Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more concise and directly structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example of what your parents taught (showing content and detail). Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: My parents taught me to be polite from a young age. For example, when I had an argument with a classmate, my father advised me to stay calm and choose polite words, which helped resolve the issue quickly. Because of that guidance, politeness became a habit in difficult situations.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear direct statement and one solid reason with specific detail. Avoid vague phrases and redundancy. Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘therefore’ to make the logic clear and keep to fewer than five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it builds respect and good relationships. For instance, polite behaviour helped me get positive support from teachers when I needed help, so it contributed to my academic progress.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear list of occasions and give one specific example. Avoid filler words and self-corrections. Use linking words (for example, especially) correctly and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: We should be polite in everyday social interactions and in difficult situations, for example during heated arguments. For instance, when a colleague criticises my work, responding politely helps to keep the conversation constructive and solve the problem.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer with a clear example of a polite action you took as a child. Avoid uncertainty and long negative statements. Use one or two short sentences: topic sentence plus a supporting example and a linking word to clarify the effect.

Ví dụ: As a child, I often said ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ to show politeness. For example, I always thanked my teacher after class, which made our interactions friendly and encouraged me to ask questions later.

× I learned to be polite as a child by my parents.

✓ I learned to be polite as a child from my parents.

The original sentence uses 'by my parents' which suggests passive voice agent but the intended meaning is source of learning; the correct preposition is 'from'. Use 'from' to indicate who taught you.

× They taught me that in each and every situation which is a bit tricky and difficult I need to keep my patience and think a bit logically to resolve the situation.

✓ They taught me that in every tricky or difficult situation I need to be patient and think logically to resolve the problem.

The original sentence is wordy and has awkward clause order. 'Each and every' is redundant, and 'which is a bit tricky and difficult' misplaces the relative clause. Also 'keep my patience' is non-idiomatic; use 'be patient'. Simplify and reorder to restore clarity.

× And in such a way, I learned to be a polite.

✓ And in that way, I learned to be polite.

The phrase 'a polite' incorrectly uses the indefinite article before an adjective; 'polite' here is an adjective describing behaviour and does not need an article. Also 'in such a way' can be improved to 'in that way' for naturalness.

× Being polite is the most important thing that a person should have in his life from being politeness a form of uniformity comes in a life so that it goes in a greater path of success as well, especially when you are a student and your young younger days.

✓ Being polite is one of the most important qualities a person should have in life because politeness brings harmony and can lead to greater success, especially when you are a student and in your younger days.

Multiple issues: 'most important thing' is acceptable but 'should have in his life' is gender-specific and awkward; use 'a person' and 'in life'. 'Being politeness' is incorrect (noun/adjective misuse). 'a form of uniformity comes in a life' is ungrammatical; replace with 'politeness brings harmony'. 'young younger days' is redundant; use 'younger days' or 'your youth'. Edit sentence for grammatical word forms and clarity.

× Well I mean not really I can't say but in the difficult situations like in the relationship issues or career perspective or during an heated argument. we should be polite, especially the younger children.

✓ Well, I mean I can't say exactly, but we should be polite in difficult situations, such as relationship problems, career matters, or during a heated argument, especially with younger children.

Original has sentence fragments and awkward phrases: 'not really I can't say' and misplaced period before 'we'. 'relationship issues or career perspective' is incorrect; use 'relationship problems' and 'career matters'. 'especially the younger children' needs 'with' to indicate who we should be polite to. Reorder to form a single coherent sentence.

× I mean they are the one who are who are like the rebellious in their early days of life.

✓ I mean they are the ones who are rebellious in their early years.

Problems: 'the one' should be plural 'the ones' to match 'they' (pronoun number agreement). Duplicate 'who are who are' is an error. 'the rebellious' incorrectly uses article with adjective; use 'rebellious' as adjective. 'early days of life' is wordy; 'early years' is natural.

× So in these all that

✓ So in all these situations, we should be patient and polite.

The original is a sentence fragment and unclear. Complete the thought by specifying what should happen 'in all these situations' and provide a verb phrase to finish the sentence.

× I guess I haven't done any such things to show my politeness to someone I mean except my parents but whensoever I just try to show my politeness they know from my behavior that I am not polite, I am so anxious towards whatsoever I want to achieve.

✓ I guess I didn't do anything special to show politeness to anyone except my parents, but whenever I tried to be polite they could tell from my behavior that I was anxious about what I wanted to achieve.

Tense and aspect errors: 'haven't done any such things' mixes present perfect with a past narrative; use simple past 'didn't do' for past actions. 'whensoever I just try' has inconsistent tense; change to 'whenever I tried'. 'they know' should be past 'they could tell' to match timeline. 'I am so anxious towards whatsoever I want to achieve' is awkward; use 'I was anxious about what I wanted to achieve.'

× So I really never tried to show

✓ So I really never tried to show it.

Original is an incomplete sentence (sentence fragment) missing an object. Add 'it' to complete the idea or rephrase the clause. The tense 'never tried' is acceptable when completed.