Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Content & clarity: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. State a clear topic sentence saying who taught you and how, then add one or two brief supporting details (methods or examples). Structure & length: Keep it to 1–3 concise sentences and use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Vocabulary: Replace incorrect words like "pilot" with "polite" and use simple, accurate verbs ("taught", "encouraged"). Specific steps: 1) Start: "I learned to be polite from my parents." 2) Add a brief method: "They taught me by example and reminding me about manners." 3) Give one short example: "For example, they always told me to say 'please' and 'thank you.'"

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite from my parents because they taught me manners at home. For example, they always showed respect to others and reminded me to say "please" and "thank you," which helped me develop good habits.

Gợi ý: Content & coherence: Your answer expresses agreement but is repetitive and contains vocabulary/grammar mistakes. Begin with a clear topic sentence ("Yes, I think being polite is very important"), then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words ("because", "for example"). Avoid repetition and incorrect word choices (use "polite", "in life", "at school", "at work"). Keep to under five sentences. Specific steps: 1) State opinion. 2) Give two concise reasons with examples. 3) Use linking words for flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people get along in daily life. For example, at school or work polite behaviour creates a positive atmosphere and makes others more willing to help you.

× Actually my parents the learn this pilot.

✓ Actually my parents taught me to be polite.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and wrong word choice ('the learn this pilot'). This is a sentence structure error (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Use the correct verb 'taught' (past tense) because the action of parents teaching happened in the past, and the correct construction is 'taught me to be polite.' Suggestion: place subject, verb, indirect object, and infinitive in proper order: 'My parents taught me to be polite.' Please note: This correction also addresses past tense and vocabulary mistakes while following the given Grammar_Problem_Type_List.

× Yes, of course pilot is very important in the life because we use this in in school or university or actually work.

✓ Yes, of course politeness is very important in life because we use it at school, at university, and at work.

This sentence contains several issues: wrong word choice ('pilot' instead of 'politeness'), incorrect article usage ('in the life' should be 'in life'), incorrect pronoun reference ('this' should be 'it'), and preposition use ('in school' is acceptable but parallelism with 'at university' and 'at work' is clearer). These are primarily sentence structure errors (Grammar Problem Type ID 26) and also involve incorrect use of nouns and prepositions (IDs 13 and 11). Suggestion: use the noun 'politeness', remove unnecessary articles, use consistent prepositions, and maintain parallel structure: 'we use it at school, at university, and at work.' Please note: This correction preserves present-tense general truth.

× Also, this is this good point for people.

✓ Also, this is a good quality in people.

The original repeats 'this' and uses 'point' awkwardly; the structure is incorrect (Grammar Problem Type ID 26). Better vocabulary choices are 'quality' or 'trait' and include the article 'a' before 'good.' Suggestion: say 'a good quality in people' or 'a good trait in people.'