Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答总体清晰且直接，但有几个提升点：1) 开头应有更明确的主题句（例如说明具体通过哪些方式学礼貌）；2) 避免重复（如“when you are young”重复出现）；3) 增加具体细节或例子（例如父母教你哪些礼貌用语或行为）；4) 句子可用连接词更流畅地衔接。练习时把回答控制在3-4句内，更自然。

Ví dụ: I learned manners mainly from my parents. For example, my mother taught me to say “please” and “thank you,” and my father showed me how to greet guests politely. Because they set a good example at home, I gradually picked up these habits and still use them today.

Gợi ý: 回答表明观点明确，但语言有些重复和结尾不完整：1) 开头可用主题句直接回答并给出原因；2) 精简句子，避免冗余（如“you will not receive respect and polite treatment”可简化）；3) 用连词（therefore, because, which）使逻辑更清晰；4) 补全结尾并给出具体后果或例子以增强说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps build trust and smooth relationships. For instance, polite behaviour can prevent conflicts at work or school, and therefore people are more willing to cooperate with you.

× Well, I learned to be a polite person when I was young from my parents because parents are your best teachers when you are young.

✓ Well, I learned to be a polite person from my parents when I was young, because parents are your best teachers.

句子顺序和重复信息导致结构冗长且不自然。将时间状语“when I was young”放在“from my parents”之后或之前都可以，但应避免重复“when you are young/when I was young”。建议精简成“from my parents when I was young”，使句子更流畅。

× You can learn their behaviors, languages, and other things.

✓ You can learn their behavior, language, and other things.

“their behaviors”与“languages”使用复数不当且与上下文不一致。通常说“behavior”与“language”作不可数或集合名词。此处应使用单数形式，保持与“their”整体属性一致。

× Yes, definitely. If you are a rude person, you will not receive respect and polite treatment from other people and that it will damage your relationship and make the interaction difficult.

✓ Yes, definitely. If you are a rude person, you will not receive respect or polite treatment from other people, and that will damage your relationships and make interactions difficult.

原句中存在连词使用冗余（“and that it will”）和名词单复数不一致（relationship/interactions）。去掉多余的“it”并调整复数形式可使句子更清晰自然。

× So we have we will.

✓ So we won't.

原句“So we have we will.” 结构混乱且没有明确含义。根据上下文（讨论不礼貌的后果），说话者可能想表达“所以我们不会（不礼貌）”或“所以我们应该（做礼貌的事）”。这里提供更自然的“So we won't.”（所以我们不会那样做）或可替换为“So we should.”（所以我们应该这样做）。