Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly using the present perfect: “Yes, I have.” Then explain when you started and give one specific example. Avoid the unfinished ending and long chain of clauses. Use natural phrases such as “make paper crafts,” “learned how to fold paper,” and “not all of my classmates joined in.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. I started making paper crafts when I was eight, after my teacher taught me how to fold an origami swan. I really enjoyed it because it was creative and relaxing, although not all of my classmates were interested.

Gợi ý: State your main answer clearly and avoid repeating “fascinating” and “enjoy.” Correct the article to “an origami boat” and use the past tense consistently because you are talking about childhood. Add one clear reason or result to make the answer more specific.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I especially liked making origami boats. I found the folding process fascinating, and I enjoyed floating the boats in a basin of water. It was a simple activity, but it kept me entertained for hours.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then explain the connection with your exam preparation. The ideas are difficult to follow because of repeated words and incorrect expressions such as “it learned me” and “for physical letter.” Use “it has helped me improve” and distinguish between writing letters and writing by hand for IELTS practice.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still write by hand, although I rarely send physical letters. I began doing this when I was preparing for the IELTS exam because handwriting helped me practise Writing Task 1 and Task 2. It also helps me remember new vocabulary and organise my ideas more effectively.

Gợi ý: Your opinion and reason are relevant, but improve the grammar and make the answer more balanced. Say “I don’t think many people do” rather than “I don’t think so people do,” and use “there are many devices.” You could mention that some people still keep letters for sentimental reasons, which would provide a more precise and developed response.

Ví dụ: I don’t think many people keep handwritten letters nowadays because digital devices make communication much faster and more convenient. With a smartphone or laptop, people can type and send a message instantly. However, some people still preserve handwritten letters because they have sentimental value.

Gợi ý: The answer is relevant, but make the wording more natural and avoid repeating “go out.” Say “I only take my phone” and explain that it can replace paper and pens for notes and messages. Use a clearer structure: answer, reason, and brief example.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t usually carry paper and pens when I go out. I only take my phone because I can use it to write notes, send messages, or save important information. I might bring a pen if I were attending a meeting or travelling somewhere unfamiliar.

× Yes, I made craft with paper since I was eight years old.

✓ Yes, I have made crafts with paper since I was eight years old.

The countable noun craft should be plural because the student is referring to crafts in general. The present perfect form have made is also appropriate for an activity that started in the past and continues to the present.

× He taught me about how to make a swan with a paper.

✓ He taught me how to make a swan with paper.

Paper is generally an uncountable material, so it does not need the article a. Also, taught me how to make is the natural structure.

× All of the classmates are not learning because they do not.

✓ None of my classmates learned because they were not interested.

The original sentence is incomplete because do not has no following verb or complement. A complete sentence needs a clear subject, verb, and ending.

× I liked to make a origami boat.

✓ I liked to make an origami boat.

Use an before a word that begins with a vowel sound. Origami begins with a vowel sound, so an is required instead of a.

× I liked to make an origami boat which I which it fascinates me a lot.

✓ I liked to make an origami boat, which fascinated me a lot.

The relative clause contains unnecessary repeated pronouns. Use only which as the subject of the relative clause. Because the student is describing a childhood experience, fascinated should be in the past tense.

× I liked to make an origami boat, which fascinated me a lot.

✓ I liked to make an origami boat, which fascinated me a lot.

The verb fascinates should be changed to fascinated because the question asks about the student’s childhood and the main verb liked is in the past tense.

× I enjoy a very lot for making that boat.

✓ I really enjoyed making that boat.

After enjoy, use a gerund ending in -ing, such as making. The phrase a very lot for making is not grammatically correct; really enjoyed making is the natural structure.

× For physical letter, I started writing with writing tasks one and two.

✓ For physical letters, I started writing with writing tasks one and two.

The noun letter is countable and is being used in a general plural sense, so it should be letters rather than singular letter without an article.

× It learned me.

✓ It taught me.

The verb learn cannot normally take a person as its object in this meaning. The correct past-tense verb is taught: it taught me.

× I do not think so people still keep handwritten letters today.

✓ I do not think that people still keep handwritten letters today.

After I do not think, use the conjunction that to introduce the clause. The phrase I do not think so cannot directly introduce a subject and verb in this sentence.

× Today’s generation there is so many smart things.

✓ In today’s generation, there are so many smart devices.

There are must be used with the plural noun devices. There is is used with a singular noun. The sentence also needs a clear introductory phrase separated by a comma.

× There is so many smart things such as smartphones, tablets, and laptops.

✓ There are so many smart devices, such as smartphones, tablets, and laptops.

Many is used with plural countable nouns, so the sentence must use there are. Devices is also a more suitable plural noun for smartphones, tablets, and laptops.

× Which is easily we can type a letter and send a message to anybody.

✓ With which we can easily type a letter and send a message to anybody.

The adverb easily should be placed before the main verb type. The relative structure also needs with which to connect the devices to the action.

× No, I do not carry pen and paper whenever I go out.

✓ No, I do not carry pens and paper whenever I go out.

Pen is a countable noun and refers to pens in general here, so it should be plural. Paper is an uncountable material noun and can remain singular.

× I just take with my phone and go out.

✓ I just take my phone with me when I go out.

The verb take needs a direct object, so say take my phone. With me shows that the speaker carries the phone while going out.

× I have already a smartphone which helps me throughout like writing typing text or messaging somebody’s story.

✓ I already have a smartphone, which helps me with writing, typing texts, and messaging people.

The adverb already is placed more naturally before the main verb have. The phrase helps me throughout like is incomplete and unclear; helps me with should be followed by parallel -ing forms.

× Typing text or messaging somebody’s story.

✓ Typing texts or messaging people.

Texts should be plural when referring to messages in general. Somebody’s story is not the correct plural expression for communicating with people; people is the appropriate plural noun here.