Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答清晰但略显冗长，句子结构可以更自然、更有条理。建议先用一句话概括（话题句），然后用1–2个具体细节补充。注意衔接词的使用（例如“for example”或“also”）以提高连贯性，并把“receive gifts with both hands”改为更自然的表达（例如“accept gifts with both hands”）。此外，把“greet people like relatives or teachers”改为“greet relatives and teachers”会更简练。

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite from my parents. For example, they taught me to accept gifts with both hands and always say “thank you” to show appreciation. They also told me to greet relatives and teachers politely, which helped me behave respectfully in social situations.

Gợi ý: 内容表达有明确观点，但句子有语法和用词错误，且逻辑不够清晰。建议首先给出直接观点句，然后用一到两个具体原因或例子支持。注意语法：把“show the respect to each other”改为“show respect to others”；“seeing police and thank you”是错误表达，应改为“saying ‘please’ and ‘thank you’”或“simple courtesies”。句子不要过长，控制在3–4句之内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it shows respect to others. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” in daily life helps people get along better. Small courtesies can reduce conflicts and make everyday interactions smoother.

× When I was a child, my parents told me to receive gifts with both hands and say thanks to show appreciation, and they also told me to greet people like relatives or teachers.

✓ When I was a child, my parents told me to receive gifts with both hands and say "thank you" to show appreciation, and they also told me to greet people such as relatives or teachers.

问题类型：12（代词或代替词使用不当）和11（介词/短语搭配不当）。原句中“say thanks”虽能被理解，但更自然和礼貌的表达是“say 'thank you'”。此外，“greet people like relatives or teachers”中“like”用于比较而非列举举例，容易引起歧义，应使用“such as”或“for example”来表示例子，或改为“relatives and teachers”表示并列。建议：使用固定礼貌用语“thank you”，并用“such as/and”来明确列举对象。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important because it can show the respect to each other and seeing police and thank you in daily life can make the life smoother.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because it can show respect for one another, and seeing politeness and hearing "thank you" in daily life can make life smoother.

问题类型：13（形容词或副词使用不当）及11（介词使用）。原句中“show the respect to each other”用法不自然，应为“show respect for one another”或“show respect to each other”，并省略定冠词“the”。另外“seeing police and thank you”完全不合适：可能想表达的是“看到有礼貌的行为和听到‘谢谢’”，应改为“seeing politeness and hearing 'thank you'”。最后“make the life smoother”中的定冠词多余，应为“make life smoother”。建议：去掉不必要的定冠词，使用更自然的短语（show respect for one another；seeing politeness; hearing 'thank you'）。