Part 1
Giám khảo
How did you learn to be polite as a child?
Thí sinh
I am learned my play polite by my parents when I was child.
Giám khảo
Do you think being polite is very important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think polite is very important because. Blight is light and polite. Help me with.
How did you learn to be polite as a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: この回答は文法や語順の誤りが多く、意味も伝わりにくいです。まずは正しい文法(主語+動詞の過去形)を使い、誰が何をしたのかを明確に述べてください。具体的な詳細(どのように教えられたか、例)を1〜2文で加え、リンク語(for example, also, they taught me by...)を使ってつなげると良いです。発音や語彙は簡単でも構いませんが、文全体の構造を整えて自然な流れにしてください。
Ví dụ: I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child. For example, they always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and they corrected me gently when I used rude words. As a result, good manners became a habit.
Do you think being polite is very important?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: この回答はまとまりがなく、理由が不明瞭です。まずは主張の後に1〜2文で理由を述べ、具体例や結果を加えてください。接続詞(because, so, therefore, for example)を使って論理的に説明し、意味の通る短い文を心がけてください。単語の選択にも注意し、“polite”を形容詞として正しく使い、不要な語は省いてください。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people communicate smoothly. For example, saying “thank you” and listening carefully shows respect, and this makes social interactions more pleasant. Therefore, politeness can improve relationships at work and at home.
× I am learned my play polite by my parents when I was child.
✓ I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child.
The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and verb forms. 'I am learned' is wrong; use past simple 'I learned' for completed action in the past (Problem type 5 Past tense issue and 27 Subject-verb agreement). 'my play polite' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is 'to be polite'. Use the infinitive 'to be' after 'learned'. Use the preposition 'from' to indicate the source (parents) rather than 'by' in this context. Add the article 'a' before 'child' -> 'a child'. Suggestion: Use simple past for past events, use correct verb patterns (learn + to-infinitive), and use 'from' for the source of learning.
× Yes, I think polite is very important because. Blight is light and polite. Help me with.
✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because politeness makes interactions pleasant and helpful.
The original contains several issues: 'polite is very important because.' is incomplete and lacks subject/verb structure; use the gerund 'being polite' as the subject (Problem type 6 Present tense issue / 26 Sentence structure errors). 'Blight is light and polite.' appears nonsensical; likely intended to say 'Politeness makes life easier' or similar. 'Help me with.' is incomplete. The corrected sentence uses 'being polite' as a noun phrase and completes the reason: 'politeness makes interactions pleasant and helpful.' Suggestion: Use gerunds to talk about general states ('being polite'), provide a clear clause after 'because', and avoid unclear single words; make sure each sentence has a subject and verb.