Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 在回答中要更直接、有条理地表达观点，减少犹豫词（如“umm”“uh”）和重复。开头用一句清晰的主题句说明学习礼貌的主要来源，然后用1–2句具体细节支持（例如具体行为或场景），并用连接词如“for example”或“also”保持连贯。此外注意发音和动词时态（例如“taught”而不是“tell us how to be played”）。

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. For example, my parents always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and at school teachers taught us to listen when others speak. Also, we practiced polite greetings during assemblies, which helped me form good habits.

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁并用清楚的理由支持观点。避免口头填充词和重复（如“people people”）。先给出明确立场，然后用一至两条具体原因或例子支撑，并用连接词如“because”或“for example”。注意词汇搭配，例如用“important for building relationships”或“reflects someone’s character and upbringing”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it helps build good relationships and shows respect for others. For example, being polite at work can create a positive atmosphere, and polite behaviour at home reflects a person’s upbringing and character.

× Umm, I think when I was a child, I learned to be polite, uh, maybe from the school and uh, umm, parents teaching, umm, like when is, when in school, uh, the teachers, uh, the, uh, teachers, uh, tell, tell us how to be played.

✓ I think when I was a child I learned to be polite, maybe from school and from my parents' teaching. In school the teachers told us how to behave politely.

问题类型：句子结构错误（ID 26）。原句中存在重复、停顿词过多及词序混乱，使句子不连贯。例如“when is, when in school”语序错误，“parents teaching”缺少所有格，“tell us how to be played”用词不当（“be played”意思不对）。建议：去掉多余的填充词（uh, umm），合并相关信息成两句，使用正确的名词所有格和动词短语（“my parents' teaching”，“told us how to behave politely”）。这样句子结构更清晰、语义准确。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important. I think is the MMM based factor to getting interaction with the people people and it's always represents the individual characters and education.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important. I think it is a basic factor for interacting with people and it always represents a person's character and education.

问题类型：主谓一致与句子结构错误（ID 27 兼具句子结构问题）。原句缺少主语（“I think is the…”应为“I think it is…”），短语“MMM based”不明且不合语法，应为“a basic factor”，动名词短语用法错误（“to getting”应为“for interacting”或“for getting”），“people people”重复，且“represents”后主语与动词配合错误（用it always represents a person's character and education 更自然）。建议：补全缺失的代词，去除重复词，使用合适的名词短语（basic factor），并用介词短语“for interacting with people”或动名词短语保持语法一致。