Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰和连贯，句子结构混乱且未完整表达观点。建议先给出一个明确的主题句（例如：我从父母和身边人的行为中学会礼貌），然后用1–2个具体例子支持并使用连接词（例如：for example, because）。注意完成句子并控制在最多5句内，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and other adults around me. For example, my parents always greeted neighbors with a smile and said “please” and “thank you,” so I copied their behavior. Because I saw how they treated others respectfully, it became a habit for me.

Gợi ý: 表达含糊且有重复（“at work at work”），逻辑不够严密，句子未完成。建议先给出明确立场句（例如：是的，我认为礼貌非常重要），然后用1–2个具体原因或例子支持，使用连接词（for example, because, therefore），并完成句子，避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it creates a positive atmosphere. For example, saying “thank you” at work shows appreciation and can boost colleagues’ morale, which makes the team cooperate better.

× When I was a kid, my parents told me the pioneers at that time they told me by their behaviors, such as they told me when see somebody we should

✓ When I was a kid, my parents taught me to be polite by their behavior. For example, they told me that when we see somebody, we should...

句子结构混乱，有重复和不完整信息。原句中“told me the pioneers at that time they told me by their behaviors”重复且逻辑不清，缺少从句连接词，“when see somebody”缺主语。建议把信息重组：使用teach/tell 的正确搭配（teach sb to do sth / tell sb that...），补全从句并加主语。注意行为是单数“behavior”或用复数“behaviors”但在此语境下用单数更自然。

× Yes, I think probably could improve our whole environmental present.

✓ Yes, I think it could probably improve our whole environment.

时态和词序问题：“environmental present”不是正确表达，应该用“environment”。动词“could”需有主语或虚拟结构，此处用“it could probably improve”或“this could probably improve”。建议将词序调整为更自然的现在时陈述。

× For example, when at work at work saying thank you can improve humor and make people feel respected and

✓ For example, at work, saying "thank you" can improve the atmosphere and make people feel respected.

原句有重复“at work at work”，句尾未完成，“improve humor”用词不当，应该用“improve the atmosphere”或“improve the mood”。另需用逗号分隔介词短语，并把动名词短语作为主语。建议去掉重复，完成句子并使用恰当词汇来表达“氛围/心情”。