Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetitions and small errors (e.g., "he was he always was"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents, especially my father, because he was a calm and respectful role model. For example, he always greeted neighbors politely and reminded me to say "please" and "thank you," which I copied as a child.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: use singular/plural correctly and correct word choice ("people" not "place"). Start with a direct opinion, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors like "because" or "for example." Keep to at most 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps you build friendships and makes others more willing to cooperate. For example, polite people often get better job opportunities and support from colleagues.

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid vague phrases like "universal view of Arctine." Give a clear statement and one or two concrete occasions (e.g., work, family, public places) with linking words such as "especially" or "for instance."

Ví dụ: We should be polite in almost every situation, especially in public places and at work. For instance, speaking calmly on public transport and being respectful to colleagues helps avoid conflicts and creates a positive atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Be specific and correct sentence structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence about what you did, then give one or two concrete examples. Fix phrases like "give your bust place" to "give up your seat." Keep answers within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: As a child, I showed politeness by respecting elders and helping at home. For example, I would give up my seat on the bus for older people and say "thank you" and "please" when talking to adults.

× I guess being polite that is something that I inherited from my parents, especially from my father.

✓ I guess being polite is something that I inherited from my parents, especially from my father.

The phrase 'that is' is unnecessary and awkward here. Remove it to make the sentence natural: 'being polite is something that I inherited...' or simply 'being polite is something I inherited...'. Use 'that' only when needed to introduce a relative clause; here it interrupts the main clause. Suggestion: Say 'I guess being polite is something I inherited from my parents.'

× Being polite is his main feature so he was he always was a nice role model for me.

✓ Being polite is his main characteristic, so he has always been a nice role model for me.

Pronoun and verb sequence is incorrect: 'he was he always was' is repetitive and ungrammatical. Also 'main feature' is better as 'main characteristic'. Use present perfect 'has always been' to show a continuing state up to the present. Add a comma before 'so' when connecting clauses. Suggestion: Use 'has always been' for ongoing traits.

× Absolutely being polite is a very important feature that human can have.

✓ Absolutely, being polite is a very important quality that humans can have.

Use a noun phrase 'quality' instead of 'feature' for a human trait. 'Human' must be plural 'humans' when speaking generally. Add a comma after 'Absolutely' for natural speech rhythm. Ensure subject-verb agreement when using countable nouns. Suggestion: Use 'humans' or 'people' for general statements.

× It can help in lots of life situations for example gaining friends and and influence others.

✓ It can help in many life situations, for example gaining friends and influencing others.

'Lots of' is acceptable in speech but 'many' is more formal; add a comma before 'for example'. 'and and' is a duplication error. 'Influence others' should be the -ing form 'influencing' to parallel 'gaining'. Parallel structure requires both gerunds. Suggestion: Keep parallel gerund forms: 'gaining... and influencing...'. Remove duplicate words.

× Nobody likes to place in someone who is rude.

✓ Nobody likes to be around someone who is rude.

The original sentence is ungrammatical: 'likes to place in someone' makes no sense. Likely intended meaning is 'be around' or 'be in the presence of'. Use a correct verb phrase 'be around' to convey the idea. Maintain simple present tense for general truths. Suggestion: Use clear verbs like 'be around' or 'be with'.

× I guess there is no situation where we can act rude or even shout for the other people.

✓ I guess there is no situation where we should act rudely or even shout at other people.

Use modal 'should' to express advice rather than 'can'. 'Act rude' should be 'act rudely' because 'rudely' is an adverb modifying 'act'. Preposition 'shout for' is incorrect; use 'shout at' or 'shout to' depending on meaning—here 'shout at' is appropriate. 'The other people' is wrong; use 'other people' without the definite article. Suggestion: Use adverbs after 'act' and correct prepositions: 'shout at'.

× Being polite is a universal view of Arctine where you'll not see any disadvantage disadvantages

✓ Being polite is a universal value in society where you will not see many disadvantages.

'View' should be 'value' for the intended meaning. 'Arctine' appears to be a misspelling or wrong word; replace with 'society' or 'anywhere' depending on intent. 'You'll not see' is informal; 'you will not see' is fine, and 'disadvantage disadvantages' duplicates words—use singular or plural once: 'many disadvantages' or 'any disadvantage'. Suggestion: Use 'value' and 'society' or 'anywhere' and avoid duplication.

× When you are a child there are numbers of ways how you can show your politeness.

✓ When you are a child, there are a number of ways you can show your politeness.

Use 'a number of' rather than 'numbers of' for countable ways. The phrase 'ways how you can' is unidiomatic; 'ways you can' is correct. Add a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: Say 'a number of ways you can'.

× Most of the time you show it to the elders by being respectful to them even I don't know give your bust place when they need

✓ Most of the time you show it to elders by being respectful to them, such as giving up your seat when they need it.

Remove 'the' before 'elders' when speaking generally. The clause 'even I don't know' is filler and unclear; replace with an example phrase 'such as'. 'Give your bust place' is garbled—likely intended 'give up your seat'. Add 'it' after 'need' to complete the phrase. Use commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: Provide clear examples and idiomatic phrases like 'give up your seat' and avoid filler like 'I don't know'.