Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，并避免冗长或重复。回答要先给出主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持，使用连接词使表达更连贯。比如将“make”改为过去式“made”，把“higher and longer”改为“higher and farther/longer”，并去掉多余的词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I made paper airplanes when I was a child and often raced them with my friends to see which one flew the farthest. I also folded paper stars as small gifts to express my good wishes.

Gợi ý: 注意句子时态一致（过去式）、单词拼写和语法（如“flow fly”重复错误），避免未完成的句子。先用主题句回答，然后用具体细节支持并用连接词（for example, so）使逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I loved making paper airplanes and racing them with my friends to see which would fly the farthest. I also folded little paper stars as good-luck charms and gave them to friends to cheer them up.

Gợi ý: 注意用词准确和表达完整，避免直译性短语（如“no way to show my blessings”）。句子可更自然：先直接回答（Yes/No），然后用一两句说明原因和举例，使用连接词如“however”或“because”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still write physical letters sometimes, especially as a birthday gift for close friends. I think a handwritten note feels more personal and meaningful, although most people prefer messaging on social media because it's more convenient.

Gợi ý: 先明确回答（Yes/No/It depends），然后用清晰的理由支持。注意语法（如“than write”应为“than writing”），避免夸张或不自然的表达（如“give someone 100 letters”）。可用更真实例子说明感情价值。

Ví dụ: It depends, but generally fewer people keep handwritten letters nowadays because messaging is more convenient. However, handwritten notes can feel very special and personal, so I believe the tradition is worth preserving.

Gợi ý: 注意时态和条件句的自然表达（使用现在或一般过去），避免重复。先回答（Yes/No/Usually），再说明具体情况，用连接词如“because”或“but”。

Ví dụ: Usually yes — I always bring paper and pens when I go to school because I need them for taking notes and doing assignments. But when I'm going out with friends or traveling casually, I usually leave them at home.

× When I was young, I make some airplanes and I always had some races with my friends to see which airplane can fly higher and longer.

✓ When I was young, I made some airplanes and I always had races with my friends to see which airplane could fly higher and longer.

句中时间状语为过去（"When I was young"），谓语动词应使用过去时。原句中“make”应为过去式“made”；另外“can”在描述过去的能力或可能性时应使用过去式“could”。建议：注意句子时态与时间状语一致，过去时间用过去时。

× What's more, I always made some paper stars to show my best wishes.

✓ What's more, I always made some paper stars to show my best wishes.

该句原本动词“made”是正确的过去时，句中不需要改动。此处列出以确认无错。

× Well, I like to make some paper airplanes to addresses with my friends to see which one could flow fly higher and farther.

✓ Well, I liked to make paper airplanes and compete with my friends to see which one could fly higher and farther.

问题在时态与用词。题为回忆儿童时期，需用过去时“liked”而不是一般现在“like”。“to addresses with my friends”是不正确结构，应该用短语“compete with my friends”或“have races with my friends”。此外“flow fly”是多余且拼写错误，应为“fly”。建议：回忆过去时用过去式；用合适短语表达“和朋友比赛”。

× I also folded paper stars as little good luck charms to give to my friends because.

✓ I also folded paper stars as little good luck charms to give to my friends.

原句末尾多余连词“because”且未接完整从句，导致句子不完整（句子结构错误属于Verb+ -ing类也可视为句子结构问题，但这里为未完成从句导致需要删除）。建议：删除多余的“because”或补全原因从句。此处删除以保持句子完整。

× Well, I sometimes write them as a gift to my friends when they have a birthday party.

✓ Well, I sometimes write them as gifts to my friends when they have a birthday.

一般现在时“write”用于现在习惯是正确，但名词单复数与搭配需调整：写信作为礼物应为复数“gifts”或“a gift”与“them”保持一致，且“birthday party”可以简化为“birthday”。建议：注意名词单复数和固定搭配。

× I see it's a traditional no way to show my blessings.

✓ I think it's a traditional way to show my best wishes.

原句短语“a traditional no way”是不合语法的词序和搭配。应为“a traditional way”表示传统方式。“show my blessings”用法不自然，改为“show my best wishes”。此外“I see”用法可以改为“I think”。建议：使用常见搭配“traditional way”和自然表达“best wishes”。

× I see it's a traditional no way to show my blessings. And nowadays people like to send messages on social media. It's convenient.

✓ I think it's a traditional way to show my best wishes. Nowadays people like to send messages on social media because it's convenient.

合并句子更自然并修正前句错误（见上）。时态使用一般现在表习惯正确；将“It's convenient”与前句用because连接使因果关系明确。建议：用because连接原因并调整词序和搭配。

× No. Well, I think most people send messages on social media because it's more convenient than write handwritten letters.

✓ No. Well, I think most people send messages on social media because it's more convenient than writing handwritten letters.

比较结构中动词应使用动名词形式，与“than”连用时动词用-ing形式更自然，因此“write”应改为“writing”。建议：比较时两个项要保持平行结构，使用动名词。

× But I think we should keep this tradition because when we give someone 100 letters, they will feel being valued.

✓ But I think we should keep this tradition because when we give someone 100 letters, they will feel valued.

“feel being valued”是不自然的被动结构，英语中常用“feel valued”表示“感到被重视”。另外代词“they”用来指代“someone”在现代英语可接受，但为避免歧义可改为“that person”或保持“they”。建议：使用固定搭配“feel valued”。

× Hmm, when I need to go to school I will carry some papers and pens because I need them to take notes in the classes and write my assignments.

✓ Hmm, when I need to go to school I carry some papers and pens because I need them to take notes in class and write my assignments.

在表达习惯性或一般事实时使用一般现在时而不是“will carry”。因此“will carry”改为“carry”。此外常用表达为“take notes in class”（不加定冠词）。建议：描述常规行为用一般现在时，注意固定搭配。

× But if I will travel and go out with my friends, it's unnecessary to take them.

✓ But if I travel or go out with my friends, it's unnecessary to take them.

在条件句中不应使用“will”表示将来，第一类条件句应使用一般现在时表示将来可能性，因此“if I will travel”改为“if I travel”。此外“and go out”改为“or go out”或保持并列，且“it's unnecessary to take them”语法可接受。建议：条件句用一般现在时表将来可能性，注意连词选择。