Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答切题，先直接回答，再补充了制作内容和感受，结构清晰。可以把“craft paper planes or boats”改为更自然的“make paper planes or boats”，并避免同时使用“fun”和“fascinating”造成轻微重复。还可以补充一个具体细节，例如你最喜欢制作哪一种纸艺或制作时遇到的困难。

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to make paper planes and boats in practical craft classes at school. My teacher showed us how to fold the paper step by step, and I especially enjoyed seeing whose plane could fly the farthest.

Gợi ý: 回答包含两个具体活动，但“just as I mentioned”和“like”使表达不够流畅，而且“back then the teacher showed us”缺少连接词，句子结构不完整。“I also do the paper cutting”应改为“I also did paper cutting”，“one of the traditional Chinese art”应改为“one of the traditional Chinese art forms”。建议直接回答最喜欢的活动，再用一个具体原因或例子展开，避免重复前面答案。

Ví dụ: As a child, I particularly enjoyed making paper planes because I could experiment with different shapes and see which one flew the farthest. I also tried paper cutting, a traditional Chinese art form, during special festivals.

Gợi ý: 回答立场明确，也提供了原因和例子，但“never write... recently”搭配不自然，应改为“I haven't written a physical letter recently”或“I don't write physical letters anymore”。“more convenient ways of convenience ways”是明显重复；“WeChat”应作为专有名词书写。可以补充一句例外情况，例如节日或特殊纪念日仍可能写信。

Ví dụ: To be honest, no, I rarely write physical letters these days. Emails, text messages and WeChat are much more convenient, although I might write a handwritten letter for a close friend's birthday or another special occasion.

Gợi ý: 回答有比较和原因，内容方向基本合理，但“still use still writing”重复且语法错误；“due to the poor signal or communication devices”表达不准确，可以说“because they may have limited internet access or fewer communication devices”。“by comparison”不能直接连接两个完整观点，建议使用“whereas”或“while”。同时，“modernized countryside”不如“developed rural areas”自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially older people or those living in remote areas with limited internet access. However, most people in cities and developed rural areas prefer digital communication because it is faster and more convenient.

Gợi ý: 回答直接，包含习惯、例子和个人感受，内容较充实。“pants”是“裤子”，这里应为“pens”；“when I...，I would...”应统一为一般现在时“I immediately write them down”；“review it”应改为“review them”。“a handwriting person”不自然，可以说“I prefer writing things by hand”。建议减少重复，并明确纸和笔分别有什么用途。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a couple of pens with me. I use them to write down reminders or new vocabulary immediately, and reviewing my notes later helps me remember things better. I also prefer writing by hand because it makes me feel prepared.

× Well just as I mentioned, I used to make like paper planes or boats back then the teacher showed us those techniques step by step.

✓ Well, just as I mentioned, I used to make paper planes or boats when the teacher showed us those techniques step by step.

“back then”后面直接接“the teacher showed us”会造成两个分句连接不完整。这里需要使用连词“when”来表示“当老师向我们展示这些技巧时”。另外，“make like paper planes or boats”中的“like”不必要，直接说“make paper planes or boats”即可。

× Apart from this, I also do the paper cutting, which is one of the traditional Chinese art.

✓ Apart from this, I also did paper cutting, which is one of the traditional Chinese arts.

这段话描述的是童年时的活动，所以“do”应改为过去式“did”。“paper cutting”表示剪纸这一活动时通常不加冠词“the”。

× Apart from this, I also do the paper cutting, which is one of the traditional Chinese art.

✓ Apart from this, I also did paper cutting, which is one of the traditional Chinese arts.

“one of + 可数名词复数”表示“……之一”，所以“art”必须改为复数“arts”。

× To be honest, no, I never write paper letters recently.

✓ To be honest, no, I don't write physical letters anymore.

“recently”与一般现在时“never write”搭配不自然，而且问题询问的是现在是否仍然写信。使用“don't write ... anymore”可以清楚地表达“现在不再写纸质信件”。

× That is because there are more convenient ways of convenience ways to convey messages such as emails, text messages or we chat, which is one of the most popular.

✓ That is because there are more convenient ways to convey messages, such as emails, text messages, or WeChat, which is one of the most popular options.

“more convenient ways of convenience ways”结构重复且不完整，应改为“more convenient ways”。列举具体方式时，“such as”后面直接接名词即可。补充“options”可以使“one of the most popular”后的名词结构完整。

× Well, yes, I think that people in some remote areas still use still writing letters by hand due to the poor signal or communication devices by comparison, those city dwellers or people living in modernized countryside use digital devices.

✓ Well, yes, I think that people in some remote areas still write letters by hand because of poor signals or limited access to communication devices. By comparison, those city dwellers or people living in the modernized countryside use digital devices.

“use still writing”不是这里正确的动词结构。表达“仍然写信”时应直接使用“still write”。“use”后面不能在此处直接接“writing”来表达这个意思。

× Well, yes, I think that people in some remote areas still use still writing letters by hand due to the poor signal or communication devices by comparison, those city dwellers or people living in modernized countryside use digital devices.

✓ Well, yes, I think that people in some remote areas still write letters by hand because of poor signals or limited access to communication devices. By comparison, those city dwellers or people living in the modernized countryside use digital devices.

原句包含两个完整分句，却只用逗号连接，形成逗号拼接错误。应在“by comparison”前断句，并将其放在新句开头，用来清楚地表示对比关系。

× For example, when I come across new words, I would immediately write them down and review it constantly.

✓ For example, when I come across new words, I immediately write them down and review them regularly.

“new words”是复数，因此后面指代这些单词时应使用复数代词“them”，不能使用单数代词“it”。同时，描述现在的习惯时使用一般现在时“write”和“review”更加一致。