Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 在回答中注意句子自然流畅、语法和时态一致，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。可减少重复（例如“teach me”出现多次），改用更地道的表达（如“my parents taught me good manners”）。补充更具体的细节（例如具体场景或年龄）会让答案更丰富。控制答案长度在3到5个句子内，避免口语填充词。

Ví dụ: My parents taught me good manners when I was young. For example, my mother always reminded me to greet relatives with a smile and say hello whenever we met. If I forgot, she would remind me sternly, and I learned to correct my behavior over time. This routine helped me develop polite habits.

Gợi ý: 改进语法和用词准确性，注意句子结构与衔接。避免重复“well educated”并修正错词（如“being played”应为“being polite”）。可以用一两个具体理由并用连接词（first, second, for example）组织答案，使内容更有条理。保持自然简洁的表达，不超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe politeness is very important. First, it reflects the upbringing someone received from their family. Second, polite behavior helps build mutual respect and stronger relationships in daily life. For example, saying 'please' and 'thank you' can make interactions much smoother and more pleasant.

× According to my memory, I think my parents taught me a lot of the disciplines when I was a child.

✓ According to my memory, I think my parents taught me a lot of discipline when I was a child.

“a lot of the disciplines” 中的定冠词“the”与复数名词“disciplines”搭配不当，且此处更自然的表达是不可数名词“discipline”（纪律/教养）。应该去掉“the”并使用单数不可数形式。建议使用“a lot of discipline”或“many rules”。

× For example, my mom would always teach me like you always need to say hi and be a smile to the people that you know, all the relatives.

✓ For example, my mom would always teach me things like: you always need to say hi and smile to the people you know, like relatives.

原句中“be a smile”用法错误，应使用动词短语“smile”或“give a smile”。同时“teach me like”后接内容需更清晰，建议加入“things like”并将“all the relatives”改为“relatives”。此外去掉多余的“that”。

× But sometimes if I don't do that, they would be scolding to me.

✓ But sometimes if I didn't do that, they would scold me.

时态混用：主句用过去时态情境，应将条件从现在时“don't”改为过去式“didn't”。“would be scolding to me”也是不自然的表达，正确为“would scold me”。删除介词“to”。

× Then I will correct myself.

✓ Then I corrected myself.

上下文在讲过去的经历，句子应使用过去时“corrected”而不是将来时“will correct”。保持叙述时态一致。

× I think it's of vital importance for us to be polite to each other.

✓ I think it's of vital importance for us to be polite to one another.

语法问题较小，改为“one another”使表达更自然。此句时态正确但措辞可改进。

× So first of all, it shows how you've been well educated since you when you were childhood, like how you've been well educated by your parents or your family.

✓ So, first of all, it shows how well you were educated when you were a child, for example by your parents or family.

“how you've been well educated since you when you were childhood” 结构混乱且时态不一致。应将现在完成进行时改为过去时“you were educated”，并把“since you when you were childhood”合并为“when you were a child”。同时将“by your parents or your family”作为例子置于句末。

× Then I think it is from the bigger perspective is that being played can show your love between each other.

✓ Then I think, from a bigger perspective, being polite can show love between people.

原句“being played”用词错误，应为“being polite”。句子结构混乱多余“is that”。“show your love between each other”搭配不自然，改为“show love between people”。同时调整为更自然的短语“from a bigger perspective”。