Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答没有直接清楚地说明“是否做过纸艺”，而且有多处严重的语法、词汇和指代错误，例如“candy craft”“had a very talented under it”和“He also I always makes”。建议先直接回答“Yes, I have”或“No, I haven’t”，然后补充具体的纸艺类型、制作过程和原因。注意使用正确的主谓一致，并避免把不相关的信息混在一起。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have made a few paper crafts, especially when I was younger. I once folded paper into Chinese characters and decorated them with colorful patterns. My sister was much more talented than me, so she usually helped me with the difficult parts.

Gợi ý: 回答基本提到了折纸，但开头“In my child”和“I didn't I don't think”不自然，且内容不够确定。建议直接说明童年时喜欢做什么，再补充一个具体例子和原因。使用过去时，如“folded”和“made”，并用“because”连接细节。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I liked folding paper into different shapes, such as animals and flowers. I was not very good at it, but I enjoyed following simple instructions from books. It was a relaxing activity, and I often did it after school.

Gợi ý: 回答直接，观点也比较清楚，但“store the memories between the friends and families”表达不自然，“some of letters”应改为“some letters”。建议说明你多久写一次实体信，以及它为什么比电子信息更有纪念意义。

Ví dụ: Yes, although I do not write them very often. I think physical letters are a wonderful way to preserve memories and show people that you care about them. I have kept several letters from my friends, and I enjoy reading them again from time to time.

Gợi ý: 回答有个人例子，这是优点，但没有明确回答“人们是否仍然保存手写信”，并且“Kip Ken written”和“a handwritten”明显用词错误。建议先给出总体判断，例如“Some people still do”，然后解释年轻人和老年人的不同习惯，最后加入自己的经历。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think some people still keep handwritten letters, although they are less common than before. Older people may value them because they feel more personal and memorable, while younger people usually prefer messages on their phones. Personally, I have kept a birthday card that my parents gave me when I was a child.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了不常携带纸笔的观点，也给出了手机方便这一原因，但“not different trice of mine”不自然，且句子缺少清晰的连接和标点。建议直接说“No, I don’t usually carry them”，再说明手机的具体用途，并可补充在什么情况下会使用纸笔。

Ví dụ: No, I do not usually carry paper and pens when I go out. My smartphone is much more convenient because I can use it to write notes, set reminders, and take pictures of important information. However, I sometimes carry a pen when I have an appointment or need to sign a document.

× I think it's not a frequent choice of mine to do some candy craft because my sister had a very talented under it. He also I always makes some Chinese Asian character and he sets up a wine shop for selling it.

✓ I don't think making paper crafts is a frequent choice of mine because my sister was very talented at it. She also always made some Chinese characters, and she set up a shop to sell them.

原句包含多个句子成分混乱的问题，例如“my sister had a very talented under it”和“He also I always makes”都不能构成正确的英语句子。应使用清晰的主语、谓语和宾语，避免把多个句子错误地连接在一起。

× He also I always makes some Chinese Asian character and he sets up a wine shop for selling it.

✓ She also always made some Chinese characters, and she set up a shop to sell them.

前文的主语是“my sister”，所以后面应使用女性代词“She”，不能使用“He”。“characters”是复数，后面应使用复数代词“them”，不能使用单数代词“it”。

× He also I always makes some Chinese Asian character and he sets up a wine shop for selling it.

✓ She also always makes some Chinese characters, and she sets up a shop to sell them.

当主语是第三人称单数“She”时，一般现在时的谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式，例如“makes”和“sets”。同时，句子中不能出现“I always makes”这种主语和谓语不匹配的结构。

× He also I always makes some Chinese Asian character and he sets up a wine shop for selling it.

✓ She also always makes some Chinese characters, and she sets up a shop to sell them.

“some”通常修饰可数名词复数，因此“character”应改为“characters”。因为指代多个汉字或作品，后面的“it”也应改为“them”。

× I think it's not a frequent choice of mine to do some candy craft because my sister had a very talented under it.

✓ I don't think making paper crafts is a frequent choice of mine because my sister was very talented at it.

表示“在某方面很有天赋”时，应使用固定搭配“be talented at something”，不能说“talented under it”。此外，“making paper crafts”比“to do some candy craft”更符合“用纸制作工艺品”的表达。

× In my child that was pretty long ago, I didn't I don't think the detail about how to make the paper but I think maybe I fold them into the different characters.

