate source of learning.

× They taught me how to say thank you and please and also from school.

✓ They taught me how to say 'thank you' and 'please'; I also learned manners at school.

The original sentence incorrectly joins two ideas with 'and also from school' which lacks a proper subject and verb for the second clause. Split into two clauses and provide a verb for the school clause. Use punctuation or conjunctions to connect ideas clearly.

× Teachers reminded me to be polite every time and also

✓ Teachers reminded me to be polite all the time.

The sentence is incomplete and uses 'every time and also' redundantly. Replace with 'all the time' for natural, complete expression. Ensure sentences are complete with subject and predicate.

× In my opinion being polite is very important because this will Well your Your reflection of your parents upgrowing

✓ In my opinion, being polite is very important because it reflects how you were raised by your parents.

Multiple problems: missing comma after the introductory phrase; incorrect pronoun 'this will Well your Your reflection' and wrong word 'upgrowing'. Use 'it reflects how you were raised by your parents' to express that politeness shows upbringing. Use past passive 'were raised' to indicate upbringing.

× I think you should be polite every time, not just during occasions because being polite doesn't mean that you have to be a robot.

✓ I think you should be polite all the time, not just on special occasions, because being polite doesn't mean you have to be a robot.

Change 'every time' to 'all the time' for naturalness and 'during occasions' to 'on special occasions.' Remove redundant 'that' after 'means' (optional but more natural). Pronoun use is okay but phrasing needed correction.

× It should become it comes naturally.

✓ It should come naturally.

The original mixes two structures 'should become' and 'it comes' causing redundancy and grammatical error. Use a single correct structure: 'It should come naturally.' 'Come' is the base verb after modal 'should.'

× As I can remember I do use thank you and please when I was a child and this action was loved by people around me.

✓ As far as I can remember, I used 'thank you' and 'please' when I was a child, and people around me appreciated this behavior.

Tense inconsistency: 'do use' is present while 'when I was a child' requires past tense. Change to past 'used.' Add 'as far as I can remember' for idiomatic expression and replace 'was loved by people around me' with active 'people around me appreciated this behavior' for naturalness and correct verb choice.