Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 用更清晰和连贯的句子直接回答问题，先给出主题句说明主要学习方式，然后用一到两句具体例子支持，并减少犹豫语（如 uh）。注意语法（时态和单复数）和词汇搭配，例如 say "thank you"、"please"。

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They set an example by always saying "please" and "thank you" and by treating others respectfully, so I copied their behavior as a child.

Gợi ý: 回答要直接并给出具体原因或影响，避免重复和模糊表达。使用连词（because/so/therefore）连接观点与理由，注意语法（主谓一致、词类正确）。可以给出一两个具体例子说明重要性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps build trust and good relationships. For example, saying thank you or listening respectfully can make people feel valued and improve teamwork.

Gợi ý: 先给出概括性主题句（例如：in formal situations），然后列举1–2具体场合并解释原因。减少填充词并改进词汇搭配（e.g. "job interviews", "formal events"）。用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: We should be polite in formal situations, such as job interviews and official events. In those settings politeness shows professionalism and helps others trust you.

Gợi ý: 回答要更具体，使用正确的时态和句子结构。先用主题句概括（e.g. I used polite phrases），然后举具体例子（对谁、什么时候、如何）。避免重复并使用更自然的短语（"say thank you", "show respect"）。

Ví dụ: As a child, I often said polite phrases like "thank you" and "excuse me". I also showed respect to my teachers by listening carefully and helping when they needed assistance.

× A to tell the truth in my families, my parents always consider to be polite is a considerable things and a good value.

✓ To tell the truth, in my family my parents always consider being polite to be an important thing and a good value.

句子结构混乱：原句中短语顺序和从句连接不当，导致语义不清。建议把状语、主语和表语按英语正常顺序排列，并使用不定式或动名词作表语（consider ... to be / consider ... as ...）。另外 family 用单数，thing 用单数。简体中文建议：把副词短语置于句首或句中，主语和谓语明确；使用 “consider ... to be ...” 或 “consider ... as ...”。

× So in cause of that, my parents always set a good example for me, such as they are always saying, uh, thank you or just please, uh, so.

✓ So because of that, my parents always set a good example for me; for example, they always say "thank you" or "please."

介词短语错误和句子结构问题："in cause of" 应为 "because of" 或 "on account of"。此外，直接引语中用动词原形 "say" 更自然，且句子应改为更连贯的形式。简体中文建议：用固定搭配 "because of"，并用分号或连词连接句子，引用礼貌用语时用引号。

× Oh totally. Yeah, being polite is very considerable because it's not us.

✓ Oh, totally. Yeah, being polite is very important because it concerns us.

代词和词义使用不当：原句中 "it's not us" 与上下文逻辑不符，可能想表达 "这与我们有关" 或 "这很重要"。同时 "considerable" 用法不当，应该用 "important"。简体中文建议：注意代词指代要与上下文一致，选词时使用恰当形容词（important）。

× Not only in my culture there are polite is being a good value and but also in my family's.

✓ Not only in my culture is politeness considered a good value, but also in my family.

代词/名词和句子结构混用：原句有冗余和词序错误。使用固定结构 "Not only ... but also ..." 时主句要保持平行结构；polite 应为名词或形容词短语 "politeness"。简体中文建议：使用平行结构，名词化形容词以保持语法正确。

× My parents always told me that being polite is matters.

✓ My parents always told me that being polite matters.

冗余动词和名词形式错误："is matters" 语法错误，应直接用动词 "matters" 或用 "is important"。简体中文建议：避免在动词后重复再加名词，选择正确谓语结构。

× Oh, in my opinion, I think being a polite, especially when we are sitting in, uh, facing in a interview or official events, you know, this kind of thing, like we need to be a trusted person, so we should be polite.

✓ Oh, in my opinion, I think being polite is important, especially when we are sitting in an interview or attending official events. You know, in these situations we need to be seen as trustworthy, so we should be polite.

冠词和词形错误：不定冠词使用错误（a interview -> an interview）；"being a polite" 应为 "being polite"（形容词不需要冠词）；"official events" 前不需要复数定冠词，且短语 "be a trusted person" 更自然为 "be seen as trustworthy"。简体中文建议：注意冠词 a/an 的用法（元音音素前用 an），形容词前不加冠词，表达“被看作某种品质”用被动或短语。

× Oh, when I was a child, I always say in thank you and excuse me, like kind of those words after I'm saying my word.

✓ Oh, when I was a child, I always said "thank you" and "excuse me"—those kinds of words I would say after saying something.

时态不一致：描述过去习惯应使用过去时（always said），而不是现在时（say）。此外，表达更自然需调整短语顺序。简体中文建议：描述过去的习惯用过去时或 used to；保持时态一致。

× And also I always showing respect to my teachers or someone who had helped me a lot and I'm and I'm showing respect to other.

✓ And I always showed respect to my teachers or to anyone who had helped me a lot, and I showed respect to others.

代词及动词形式错误："showing" 需要与时态一致改为过去式 "showed"；代词 "other" 应为复数 "others"；句中重复 "I'm and I'm" 无意义应删除。简体中文建议：保持人称代词和数的一致，复数指代用 others，过去习惯用过去式。