Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with grammar and sentence variety. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct past-tense forms, and add one specific example to make your answer more informative. Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences) and use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my mother because she always treated others with respect. For example, she taught me to say “please” and “thank you” and to greet neighbors when we met them. This consistent modeling helped me develop polite habits when I was young.

Gợi ý: Organize your response into a clear main idea and supporting reasons without hesitations. Fix sentence fragments and repetition, and give one concrete reason or example. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “as a result” to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because it helps build good relationships. For example, when I speak politely to colleagues, they are more willing to help me with tasks, and this creates a positive working atmosphere.

× She has always been polite to everyone and she is very kind.

✓ She has always been polite to everyone and is very kind.

Redundant use of the subject 'she' in the second clause makes the sentence wordier and slightly disrupts parallel structure. Because the first clause uses present perfect 'has always been', the second clause can use present simple 'is' without repeating the subject: 'She has always been polite to everyone and is very kind.' Keep parallel structure for clarity.

× So kindness and politeness was teach to me by my mom.

✓ So kindness and politeness were taught to me by my mom.

There are two errors: subject-verb agreement with a compound subject and wrong verb form. 'Kindness and politeness' is plural, so the past tense of 'to be' should be 'were' not 'was'. 'Teach' should be the past participle 'taught' to form the passive past: 'were taught.' The corrected passive sentence is '...were taught to me by my mom.' Alternatively, use active voice: 'My mom taught me to be kind and polite.'

× Yes, I think being polite is very important because when you are polite with people, you can. I mean, get a lot of help from them and it gives a good impression on on these people and they remember their politeness.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because when you are polite with people, you can get a lot of help from them, and it gives a good impression on these people, so they remember your politeness.

Multiple issues corrected while adhering to present tense: remove the sentence fragment 'you can. I mean, get' by combining into 'you can get' to complete the modal construction. Remove duplicate word 'on on'. Use 'these people' with corrected preposition placement: 'gives a good impression on these people' is acceptable but more natural is 'gives a good impression on these people, so they remember your politeness.' Change 'their politeness' to 'your politeness' because the people remember the polite person's behavior, not their own. Suggestions: avoid sentence fragments, watch for duplicated words, and keep pronouns consistent with the subject of the sentence.