Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并且用更自然的表达，避免模糊或重复。可以用一到两句概括学习来源，随后给出具体例子（例如父母教导的方式）。注意语法（如省略不必要的短语）和流畅度。

Ví dụ: I learned manners mainly from my parents. For instance, they taught me to say “please” and “thank you” and to greet guests politely, and they corrected me gently when I made mistakes.

Gợi ý: 答案观点明确，但表达可以更精炼并加入连接词使逻辑更顺。可以给出理由说明为什么重要，并提供一两个具体情境。注意词汇搭配（e.g. "parents" 而非 "parent"）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships. For example, when speaking to teachers or older people, polite language creates a positive impression and reduces misunderstandings.

Gợi ý: 回答太啰嗦且句子结构不清晰。应先给出总体观点，然后用连接词引出具体场景并说明做法。注意句子完整性和礼貌用语的正确位置。

Ví dụ: There are many situations when politeness is necessary, such as when asking for help. For example, you can say “Could you help me, please?” and finish with “Thank you very much” to show appreciation.

Gợi ý: 内容重复且表达混乱（例如“your brand is still developing”不恰当）。应用简洁句子描述具体行为，并给出一两个具体例子。避免使用不相关或模糊的比喻。

Ví dụ: As a child, I showed politeness by saying “thank you” and “excuse me,” and by offering help to family members. For example, I would help set the table and say thank you when someone gave me a gift.

× As how people said, the parents are there to demonstrate how to be a polite person to their kids.

✓ As people say, parents are there to demonstrate how to be polite to their children.

原句中“As how people said”结构不自然，多余的“how”不正确；此外“the parents are there to demonstrate how to be a polite person to their kids”中“the parents”与泛指含义不匹配，且“a polite person to their kids”措辞笨拙。改为“As people say, parents are there to demonstrate how to be polite to their children.” 更符合英语习惯。建议在类似表达中使用固定搭配“As people say”或“As is often said”，并用“children”或“kids”之一保持一致。

× Therefore I learned that from my parents as well.

✓ Therefore I learned that from my parents as well.

句子本身语法正确且主谓一致，保留原句。此处不需要修改。解释：主语“I”与谓语“learned”时态匹配，为过去式，符合上下文。

× Personally, I think being polite is very important as a person, especially when you're talking to someone who is older or more experienced than you.

✓ Personally, I think being polite is very important, especially when you are talking to someone who is older or more experienced than you.

原句“as a person”多余且冗长，影响流畅性；并无时态错误，但去掉多余部分使句子更自然。建议在表达观点时避免不必要的短语以提高清晰度。

× For example, your teacher, your parent and people who you want to respect.

✓ For example, your teacher, your parents, and people whom you want to respect.

原句中“your parent”应为复数“your parents”以与“teacher”并列；“people who you want to respect”在形式上可以接受，但更正式的宾格关系应使用“whom”。此外在并列项之间添加逗号更清晰。建议注意名词单复数一致并在正式场合使用宾格“whom”。

× I think there are so many occasions that you could be a polite person to someone else, but in here I will just simply illustrate one common occasion is where you're asking for help.

✓ I think there are many occasions when you could be polite to someone else, but here I will simply illustrate one common occasion: asking for help.

原句结构混乱，“occasions that you could be a polite person to someone else”冗长且“in here”用法不当；“illustrate one common occasion is where you're asking for help”从句结构错误。改为更简洁的结构并用“when”引导时间状语，从句改成名词短语“asking for help”。建议学习使用“when”引导时间状语从句，避免在一句话中混合过多结构。

× When you're asking for help, you simply say could you please end with a thank you in the end to show your appreciation to someone who helped you.

✓ When you're asking for help, you should simply say “Could you please…?” and end with a thank you to show your appreciation to someone who helped you.

原句中“you simply say could you please end with a thank you in the end”语序和礼貌用语不当，缺少情境中的完整句式。改为使用情态动词“should”给出建议，并示范礼貌请求的句式“Could you please…?”，最后用“end with a thank you”表达结尾致谢。建议在给出建议时使用情态动词并用引号示例句子以更清晰地展示说法。

× I think as a kid the easiest way for you to show your politeness is to say thank you and I think being grateful and being thankful to someone else who helped you it's very important as a child because your brand is still developing and knowing that it's a good politeness for you.

✓ I think as a kid the easiest way to show politeness is to say "thank you." Being grateful to someone who helped you is very important when you are a child because your character is still developing, and learning good manners is beneficial.

原句过长且结构混乱，重复使用“I think”和“being grateful and being thankful”冗余；“your brand is still developing”用词严重不当，应为“your character/personality is still developing”或“you are still developing”。此外“knowing that it's a good politeness for you”表达不自然。建议拆分长句，去掉重复项，使用正确词汇如“character/personality”或“manners”，并保持句子简洁。