Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and use the correct past tense: “Yes, I have.” Avoid repeating “I made.” Also, “paper cuff” is unclear; say “a paper craft” or name the specific craft. Add one brief detail about when you made it and why you liked it. Use linking words such as “because” to connect your ideas, and avoid repeating adjectives like “nice” and “lovely.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. When I was younger, I made a pop-up card and a paper flower. I enjoyed making them because the designs were creative and colorful.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence, such as “I liked drawing.” Use the past tense consistently: “loved” and “was,” not “love” and “is.” Say “on paper,” rather than “on papers,” and explain specifically what you drew. Complete the final idea by saying how drawing improved your imagination or creativity.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I loved drawing on paper, especially during school holidays. It was relaxing and fun, and I often drew animals or imaginary places. As a result, it helped me develop my creativity.

Gợi ý: Your direct answer is clear, but the explanation is repetitive and contains unnecessary phrases such as “This is because” and “it is because.” Use “emails” or “electronic messages” instead of “electronic letter.” Give two concise reasons, such as speed and convenience, and connect them with “because” or “so.”

Ví dụ: No, I hardly ever write physical letters. I usually send emails or text messages because they are faster and more convenient. I would only write a handwritten letter for a special occasion, such as a birthday.

Gợi ý: State your opinion more naturally: “Yes, some people do, although fewer people keep them nowadays.” Correct the vocabulary and grammar: use “handwritten letters,” “difficult to store,” and “electronic messages have replaced letters.” Avoid saying “I don’t think so” and then giving a general statement that does not clearly answer whether people keep letters. Include a specific exception, such as sentimental letters from family members.

Ví dụ: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially if they have sentimental value. However, fewer people do this nowadays because digital messages are easier to store and share. For example, people may keep old letters from their grandparents as family memories.

Gợi ý: Use the present tense for a current habit: “No, I don’t usually carry...” Use “a pen or any paper,” “take notes,” and “with me.” Explain that you use a tablet because it is more practical for taking and sharing notes. Finish the sentence and avoid the incomplete ending “because it’s very.”

Ví dụ: No, I don’t usually carry a pen or paper when I go out. I normally take my tablet with me because it is more practical for taking notes and sharing information. This is especially useful when I work on-site.

× I have made paper cuff when I was I made pop up paper.

✓ I made a paper cuff when I was a child, and I also made pop-up paper crafts.

The phrase when I was refers to a finished period in the past, so the past tense made is appropriate. The sentence also needs a complete phrase after was, such as a child.

× I have made paper cuff.

✓ I have made a paper cuff.

A singular countable noun such as cuff needs an article. Use a because the cuff is not previously specified.

× It's very nice and lovely I love it.

✓ It was very nice and lovely, and I loved making it.

Two independent clauses cannot be joined without punctuation or a conjunction. The conjunction and correctly connects the two ideas, and the past tense loved matches the past context.

× When there was a shais, I love to draw on papers.

✓ When I had time, I loved drawing on paper.

The question asks about childhood, so the answer should use the past tense loved. Paper is generally an uncountable noun when referring to the material, so paper is more natural than papers.

× When there was a shais, I love to draw on papers.

✓ When I had time, I loved drawing on paper.

After loved, the gerund form drawing is natural when describing an activity that someone enjoyed doing.

× This is because IFIS very relaxed and fun when I draw some things and I often improve my imagination to.

✓ This was because drawing was very relaxing and fun, and it often improved my imagination.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains an unclear clause. The corrected version has a clear subject and verb in each clause. The past tense was and improved matches the childhood context.

× This is because IFIS very relaxed and fun when I draw some things.

✓ This was because drawing was very relaxing and fun.

Relaxing describes an activity that causes relaxation, while relaxed describes a person's feeling. Therefore, drawing was very relaxing is the appropriate expression.

× This is because if it's very inconvenient when I would like to write something I prefer to write on electronic letter it is because it's very convenient.

✓ This is because writing physical letters is very inconvenient. When I want to write something, I prefer to write an electronic letter because it is very convenient.

Use the present tense want because this describes a current habit. The sentence also needs to be divided into complete sentences, and because is used instead of the incorrect if.

× I prefer to write on electronic letter.

✓ I prefer to write an electronic letter.

Electronic letter is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article an. Use an because electronic begins with a vowel sound.

× I don't think so people don't use handwriting rhetor for today.

✓ I don't think so. People do not use handwritten letters nowadays.

A period is needed after I don't think so because it is a complete sentence. The second sentence needs a clear subject and verb. Nowadays is the natural adverb for referring to the present time.

× People don't use handwriting rhetor for today.

✓ People do not use handwritten letters nowadays.

Handwritten is the past participle form used as an adjective to describe letters that are written by hand. The phrase handwriting letters is not grammatically appropriate here.

× This is because they're very difficult and hard to divide it.

✓ This is because they are difficult and hard to distribute.

They refers to plural handwritten letters, so the pronoun they is correct. The unnecessary object pronoun it has been removed because the sentence already has the plural subject they.

× This is because they're very difficult and hard to divide it.

✓ This is because they are difficult and hard to distribute.

The original sentence uses an unclear expression after because. The corrected version uses because to introduce the reason and avoids adding another unnecessary connector.

× So nowadays people use electronic fire replaced handwriting letters.

✓ Therefore, nowadays people use electronic files instead of handwritten letters.

The original sentence lacks a correctly structured verb phrase. Use use electronic files as the main clause and instead of to show what replaces handwritten letters.

× No, I didn't carry pen or paper when I go out.

✓ No, I do not carry a pen or paper when I go out.

The question asks about a current habit, so use the present tense do not carry. The phrase when I go out also describes a regular present situation.

× No, I didn't carry pen or paper when I go out.

✓ No, I do not carry a pen or paper when I go out.

Pen is a singular countable noun and therefore needs the article a. Paper is uncountable when referring to the material, so it does not need an article here.

× This is because if I's very hard to take note and share with other people.

✓ This is because it is very hard to take notes and share them with other people.

The sentence needs the subject it and the verb is. Because correctly introduces the reason, while if is incorrect in this context. The phrase take notes is the standard expression.

× It is very hard to take note and share with other people.

✓ It is very hard to take notes and share them with other people.

The fixed expression is take notes because people usually write several pieces of information. The plural pronoun them refers back to notes.

× It is very hard to take notes and share with other people.

✓ It is very hard to take notes and share them with other people.

The pronoun them is needed as the object of share and refers to the notes. Without an object, share is incomplete in this sentence.

× Nowadays I take tablets with myself when I go work on site.

✓ Nowadays, I take a tablet with me when I go to work on-site.

The natural preposition is with me, not with myself, because this is not a reflexive action. Use go to work because the preposition to is required before the destination work.

× Nowadays I take tablets with myself when I go work on site.

✓ Nowadays, I take a tablet with me when I go to work on-site.

Myself is a reflexive pronoun and is used when the subject and object are the same person. Here, the correct ordinary object pronoun is me.

× Nowadays I take tablets with myself when I go work on site.

✓ Nowadays, I take a tablet with me when I go to work on-site.

A tablet refers to one device in this answer, so the singular form a tablet is appropriate. The article a is required before the singular countable noun.