Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Migliora la chiarezza e la coerenza: rispondi direttamente con una frase tematica, poi fornisci dettagli specifici e usa connettivi per collegare le idee. Evita esitazioni e frasi ripetute. Per esempio, spiega chi ti ha insegnato la cortesia, come lo hanno fatto (modello, regole in casa, rimproveri) e un esempio concreto.

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. My mother always reminded me to say 'please' and 'thank you', while my father showed me respect by listening carefully when others spoke. Because of their example and regular reminders, politeness became a habit for me—for instance, I always greet guests and use polite language at the table.

Gợi ý: Rendi la risposta più naturale e concisa: introduci la tua opinione con una frase chiara, poi aggiungi due ragioni concrete collegate con connettivi come 'because' o 'for example'. Evita ripetizioni come 'live in a society' due volte e usa vocaboli appropriati come 'respect' e 'consideration'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe politeness is essential because it builds mutual respect and makes daily interactions smoother. For example, polite behaviour can prevent conflicts at work or school, and showing consideration for others helps create a friendly community.

× I think that I learned to be polite, uh, because I have to talk with my mom about my dad and reverse, so I have to talk about my mom with my dad, so I think.

✓ I think I learned to be polite because I had to talk with my mom about my dad and, conversely, talk with my dad about my mom.

The student used 'have to' (present) while referring to past learning; this is a tense issue and also confusing pronoun/reference words like 'reverse'. Use past tense 'had to' to match 'learned'. 'Reverse' is incorrect; use 'conversely' or 'vice versa'. Also remove redundant fillers ('uh', repeated 'so I think') and clarify pronoun references to avoid ambiguity. Suggestion: form sentences with clear subjects and consistent tenses, e.g., 'I learned... because I had to...'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I think that respect for other people is the thing most important if we live in a society.

✓ I think that respect for other people is the most important thing if we live in a society.

Word order is incorrect: the adjective phrase should be 'the most important thing' not 'the thing most important'. Also 'if we live in a society' is acceptable but can be simplified to 'in society'. Keep present tense 'is' because it expresses a general truth. Suggestion: use the standard adjective order and consider conciseness: 'respect for others is the most important thing in society.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× So yeah, I think that politeness is very important to be a person that live in a society.

✓ So yeah, I think that politeness is very important for a person who lives in society.

Several issues: 'to be a person that live' is ungrammatical — use 'for a person who lives' with third person singular 'lives'. 'In society' is more natural than 'in a society' here. This involves article and relative clause errors and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use 'who' for people, ensure verb agrees with singular subject, and use 'in society' for general statements. Grammar problem type ID:17