Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答方向正确，也提供了具体例子，但有明显的语法和用词问题。开头应说“when I was a child”，而不是“to when I was a child”；“paper drops”应改为更自然的“paper crafts”或具体的“paper flowers”；“paper cutting”在这里可说“paper-cutting designs”。建议使用清晰的结构：先直接回答，再说明时间、地点和活动，并用“especially”和“together”等连接信息。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. When I was a child, especially in primary school, I made paper crafts before festivals. For example, I made paper flowers and simple paper-cutting designs in art class with my classmates.

Gợi ý: 内容比较具体，但时态不一致，而且第一句“floating paper one with child”难以理解。因为问题问的是过去经历，应统一使用过去时，如“I really liked making things out of paper when I was a child”。“paper plants”可以改为“paper flowers”或“paper trees”，“use my imagination”使用自然。建议先说明最喜欢的活动，再列举例子和原因。

Ví dụ: As a child, I really liked making things out of paper, especially boats and simple animals. I often did it after school because it was relaxing and helped me use my imagination. Sometimes I also made paper flowers.

Gợi ý: 回答直接，理由和时间信息都很清楚，整体表达自然。可以将“No I don't”改为“No, I don't”，并把“the real letter”改为“a real letter”或“a handwritten letter”。为了使表达更地道，可以用“these days”替代重复的“nowadays”，并稍微减少“online”和“digital communication”的重复。

Ví dụ: No, I don’t. These days, it’s much easier to send a message online or make a phone call. I probably wrote my last handwritten letter several years ago, so I now prefer digital communication.

Gợi ý: 观点明确，也使用了微信作为具体例子，但存在冠词、复数、拼写和主谓一致问题。“using app”应为“using apps”；“Wechat”建议写作“WeChat”；“messager instant day”应改为“an instant message”；“gets”应改为“get”。可以先承认少数人仍会保存信件，再说明大多数人选择即时通讯，这样答案会更准确、更有层次。

Ví dụ: Not really. Although some people keep old letters for sentimental reasons, most people now prefer messaging apps such as WeChat, which is very popular in China. For example, I can send an instant message or a photo to a friend and get a reply within a few seconds.

Gợi ý: 回答简洁直接，理由充分，结构也很自然。主要问题是时态和搭配：“when I got out”应改为“when I go out”；“paper and pens”可以说“paper or a pen”，因为通常不一定同时携带二者。还可以补充一个具体场景，例如用手机记录购物清单或地址，使细节更加丰富。

Ví dụ: No, I don’t usually carry paper or a pen when I go out. I use my phone instead to take notes, save addresses, or make shopping lists. It’s more convenient, and I don’t have to worry about losing my stationery.

× Yes I have I made paper drops to when I was a child, especially in primary school before festivals I made things like paper flowers and simple paper cutting. I often did it in arts class and my classmates made them together.

✓ Yes, I have. I made paper crafts when I was a child, especially in primary school. Before festivals, I made things like paper flowers and simple paper cuttings. I often did this in art class, and my classmates and I made them together.

原句中多个完整句子直接连接在一起，形成连句，句子结构不清晰。应使用句号或逗号加连词将句子分开。另外，回答“Have you made...?”时，先用“Yes, I have.”完整回答，再说明过去的经历。建议：每个完整句子表达一个主要意思，并注意使用正确的标点符号。

× I really like floating paper one with child.

✓ I really liked making paper ones as a child.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历，因此动词like应使用过去式liked，而不是现在式like。“with child”不能表达“小时候”，应使用固定表达“as a child”。此外，paper one应改为复数paper ones，表示多个纸制品。建议：讲述过去的经历时，统一使用一般过去时，并记忆常见搭配，如“as a child”。

× The last time I wrote the real letter probably several years ago, but nowadays I prefer digital communication.

✓ The last time I wrote a real letter was probably several years ago, but nowadays I prefer digital communication.

“a real letter”表示一封普通的真实信件，第一次提到时应使用不定冠词a，而不是the。“The last time...”作主语时，后面需要系动词was，不能直接接probably several years ago。建议：检查句子是否包含完整的主语和谓语，并根据名词是否特指选择a、an或the。

× Not really nowadays it's more convenient to send messages online, especially using app like Wechat which is very popular in China. For instance, I can send a messager instant day or a photo to my friend and gets a response in just a few seconds.

✓ Not really. Nowadays, it’s more convenient to send messages online, especially by using apps like WeChat, which is very popular in China. For instance, I can send an instant message or a photo to my friends and get a response in just a few seconds.

“app like WeChat”应改为“apps like WeChat”，因为这里是泛指多个应用；如果使用单数，则应说“an app like WeChat”。“instant message”是正确的名词短语，需要使用不定冠词an。主语是I，所以并列动词应使用原形get，不能使用第三人称单数形式gets。建议：复数名词通常要加-s；单数可数名词前要有a、an或the；主语为I、you或复数名词时，动词不要加-s。

× No, I don't carry paper and pens when I got out.

✓ No, I don’t carry paper and pens when I go out.

这句话描述的是现在的日常习惯，因此when从句也应使用一般现在时go，而不是一般过去时got。建议：描述习惯、规律或经常发生的事情时，主句和时间从句通常使用一般现在时。