Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答えは直接質問に応えていますが、具体性と構造が不足しています。最初に明確な主文（例：I learned politeness mainly at school）を置き、その後で具体的な方法（例：role-play, teacher reminders）や一つか二つの短い具体例を付け加えてください。また「many times teachers said to us」は曖昧なので、教師が何を言ったか（例：say “please” and “thank you”）を明示すると良いです。語数は3〜5文に収め、リンク表現（for example, also）を使って自然につなげてください。

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly at kindergarten and elementary school. For example, teachers often reminded us to say “please” and “thank you,” and we practised polite phrases during role-play activities. Also, interacting with classmates taught me how to take turns and listen to others.

Gợi ý: 主張は明確ですが表現が断片的で不自然な言い回し（"We have to. MMM, think before behave."）があります。より自然な英語に直し、理由を具体的に2点程度示してください（例：build relationships, avoid conflicts）。接続語（for example, because）を使い、文法的に正しい形（think before we act）に直してください。語数は2〜4文にまとめましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps people get along and avoid unnecessary conflicts. For example, being considerate shows respect and makes communication smoother, so thinking before we act is crucial.

Gợi ý: 回答が断片的で完成しておらず、流暢さと一貫性に欠けます。まず簡潔な主文で答え（"We should be polite on almost every occasion, especially when meeting someone for the first time."）を述べ、その理由を一つか二つ挙げてください（first impressions, showing respect）。接続詞（especially, because）を用いて論理的に繋げ、不要な詰まりや単語割れを避けましょう。

Ví dụ: We should be polite on almost every occasion, especially when meeting someone for the first time, because first impressions matter. Showing good manners at the start helps build trust and makes future interactions more comfortable.

Gợi ý: 内容は具体的で良いですが時制が混在しています（過去の質問に現在形で答えている）。過去の習慣を記述するなら過去形（I used to try to bow）を使い、理由や頻度（often, sometimes）を付け加えるとより豊かになります。また、リンク表現（also, in addition）を使って文を滑らかに繋げてください。

Ví dụ: As a child, I used to bow when thanking someone to show respect. I also bowed when apologising, and my parents encouraged me to do this often so I could develop polite habits.

× Well, in kindergarten or in elementary school, we had many chances to interact with other students and many times teachers said to us.

✓ Well, in kindergarten and elementary school, we had many chances to interact with other students, and many times teachers talked to us.

The original sentence uses 'said to us' which is unnatural; the correct collocation is 'talked to us' or 'said' with a direct object. Also 'in kindergarten or in elementary school' is wordy; use 'in kindergarten and elementary school' for clarity. Keep tense simple past to match 'we had'. Suggestion: Use natural verb collocations (e.g., 'talked to us', 'told us') and simplify repeated prepositions.

× Yes, if we don't think about others feelings we will not be able to get along with each other.

✓ Yes, if we don't think about others' feelings, we will not be able to get along with each other.

Possessive for plural noun 'others' requires an apostrophe: others' feelings. Also add a comma after the conditional clause for readability. Suggestion: Use possessive form 'others'' for ownership and punctuate conditional clauses.

× We have to. MMM, think before behave.

✓ We have to... mm, think before we behave.

Original is fragmented and missing a subject before 'behave.' Add 'we' to form a complete clause: 'think before we behave.' Ellipsis or hesitation can be shown with '...' and lowercase 'mm' for hesitation. Suggestion: Ensure each clause has a subject and verb; include pronouns when implied.

× Well, of course in any occasion, but the most important one I think is. An. When we meet. Another person for the first time because it is the starting time of the.

✓ Well, of course on any occasion, but I think the most important is when we meet another person for the first time because it is the beginning of a relationship.

Multiple fragments and incorrect preposition 'in any occasion' should be 'on any occasion.' Remove unnecessary pauses, combine fragments into one sentence, and replace vague ending 'the starting time of the.' with 'the beginning of a relationship' to complete the idea. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions ('on any occasion'), avoid sentence fragments, and complete comparative or explanatory phrases.

× Well, I consciously try to bow when I thank someone.

✓ Well, I consciously tried to bow when I thanked someone.

The question asks about childhood (past), so verbs should be in the past tense: 'tried' and 'thanked.' Maintain consistent past tense throughout the response. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the time frame being discussed.

× And not only when I thanked someone, but also when I apologized.

✓ And not only when I thanked someone, but also when I apologized.

This sentence is grammatically correct after changing the first clause to past tense; no change needed other than ensuring tense consistency with the previous sentence. Suggestion: Keep past tense consistent for actions that occurred in childhood.