Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., “they taught me by…” / “for example”) and avoid redundancy. Add one specific example of what your parents did to teach politeness.

Ví dụ: My parents taught me to be polite through daily examples and conversations. For example, they reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” and encouraged me to greet guests politely. Because of that, I learned how politeness helps smooth interactions with others.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Fix collocations (use “effective communication” not “well communication”) and avoid vague phrasing. Provide one concrete result of politeness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe politeness is extremely important. Firstly, it leads to effective communication because people listen more and misunderstandings are reduced. For example, when children speak respectfully at school, they build better relationships with teachers and classmates.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly: state whether politeness should be constant or situation-dependent. Use linking words and concise reasons with a specific example. Avoid repetition like “most time all time”.

Ví dụ: We should be polite at all times, not just on special occasions. For instance, being polite in everyday situations—like queuing or talking to shop staff—creates a respectful atmosphere and helps society function smoothly.

Gợi ý: This answer is confusing and contradictory. Start with a clear topic sentence describing polite actions you actually did, or admit a past problem then explain how you improved. Use correct tenses and connect ideas with linking words (e.g., “however,” “afterwards,” “so”). Include a concrete example of a polite behavior you adopted.

Ví dụ: As a child, I tried to show politeness by saying “please” and helping with household chores. However, I sometimes raised my voice when I was upset; later, I worked on this by practicing deep breathing and apologizing when I spoke rudely, which improved my relationships with my parents.

× My parents used to learn me how to be polite as a child.

✓ My parents used to teach me how to be polite when I was a child.

The verb 'learn' is used incorrectly with the object 'me'. In English, 'teach someone' means to give instruction; 'learn' is intransitive or takes what is learned (learn English). Also 'as a child' is better expressed as 'when I was a child' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'teach me' and 'when I was a child'.

× So we mainly had deep conversation to talk me how that it is so important in our lives and how without it we can like well communicate with others.

✓ So we mainly had deep conversations in which they told me how important politeness is in our lives and how, without it, we cannot communicate well with others.

Multiple issues: 'deep conversation' should be plural 'conversations'; the phrase 'to talk me how that' is ungrammatical — use 'told me' or 'explained to me' plus a clause; word order 'how that it is so important' is incorrect — use 'how important it is'; 'we can like well communicate' misorders adverb and includes filler 'like' incorrectly — use 'cannot communicate well'. Suggestion: use clearer verbs (told/explained), correct clause order, pluralize 'conversations', place adverbs after the verb.

× I think being polite is one of the most important behaviors that children should have.

✓ I think being polite is one of the most important behaviors that children should have.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no change needed. It correctly uses the article 'one of the' and plural 'children'. No action required.

× First of all, because it provides well communication in the society and sharing respect between people.

✓ First of all, it provides good communication in society and promotes mutual respect between people.

'Well communication' is incorrect: use the adjective 'good' before the noun 'communication' or the adverb 'communicate well' with a verb. 'In the society' is unnatural — use 'in society'. 'Sharing respect between people' is awkward; 'promotes mutual respect' is clearer. Suggestion: choose correct adjective-noun pairs and idiomatic prepositional phrases.

× I don't think that there are some occasions that you should be polite in but most time all time not most time you should be polite because it's so important and it has so many benefits in the individual and also for the society.

✓ I don't think there are only specific occasions when you should be polite; you should be polite most or all of the time because it is very important and has many benefits for individuals and for society.

Problems include redundant and incorrect phrasing: 'there are some occasions that you should be polite in' is awkward — use 'specific occasions when you should be polite'; word order and repetition 'most time all time not most time' is confusing — clarify to 'most or all of the time'; 'in the individual' and 'for the society' are incorrect preposition uses — use 'for individuals' and 'for society'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, use 'when' for occasions, and correct plural nouns and prepositions.

× When I was a child to show my politeness, I like raised my voice to my parents, which is a really bad thing.

✓ When I was a child, to show politeness, I sometimes raised my voice at my parents, which was a really bad thing.

'I like raised my voice' mixes present 'like' with past 'raised' incorrectly. Use 'sometimes' or 'used to' with past tense 'raised'. Also use 'at my parents' rather than 'to my parents' for raising voice toward someone. 'Which is' should be past 'which was' since referring to past behavior. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past), avoid mixing present markers, and use correct preposition 'at'.

× and I did my best to stop that thing and be more polite because it's an obligation.

✓ I did my best to stop that behavior and become more polite because it was an obligation.

Mixing tenses: 'it's an obligation' refers to past effort, so use past 'it was an obligation' or reframe to present if meaning ongoing. 'That thing' is vague — use 'that behavior'. 'Be more polite' is acceptable but 'become more polite' fits past narrative better. Suggestion: maintain past tense throughout the past narration and use precise nouns instead of 'thing'.