Politeness— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Pronunciation and word choice are causing confusion (e.g., ‘polititude’ and ‘polluted’ instead of ‘politeness’ and ‘polite’). Structure your reply with a clear topic sentence, then 1–2 specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, “because” and “also”) correctly and avoid repetition. Aim for correct subject-verb agreement and clearer vocabulary: ‘I learned to be polite from my parents and from our cultural traditions.’

Ví dụ: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents because they always modelled good manners at home. For example, they taught me to say ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ and to greet elders respectfully, and my school also reinforced these habits through lessons and role-play.

Gợi ý: Make your main idea clear with one simple topic sentence, then give a concise reason and a specific example. Avoid filler phrases and repeated words. Use linking words like “because” and “so” correctly to connect your ideas. For accuracy, say: ‘Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps maintain good relationships.’

Ví dụ: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people get along and avoid conflicts. For example, when I speak politely to classmates, we cooperate better on group projects and the atmosphere is calmer.

× I learned from my parent polititude because my parent are so much polluted and also my culture, my tradition also in my family, my parents also my sibling also so each each others.

✓ I learned politeness from my parents because my parents taught me through my culture and family traditions; my parents and siblings taught each other manners.

Errors: singular/plural mismatch ('parent' should be 'parents'), word choice ('polititude' is incorrect; use 'politeness'), subject-verb agreement ('my parent are' should be 'my parents are' or better 'my parents taught me'), awkward and repetitive phrasing ('my parents also my sibling also so each each others'). Suggestion: use plural forms when referring to more than one person, choose correct noun 'politeness', and reorganize sentence into clear clauses: subject + verb + object. Use 'taught me' or 'taught each other' depending on intended meaning. Note: This correction follows Grammar Problem Type IDs 1 and 27 (singular/plural and subject-verb agreement).

× We so much polluted it.

✓ We made it impolite.

The word 'polluted' is the wrong adjective here; 'impolite' or 'rude' matches the intended meaning. Also the original lacks a clear subject-action-object structure. Suggestion: use appropriate adjective and a verb that expresses the intended action, for example 'made it impolite' or 'behaved rudely'.

× So I uh, really like polluted also.

✓ So I also behaved impolitely when I was young.

Problems: wrong verb choice 'polluted' and unnatural structure 'really like polluted also'. Tense should match the past context ('learned', 'was young'), so use past tense 'behaved'. Suggestion: use clear verb for behavior (behaved, acted) and place time reference if needed ('when I was young'). This relates to verb choice and past tense (Grammar IDs 5 and 13).

× Yes, yes is 100% polite.

✓ Yes, politeness is 100% important to me.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear ('yes is 100% polite'). The question asks if being polite is important; respond with a clear subject and predicate. Suggestion: rephrase to 'Politeness is very important to me' or 'Yes, being polite is essential.' This corrects sentence structure and adjective use (IDs 26 and 13).

× It's very important in our life because when I have we have played, we can we can easily find peace.

✓ It's very important in our lives because when we play, we can easily find peace.

Errors: wrong pronoun and tense mixing ('when I have we have played'), unnecessary repetition ('we can we can'), and singular/plural inconsistency ('our life' -> 'our lives'). Suggestion: simplify clause to 'when we play' (present simple for general truth) and remove repetition. This addresses conjunction/structure and tense (IDs 6 and 16).

× We have never problem.

✓ We never have problems.

Missing plural on 'problem' and unusual word order. Use plural 'problems' for general statements and place 'never' before the verb. Suggestion: 'We never have problems' or 'We have never had problems.' This uses correct quantifier/plural (IDs 1 and 14).

× We have always opportunity only so polite is it's very necessary as a human being.

✓ We always have opportunities, so politeness is very necessary for a human being.

Errors: missing plural 'opportunity' -> 'opportunities', awkward word order ('always opportunity only'), redundant 'it's it's', and incorrect preposition 'as a human being' -> 'for a human being'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, connect ideas with 'so', and use correct preposition 'for'. This addresses article/quantifier and preposition errors (IDs 14 and 11).