Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 语法和表达需要改进，同时应更直接有条理地回答问题。注意时态（过去式）和动词形式（taught, polite），避免拼写错误并用连接词组织句子。例如先给出主题句说明谁教你，然后具体举例说明她做了哪些事来教你（如示范、要求你说请和谢谢），最后可简短总结。答案控制在最多5句。

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite from my grandmother. She taught me by example and by reminding me to say “please” and “thank you” to others. For example, she would praise me when I helped my grandparents or used polite words with friends. This made politeness a habit for me.

Gợi ý: 表达有逻辑但句子结构混乱，存在词汇和发音拼写错误（plate → polite）。应使用简洁明确的主题句，然后用一到两句具体原因支持观点，使用连接词（because, for example）。避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important. Because online communication can be unfriendly, good manners help maintain respect and avoid conflicts. For example, saying thank you or apologizing can calm tense conversations.

Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但句子需更简练并修正语法（use ‘it is’ 或重构句子）。建议先给出直接回答，然后举两个具体场景并简短解释为何重要，使用连接词（especially, for example）。注意避免冗余。

Ví dụ: We should be polite on most occasions, especially when meeting someone for the first time and during formal events. For example, polite behavior creates a good impression at job interviews and helps smooth first meetings.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体但有冗余和语法不准确（almost every time I would → I almost always; they → she/teachers）。应用更自然的表达，并控制句子长度。先给主题句，再以一两个具体例子支持，使用连接词（for example, when）。

Ví dụ: As a child, I showed politeness by always saying “please” and “thank you.” For example, I thanked my teacher when she helped me put on my coat or tied my shoes, and I used polite words with classmates when asking for help.

× my grandma would taught me to be pilot to the elder people for example She asked me to say please and thank you to all my friends and

✓ my grandma would teach me to be polite to the elderly; for example, she asked me to say "please" and "thank you" to everyone.

问题类型：应为动词原形或不定式形式（属于 8/9 类动词形式错误与 27 主谓一致相关）。原句中使用了“would taught”应为“would teach”或直接过去时“taught”。另外“pilot”拼写错误，应为“polite”；“elder people”用法不合适，通常用“the elderly”或“elderly people”；句子连接混乱，应拆分并小写衔接词。建议：在使用情态动词或“would”后接动词原形；注意常见单词拼写；用恰当的名词短语，如“the elderly”。

× most people on the internet they are very they're not very friendly to others so that plate is more important in these days.

✓ Most people on the internet are not very friendly to others, so being polite is more important these days.

问题类型：代词冗余与句子结构错误（属于 12 和 26）。原句中“most people ... they are”出现主语重复，且“they're not very friendly”前后结构混乱；“that plate”明显拼写错误，应为“being polite”；“in these days”应为“these days”。建议：避免主语重复，使用正确的词汇并简化句子结构，保持时态一致。

× in every occasion we should be polite to others especially when we first meet someone or in some formal occasions is even more important in this aspect.

✓ On every occasion we should be polite to others, especially when we first meet someone; in some formal occasions it is even more important.

问题类型：介词使用及句子结构错误（属于 11 和 26）。原句用“in every occasion”不如“on every occasion”或“in every situation”；句子后半部分缺少主语和谓语，造成断句问题，应补全为“it is even more important”。建议：注意介词搭配（on occasion, in situation），保持完整句子结构并用连接词或分号分开并列部分。

× when they asked me to do something or helped me with my personal cleaning or something like that.

✓ when they asked me to do something or helped me with my personal care or similar tasks.

问题类型：冠词与词汇用法错误（属于 22 和 13）。原句“my personal cleaning”不地道，通常说“personal care”或“personal hygiene”；此处上下文应使用更自然的表达。建议：用常见搭配“personal care”或“personal hygiene”，并保持并列结构的一致性。

× She asked me to say please and thank you to all my friends and

✓ She asked me to say "please" and "thank you" to all my friends.

问题类型：第三人称单数与时态一致性（属于 2 和 6）。虽然原句大体可理解，但句尾残缺导致不完整。修正为完整句并保留过去时“asked”。建议：确保句子完成，保持动词时态一致并写出完整意思。