Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition and give one clear topic sentence followed by a specific example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct minor grammar (remove duplicate words, use singular/plural correctly). Keep it to 2–4 sentences to be natural and concise.

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly by watching the adults around me. For example, my parents always said “please” and “thank you” and explained why it mattered, so I copied their behavior and used the same phrases with my friends.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give a specific reason and a short example. Fix awkward phrasing (“show polite this” → “are polite to others”) and avoid vague statements. Use a linking phrase (because, therefore, for example) to make the response coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and encourages others to treat you well. For example, if I greet colleagues pleasantly at work, they are more likely to help me when I need assistance.

× When I was a child, I learned to be polite by by seeing my by seeing the people in the environment or the people that surrounds me on how they act.

✓ When I was a child, I learned to be polite by watching the people in my environment or the people who surrounded me and seeing how they acted.

Error type 10: The sentence uses 'by seeing' awkwardly and repeats phrases; 'watching' is the correct verb form to express the method (verb + -ing) and avoids the repetition. Also 'surrounds' is incorrect for past context and plural subject; use 'surrounded' to match past tense and 'who' to refer to people. Suggestion: replace 'by seeing' with 'by watching' and use past tense 'surrounded' with 'acted' to keep tense consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× So when I see people or my parents doing some polite acts.

✓ So when I saw my parents or other people doing polite acts, I copied their behaviour.

Error type 26: The original is a fragment lacking a main clause and has tense inconsistency ('see' present vs earlier past). Convert to a complete sentence that matches past tense and shows result (I copied). Also avoid 'some' with uncountable 'politeness'; use 'polite acts' or 'polite behaviour'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Personally being polite is very important because when you show polite this to others, they will also show politeness to you.

✓ Personally, being polite is very important because when you show politeness to others, they will also show politeness to you.

Error type 22: 'show polite this' is ungrammatical. Use the noun 'politeness' or the adjective 'polite' with a noun: 'show politeness' or 'be polite to others'. Also add a comma after the introductory adverb 'Personally' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Meaning to say it is a basic decency or it is like respecting other people and it's not really hard.

✓ This means that it is a basic decency; it is about respecting other people, and it is not really hard.

Error type 12: The phrase 'Meaning to say' is informal and lacks a clear subject; replace with 'This means that' for clarity. Also replace 'it's' with 'it is' in formal speech and reorder phrase 'respecting other people' for grammatical correctness. Use a semicolon or conjunctions to connect clauses properly. Grammar problem type ID: 12