Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly with a grammatically complete sentence. Replace “several origami” with “several origami figures” or “several origami crafts,” and change “or using pieces of paper” to “using pieces of paper.” You could also add a specific occasion or result to make the answer more engaging. Avoid combining “have made” with the incorrect structure “or using.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I have made several origami figures using pieces of paper. I folded animals such as birds and foxes, and I really enjoyed the precise folding involved. I usually made them as a relaxing hobby when I had free time.

Gợi ý: The main idea is relevant, but there are several vocabulary and word-choice problems. Use “sheets of blank paper” instead of “blank papers,” “sketch” instead of “stretch,” and replace the unclear word “Parasalek” with “the story” or the correct character/title. Add a linking word such as “Besides” or “As a result” to connect the activities more naturally.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I liked writing notes and sketching pictures on sheets of paper while I read. If I became distracted, I would draw imaginary characters or scenes from the story. This helped me concentrate and remember the main details.

Gợi ý: This is a clear and well-developed answer with an effective contrast. Improve the grammar by saying “Emails are much faster for conveying ideas and transferring information” or simply “Emails are much faster.” You can make the response more natural by replacing the repeated formal phrases with concise, conversational language.

Ví dụ: Usually, I don’t write physical letters because emails are much faster and more convenient. However, I still send handwritten letters on special occasions or to people I’m very close to. They feel more personal and are often kept as meaningful memories.

Gợi ý: The answer has a clear opinion, contrast, and reason. Replace “as keeps” with “as keepsakes” or, more naturally, “because they are meaningful keepsakes.” You could also give one specific example, such as a letter from a family member or a wedding card, to make the supporting detail more precise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe many people still keep handwritten letters. Although most daily communication happens through emails and texts, letters can have strong sentimental value. For example, people may keep a birthday card or a letter from a loved one because it reminds them of a special moment.

Gợi ý: The response answers directly and gives a clear reason and exception. Add a comma after “No,” and use “paper and a pen” when referring to the items generally. “Using the apps or email” is slightly unnatural; say “using note-taking apps” instead. Since you normally carry a phone rather than a laptop when going out, mentioning your phone alone would sound more realistic and concise.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t usually carry paper and a pen when I go out. I normally take notes on my phone using a note-taking app, which is more convenient. However, I sometimes bring a pen if I expect to sign any documents.

× Yes, I have made several origami or using pieces of paper.

✓ Yes, I have made several origami figures using pieces of paper.

The quantifier several must modify a countable plural noun. Origami is generally used as an uncountable noun or as a modifier, so several origami is incorrect. Use several origami figures instead. When describing the material or method, use using pieces of paper.

× Yes, I have made several origami or using pieces of paper.

✓ Yes, I have made several origami figures using pieces of paper.

The conjunction or incorrectly connects made several origami with using pieces of paper, which are not grammatically parallel elements. Remove or and use using to show how the figures were made. Make sure that conjunctions connect similar grammatical structures.

× When I was a child, I loved taking notes while I read and I wrote them on blank papers.

✓ When I was a child, I loved taking notes while I read and wrote them on blank sheets of paper.

Paper is normally an uncountable noun when referring to the material, so blank papers is not appropriate here. Use blank sheets of paper when referring to individual pieces. The coordinated verbs read and wrote also share the subject I, so the second I can be omitted for smoother structure.

× Emails are much faster conveying ideas and transferring information, but for very special occasions or for people I care about most, I prefer sending a handwritten letter because it feels more personal and more memorable.

✓ Emails are much faster at conveying ideas and transferring information, but for very special occasions or for people I care about most, I prefer sending a handwritten letter because it feels more personal and more memorable.

When faster describes effectiveness in performing an activity, use the preposition at before the gerund. The correct pattern is faster at conveying. You can also say a faster way to convey ideas.

× No I don't. I rarely keep paper and pens with me because I usually take notes on my phone or laptop using the apps or email, although I might bring a pen for signing documents on occasion.

✓ No, I do not. I rarely keep paper and pens with me because I usually take notes on my phone or laptop using apps or email, although I might bring a pen for signing documents on occasion.

The definite article the is used for specific apps that have already been identified. Here, the speaker is referring to apps in general, so no article is needed. Use apps or email. In careful speech, add a comma after No and use do not if a more formal style is preferred.