Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 内容方面回答了来源和例子，但结尾有语法残缺（句子未完成），且句子较啰嗦。建议在开头直接给出主题句，随后用一到两个简洁的具体例子补充，避免重复，并注意句子完整性和时态一致。可练习用连接词（e.g. For example, As a result）使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. For example, they taught me to respect my teachers and to greet relatives politely, and they often corrected me when I forgot. As a result, I developed good manners from an early age.

Gợi ý: 回答给出明确观点，但表达存在词汇和逻辑错误（e.g. “politeness and cultures”, “make communication smaller”），以及用词不当导致意思模糊。建议替换不准确短语，用更合适的词汇表达因果关系，并用一两个具体效果支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important. Politeness helps create a friendly atmosphere at work and in public, and it improves communication because people feel respected and are more willing to cooperate.

Gợi ý: 回答包含正确观点但举例不恰当（“for example artwork”不相关）且有词汇错误（“player atmosphere”）。建议先列举几类场合（工作、公共场所、家庭等），然后用清晰的短句说明原因，避免使用不相关或错误的词。

Ví dụ: We should be polite in many occasions, such as at work, in public places and at family gatherings. For instance, politeness at work helps maintain teamwork, and being polite in public leaves a good impression on others.

Gợi ý: 回答列举了具体行为，但存在时态混用（“always said”与“try to”）和句子过长。建议使用一致的过去时或过去习惯表达（e.g. used to），分成两句，并用连接词简洁说明原因。

Ví dụ: As a child I used to say "please" and "thank you" regularly, and I tried to behave politely. I also listened quietly and did not interrupt others because I wanted to show respect and make them feel comfortable.

× When I was a child, my parents were strict in teaching me how to be polite to others. For example, they always reminded me how to respect teachers, be friendly with classmates, and greet my uncles and aunts. Probably because of that, I learned good manners early and.

✓ When I was a child, my parents were strict in teaching me how to be polite to others. For example, they always reminded me to respect teachers, be friendly with classmates, and greet my uncles and aunts. Probably because of that, I learned good manners early.

句子末尾出现“and”但是后面没有接续内容，导致句子结构不完整（句子结构错误）。此外，动词短语“reminded me how to respect”在此语境更自然的用法是“reminded me to respect”。建议在说“reminded”后接不定式或名词短语；避免句尾留下未完成的连词。

× Politeness and cultures help create a friendly atmosphere at work and in public, and they make communication smaller because people feel respect and more willing to cooperate.

✓ Politeness and culture help create a friendly atmosphere at work and in public, and they make communication easier because people feel respected and are more willing to cooperate.

“cultures”与上下文搭配应为不可数名词“culture”；“make communication smaller”用词不当，应为“make communication easier”或“improve communication”。“people feel respect”应为被动或形容词形式“feel respected”；“more willing to cooperate”前需有动词“are”。建议注意名词单复数和搭配，选择合适的形容词或短语表达意图。

× I think we should be polite in most social situations, for example artwork.

✓ I think we should be polite in most social situations, for example at art events.

“for example artwork”中“artwork”指艺术品，且缺少介词，搭配不当。正确表达应使用“at art events”或“when attending art exhibitions”等。建议使用适当介词和更具体的名词短语来说明场合。

× It's important to show respect to colleagues and my boss so we can maintain good teamwork.

✓ It's important to show respect to colleagues and my boss so that we can maintain good teamwork.

句子中缺少连词“so that”来引出结果状语从句，用单个“so”在正式表达中可能造成连接不明确。建议使用“so that”或在口语中保留“so”。（此处也可视为从句连接错误，归入代词/连接使用类别以符合所给列表。）

× And in public, being friendly helps create a player atmosphere and leaves a good impression.

✓ And in public, being friendly helps create a pleasant atmosphere and leaves a good impression.

“player atmosphere”是错误搭配，想表达“愉快/和谐的氛围”应使用“pleasant atmosphere”或“friendly atmosphere”。建议选择合适的形容词来修饰“atmosphere”。

× When I was a child, I always said please and thank you and try to behave politely, and I also used to listen quietly when others were speaking without interrupting them because I wanted to show respect and make people feel comfortable.

✓ When I was a child, I always said please and thank you, tried to behave politely, and used to listen quietly when others were speaking without interrupting them because I wanted to show respect and make people feel comfortable.

句子中时态混用：开头用过去常态“always said”，后接现在时“try to behave”与“used to listen”，造成不一致。应将“try”改为过去式“tried”以保持全句过去时。建议在叙述过去习惯时，统一使用过去式或“used to + 动词”。