Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答えは伝わりますが、構成が曖昧で発音や語順のミスがあり、繰り返しや曖昧な語句（"get get", "like" の多用、疑問調の語尾）が目立ちます。改善点は次の通りです：1) まず主題文で直接答える（例: "I learned manners from my parents and grandparents.") 2) その後で具体例や理由を1〜2文で付ける（誰から何を学んだか、どんな行動を学んだか）3) 繋ぎ言葉（"because", "for example", "so"）を使って論理を明確にする 4) 同じ語を繰り返さない。練習では短くても正確な文を作ることを意識してください。

Ví dụ: I learned manners mainly from my parents and grandparents. For example, my mother taught me to say "please" and "thank you," and my grandfather showed me how to greet guests politely. Because they set a good example, I naturally picked up those habits.

Gợi ý: 答えは肯定していますが、文法と表現の誤り（"the relationship is more smoother and easier", "being ploy"）や冗長な言い回しが見られます。改善のポイント：1) トピック文で簡潔に答える（"Yes, it's very important."）2) 理由は1文で明確に述べる（"because"でつなぐ）3) 比較級の使い方に注意し、不要な語を省く（"smoother and easier"は冗長なので片方にする）4) 結論で締める。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps relationships run more smoothly. For example, polite behaviour makes people feel respected and more willing to cooperate.

Gợi ý: 全体として意図は明確ですが、表現がくどく、文法的な不正確さ（"a get client", 冗長な表現）が目立ちます。改善点：1) 質問に対して複数の場面を挙げる場合は列挙し、繋ぎ語（"for example", "also", "in personal life"）で整える 2) 具体的な理由や短い例を添える 3) 冗長な語句を削る。

Ví dụ: We should be polite in business settings and in everyday life. For example, in business politeness helps you gain clients and build professional relationships, while in daily life it makes interactions with neighbours and friends more pleasant.

Gợi ý: 理由は伝わりますが、時制や語形、語彙の誤り（"show"→"showed", "parteness"誤用）と自己中心的な説明が目立ちます。改善点：1) 過去の行動なので過去形を使う（"I showed", "I wanted"）2) 具体的な行動例を一つ示す（"I said 'please' and 'thank you'", "I greeted guests"）3) 理由を簡潔に述べ、簡単な結論で締める。

Ví dụ: As a child, I showed politeness by saying "please" and "thank you" and greeting guests. I wanted positive attention from adults, so those polite habits helped me get praise and rewards.

× I think I learned from my parents also like my grandmother or grandfather and I think being polite is important to get get better relationship with them or relationship with strangers too?

✓ I think I learned from my parents and also from my grandmother and grandfather, and I think being polite is important to have better relationships with them and with strangers.

Subject and object pronouns and conjunctions were used incorrectly or omitted; 'from my parents also like my grandmother or grandfather' is ungrammatical — use 'and also from my grandmother and grandfather'. 'get get' is a repetition. Use plural 'relationships' when speaking generally; add 'with' before 'strangers'. Suggestion: connect ideas with 'and' or commas, include necessary prepositions, avoid word repetition.

× Yes, I think it's really important to be polite to strangers or the people that you hang out with because being polite is the relationship is more smoother and easier and being ploy

✓ Yes, I think it's really important to be polite to strangers and to the people you hang out with because being polite makes relationships smoother and easier.

Incorrect adjective/adverb and redundant structure: 'the relationship is more smoother' is wrong — 'smoother' already comparative; remove 'more'. 'Being polite is the relationship' is ungrammatical; use 'being polite makes relationships...'. 'being ploy' is likely a typo. Suggestion: use 'makes relationships smoother', avoid double comparatives and incomplete words.

× It's definitely on a business basis because you can like a get client and in order to get clients you have to be polite and make connection with them and being polite is helping you to grow your business and make connections more

✓ It's definitely important in business because you can get clients, and in order to get clients you have to be polite and make connections with them; being polite helps you grow your business and expand your network.

Awkward modal/auxiliary and verb forms: 'you can like a get client' contains filler 'like' and wrong article 'a'. Use simple modal 'can get clients'. 'make connection' needs plural 'connections'. 'being polite is helping you' should be 'being polite helps you' — present simple for general truth. Suggestion: remove fillers, use correct articles and plural forms, and use simple present for general statements.

× As a child, I show my politeness because I just want attention from adults or just if I being polite people give me something or people being nice to me because I just show parteness as a child.

✓ As a child, I showed my politeness because I wanted attention from adults; when I was polite, people gave me things or were nice to me because I showed politeness as a child.

Tense inconsistency: the speaker refers to past behavior, so use past tense ('show' -> 'showed', 'want' -> 'wanted'). 'if I being polite' is ungrammatical; use 'when I was polite'. 'people give me something' should be past 'gave me things'. 'parteness' is incorrect word — use 'politeness'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent when talking about childhood and correct word choice.