Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

How did you learn to be polite as a child?

Thí sinh

I have learned polite since I'm gained the knowledge from my parents because they teach me how to talk to others such as good morning or good afternoon etc.

Giám khảo

Do you think being polite is very important?

Thí sinh

Yes, being polarized is vitally important in our daily life or in working space because being the polite is one of the key elements for facing people.

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Part 1

How did you learn to be polite as a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然和语法正确。首先用一个简洁的主题句直接回答问题,然后用1–2句具体细节说明父母如何教你(例如通过示范、规矩或故事)。注意时态与动词形式(learned 而不是 learned/gained),避免冗余词(如 "gained the knowledge" 可简化)。可以用连接词(for example, by teaching me, or by correcting me)使内容更连贯。最多保持在4–5句内。

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. For example, they always modeled polite phrases like "good morning" and corrected me when I used rude words. They also explained why manners matter, which helped me practice politeness in everyday situations.

Do you think being polite is very important?

Điểm: 54.0

Gợi ý: 回答要用更准确的词汇和更清晰的结构。避免拼写错误("polarized" 应为 "polite"),并直接给出原因和具体例子。先用一句话表明立场,然后用一两句解释原因并举例(比如在人际交往或职场合作中的好处)。使用连接词如 "because"、"for example" 来增强连贯性。控制在3–4句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps build good relationships. For example, polite behavior makes it easier to cooperate with colleagues at work and creates a friendly atmosphere. In short, manners often lead to better communication and mutual respect.

Ngữ pháp

Present perfect / Past tense issue (combination) and Incorrect verb form

× I have learned polite since I'm gained the knowledge from my parents because they teach me how to talk to others such as good morning or good afternoon etc.

✓ I learned to be polite since I gained that knowledge from my parents, because they taught me how to speak to others, for example saying "Good morning" or "Good afternoon."

问题类型 ID:5(过去时问题)和6(现在时问题)、8(动词 + -ing 使用)以及26(句子结构问题)。原句中混用了现在完成时("I have learned")和过去时("I'm gained" 非正确形式),时态不一致;"I'm gained" 是错误的被动/完成时形式,应为过去式 "I gained";"teach" 在描述过去的动作时应使用过去式 "taught";此外表达 "learned polite" 和 "saying greetings" 的结构不自然,应改为固定搭配 "learned to be polite" 和 "how to speak to others"。建议:在描述儿童时期已完成的学习经历时,用一般过去时;保持句子时态一致;使用正确的动词形式(teach→taught, gain→gained),并用逗号或连词分隔从句。

Incorrect word choice / adjective vs. noun and sentence structure

× Yes, being polarized is vitally important in our daily life or in working space because being the polite is one of the key elements for facing people.

✓ Yes, being polite is very important in our daily life and at work, because politeness is one of the key qualities when interacting with people.

问题类型 ID:13(形容词/副词使用不当)、26(句子结构错误)和11(介词使用不当)。原句中使用了错误词汇 "polarized"(极化)而非 "polite"(有礼貌);"being the polite" 中定冠词与形容词搭配错误,应使用名词 "politeness" 或省略冠词直接用形容词短语 "being polite";"in working space" 不是自然表达,应改为 "at work" 或 "in the workplace";"for facing people" 用词不当,常用表达是 "when interacting with people" 或 "when dealing with people"。建议:检查词汇是否恰当(polarized→polite);用名词或形容词短语时注意冠词;使用更自然的介词搭配(at work, in daily life);用更准确的动词短语(interacting with)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
Polite— Well-mannered; Civilized
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