Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答内容能传达意思，但存在多处词汇和表达错误，影响自然与准确性。建议： 1) 主题句要明确直接，例如用“I learned manners from my parents.” 2) 修正常见词汇错误（place→please，too proud→kind/to be polite），并用简洁句子避免冗长。 3) 增加一到两个具体细节，用连接词（for example, for instance, so）使结构连贯。

Ví dụ: I learned manners from my parents. They always reminded me to say "please" and "thank you" and showed polite behavior themselves, so I copied them. For example, my mother would always greet our neighbors warmly, which taught me how to behave around others.

Gợi ý: 回答有意图表达重要性，但词汇和句子混淆严重，导致信息不清楚。建议： 1) 使用清晰的主题句直接回答“Yes”并说明原因（e.g. "Yes, it is important because..."). 2) 避免把无关或错误的词汇混入（proud→politeness; nest in trees→good reputation/relationships; internation→interaction）。 3) 提供一两个具体例子并用连接词（for example, therefore）使论证连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps build good relationships with others. For example, saying "please" and "thank you" creates a positive atmosphere and can make teamwork at work much smoother.

Gợi ý: 回答表达模糊且词汇使用错误较多。建议： 1) 用简单直接句子列举场合（in public, at work, with elders, during interviews）。 2) 解释原因时用连词（because, so）并用准确词汇（creates a good impression, facilitates communication）。 3) 给出一两个具体情境例子以增强说服力。

Ví dụ: We should be polite in public places, at work, and when we meet elders or strangers because politeness creates a good impression and makes communication smoother. For example, being polite during a job interview can leave the employer with a positive impression.

Gợi ý: 回答意图明确但用词和语法错误较多，影响表达自然性。建议： 1) 用正确短语描述行为（e.g. "I always said 'please' and 'thank you'"）。 2) 避免拼写与词性错误（prejudice, critics→wrong; use 'politeness', 'please'）。 3) 可以补充一两个具体小故事或情境，使用连接词使叙述连贯。

Ví dụ: As a child, I showed politeness by always saying "please" when asking for something and "thank you" afterwards. For example, I would say "Please may I have some water?" and then thank my parents when they gave it to me.

× When I was a child my parents taught me to show good manners.

✓ When I was a child, my parents taught me to show good manners.

句子缺少必要的标点（逗号），造成阅读不顺。改为在时间状语后加逗号，使句子结构更清晰。

× They reminded me to say thank you and place and they set an example by being too proud to others.

✓ They reminded me to say "thank you" and "please", and they set an example by being polite to others.

原句中单词错误（place → please）且短语 being too proud to others 用法错误且意思相反（"too proud" 表示傲慢）。应使用形容词 polite 描述有礼貌的行为。连接处缺少逗号和适当的连词。建议注意词汇拼写和搭配。

× So I learned by watching them.

✓ So, I learned by watching them.

在句首连接词后加逗号，使语流更自然；句子本身语法正确，仅需标点增强可读性。

× Yes, I think being proud is very important because it helps build a good nest in trees and should live better to others.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps build good relationships and makes it easier to get along with others.

原句把 "polite" 写成 "proud"，词义完全不符；"build a good nest in trees" 是不合适的比喻，应改为 "build good relationships"。此外 "should live better to others" 结构错误，需改为"makes it easier to get along with others"。建议注意词汇选择与习惯表达。

× For example, same place and thank you can make everyday internation more present and even help you in the workplace when cooperating with colleagues.

✓ For example, saying "please" and "thank you" can make everyday interactions more pleasant and even help you in the workplace when cooperating with colleagues.

原句中多处词汇错误："same place" 应为 "saying 'please'"，"everyday internation" 应为 "everyday interactions"，"more present" 应为 "more pleasant"。句子需要正确短语和拼写来表达礼貌用语能改善日常交流。

× I think we should be preparing in public places and ever work because pretenders helps create a good impression and makes communication smoother.

✓ I think we should be polite in public places and at work because politeness helps create a good impression and makes communication smoother.

原句中 many 错误："be preparing" 用法不当，应为 "be polite"；"ever work" 应为 "at work"；"pretenders" 错误词，应为 "politeness" 或 "being polite"；此外动词单复数需与主语一致（politeness helps）。建议注意固定搭配（in public places, at work）和词形选择。

× I showed my prejudice by always saying critics and thank you to my parents and teachers when I was a child.

✓ I showed my politeness by always saying "please" and "thank you" to my parents and teachers when I was a child.

原句中词汇使用完全错误："prejudice"（偏见）与语境不符，应为 "politeness"（礼貌）；"critics" 也不对，应为 "please"。需要使用正确的礼貌用语词汇。

× For example, I I would say please were asking something and thank you afterwards.

✓ For example, I would say "please" when asking for something and "thank you" afterwards.

原句有重复 "I I"，且从句结构和介词用法错误（"were asking something" 不对）。改为 "when asking for something" 是正确的时间状语从句结构。建议注意避免重复并使用正确的从句形式和介词搭配。