✓ In my childhood, which was quite a long time ago, I don't remember the details of how to make things out of paper, but I think I folded the paper into different shapes.

“在我的童年时期”应使用固定表达“In my childhood”，不能说“In my child”。表示“关于……的细节”时，通常使用“the details of”，而不是“the detail about”。

× In my child that was pretty long ago, I didn't I don't think the detail about how to make the paper but I think maybe I fold them into the different characters.

✓ In my childhood, which was quite a long time ago, I don't remember the details of how to make things out of paper, but I think I folded the paper into different shapes.

问题询问的是童年时期的活动，因此描述当时做过的事情时应使用一般过去时。“fold”应改为“folded”。如果使用“didn't”，后面也必须接动词原形，不能混用“didn't”和“I don't think”。

× In my child that was pretty long ago, I didn't I don't think the detail about how to make the paper but I think maybe I fold them into the different characters.

✓ In my childhood, which was quite a long time ago, I don't remember the details of how to make things out of paper, but I think I folded the paper into different shapes.

原句把“I didn't”和“I don't think”重复、错误地连接在一起，造成句子结构不完整。可以直接说“I don't remember...”来表达“我不记得……”，并用“but”连接两个完整的分句。

× Yes, I think it's a good way to store the memories between the friends and families. I also collected some of letters from my friends.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good way to preserve memories between friends and family. I have also collected some letters from my friends.

“some letters”前面不需要使用“of”；如果使用“some of”，后面必须是“some of the letters”。这里是在泛指朋友和家人，因此通常说“friends and family”，不使用“the”。

× Yes, I think it's a good way to store the memories between the friends and families. I also collected some of letters from my friends.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good way to preserve memories between friends and family. I have also collected some letters from my friends.

“family”在这里表示家人这一整体概念，通常使用不可数形式“family”，而不是“families”。“letters”是可数名词复数，前面可以直接使用“some”。

× I don't know whether like plays or not, but for me I really enjoy Kip Ken written, especially from my childhood.

✓ I don't know whether people still like them or not, but I really enjoy keeping handwritten letters, especially letters from my childhood.

“whether like plays or not”缺少主语和宾语，正确结构应为“whether people still like them or not”。“enjoy”后面应接动名词，因此使用“enjoy keeping”，而不是不完整的“Kip Ken written”。

× I don't know whether like plays or not, but for me I really enjoy Kip Ken written, especially from my childhood.

✓ I don't know whether people still like them or not, but I really enjoy keeping handwritten letters, especially letters from my childhood.

“enjoy”后面必须接名词或动名词，不能直接接动词原形或错误的词组。因此应说“enjoy keeping handwritten letters”。常见结构是“enjoy doing something”。

× I also remember that my parents gave me a handwritten on my birthday.

✓ I also remember that my parents gave me a handwritten letter on my birthday.

“handwritten”是形容词，不能单独作为可数名词使用。“a”后面需要接完整的名词短语，因此应说“a handwritten letter”。

× I also remember that my parents gave me a handwritten on my birthday.

✓ I also remember that my parents gave me a handwritten letter on my birthday.

“gave me a handwritten”中的“handwritten”只是形容词，缺少被赠送的名词。补充名词“letter”后，句子才有完整的宾语结构。

× I think it's a not different trice of mine to carry them because the smartphone is really convenient from time to time I write some notes on my phone

✓ I don't usually carry paper and pens with me because my smartphone is very convenient. From time to time, I write some notes on my phone.

原句中“a not different trice”无法构成正确的英语表达，而且“because”后面的内容与后面的句子直接连接，形成了逗号拼接或连句错误。应将意思分成两个完整句子，并在“From time to time”后加逗号。

× I think it's a not different trice of mine to carry them because the smartphone is really convenient from time to time I write some notes on my phone.

✓ I don't usually carry paper and pens with me because my smartphone is very convenient. From time to time, I write some notes on my phone.

这里说的是自己的手机，使用物主限定词“my smartphone”比“the smartphone”更准确。“the”通常用于双方都知道的特定事物，而这里需要明确说明手机属于说话者。