Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 总体表达清楚且流畅，但有重复和少量语法/用词问题。建议：1) 开头用一句明确的主题句（直接回答“How”）。2) 精简内容，避免重复，如“significant”重复出现。3) 修正小语法错误（family value 应为 family values, set up → set）。4) 使用连接词使句子更自然（e.g. “because”, “so”）。练习时控制在3-4句内。

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They always told me to say “please”, “thank you” and “goodbye” and set a good example by being polite themselves. Because politeness is one of our family values, it became second nature to me.

Gợi ý: 内容有理据，但用词与句法不够准确。建议：1) 用更自然的词汇（e.g. important, respectful, healthy relationships）。2) 避免冗长句，分两句表达观点和原因。3) 使用连接词改进逻辑（e.g. “because”, “so”）。4) 注意形容词/名词搭配（well liked → well-liked）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect for others and helps to build healthy relationships. As a result, social interactions become smoother, and polite people are often better liked and trusted.

Gợi ý: 回答直接但有重复，且部分表达不自然。建议：1) 明确列举场合（e.g. formal events, interviews, with elders）。2) 简化并避免“first impression”重复，用短句阐述原因。3) 改进搭配（impressive start → a good first impression）。

Ví dụ: We should be polite in formal situations such as interviews, at work, or when meeting elders and teachers for the first time. Politeness helps make a good first impression, which often influences how people treat you later.

Gợi ý: 回答具体但语法和表达需要改进。建议：1) 使用过去时描述童年行为（e.g. I always said → I always said; remember → remembered）。2) 改进词汇搭配（saying that word → using those phrases）。3) 精简并用连接词提高连贯性。

Ví dụ: As a child, I always said “please”, “thank you” and “goodbye” to teachers and classmates because my parents emphasized using those phrases. I remembered their advice and tried to use polite language in social situations.

× And actually politeness is a very significant part of my family value, so it's the second nature to me.

✓ And actually politeness is a very significant part of my family values, so it's second nature to me.

原句中“family value”應為可數複數形式“family values”，因為家庭的價值觀通常有多個方面；另外慣用表達是“second nature”而不是“the second nature”。建議記住名詞複數用法以及固定搭配短語。

× Actually being polite is very significant and politeness can show your respect for others and build up a health free relationship with others at the first time.

✓ Actually being polite is very important, and politeness can show your respect for others and build up a healthy, free relationship with others at first.

原句使用了“significant”但語境下更常用“important”，屬於形容詞選擇錯誤；“health free”是錯誤的形容詞短語，應為“healthy, free”表示“健康且自由的”；“at the first time”不地道，應用“at first”表示“起初/最初”。建議學習常用形容詞搭配及固定時間短語。

× And also politeness can make the social interaction much smoother and pleasant and I think the polite person may be more well liked and trusted.

✓ Also, politeness can make social interactions much smoother and more pleasant, and I think polite people may be more well-liked and trusted.

原句中“the social interaction”不需定冠詞且應為複數“social interactions”；“much smoother and pleasant”在並列形容詞時要平行，可改為“much smoother and more pleasant”；“the polite person”在泛指時用複數“polite people”；“well liked”作形容詞時應連字符“well-liked”。建議注意形容詞並列的平行結構、冠詞用法和複數泛指用法。

× I think we should be polite especially when we meet some adults or teachers at the first time because it links to the first impression and the first impression matters a lot in our daily lives.

✓ I think we should be polite, especially when we meet adults or teachers for the first time, because it relates to first impressions and first impressions matter a lot in our daily lives.

原句中“meet some adults or teachers”中的“some”在此處多餘，改為“meet adults or teachers”；“at the first time”應為“for the first time”；“links to the first impression”更自然的表達是“relates to first impressions”，且“first impression”在泛指時通常用複數“first impressions”。建議注意介詞短語和複數泛指的正確表達。

× I always said thank you, please or goodbye to the adult teachers or my classmates and my parents often emphasized the importance of saying that word when we're social with people.

✓ I always said "thank you," "please," or "goodbye" to my teachers, classmates, and adults, and my parents often emphasized the importance of saying those words when we were social with people.

句中時態和代詞需一致：原句中使用過去時“said”但後半用現在式“we're”，應改為過去時“we were”；“adult teachers or my classmates”語序不自然，建議列舉時用“my teachers, classmates, and adults”；“that word”應改為複數“those words”，因為有多個詞（thank you, please, goodbye）。建議注意時態一致、並列名詞順序和代詞單複數一致。