Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và làm rõ ý chính: trả lời trực tiếp, dùng 2-3 câu ngắn, tránh lặp từ và phát triển ý bằng chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: nói bạn đã từng làm gì với giấy, khi nào và cảm nhận của bạn. Sử dụng từ nối đơn giản để liên kết ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to make simple paper crafts like origami and paper flowers when I was younger. I enjoyed folding paper at home because it helped me relax, although I'm not very skilled at drawing. Now I only make small paper decorations for gifts occasionally.

Gợi ý: Tập trung trả lời rõ ràng bằng một câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể: mô tả hoạt động, tần suất và lý do. Tránh câu rời rạc và sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, đại từ).

Ví dụ: As a child I liked drawing and making paper cards for my family. I used to draw every weekend and gave the cards to my parents because it made them happy and encouraged me to be creative.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện mạch văn và ngữ pháp: mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để nối giải thích và ví dụ. Sửa thì (present simple) và cụm từ như "handwritten cards/letters". Thêm chi tiết về tần suất hoặc trường hợp cụ thể để cụ thể hóa nội dung.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually write physical letters anymore because it's much faster to send messages on my phone. I only handwrite birthday cards for close family members a few times a year, for example for my mother's birthday.

Gợi ý: Sắp xếp ý mạch lạc: bắt đầu bằng quan điểm tổng quát, dùng liên từ để giải thích lý do và nêu ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh từ không rõ nghĩa và hoàn thành câu. Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác như "handwritten letters", "special occasions", "more personal".

Ví dụ: I think people still keep handwritten letters for special occasions because they feel more personal. However, most everyday messages are sent by phone or email since those methods are faster and more convenient.

Gợi ý: Trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và nhất quán: nói rõ bạn có mang hay không, vì sao, và khi nào thì có (nếu có). Sử dụng từ vựng đúng: "pen", "notebook", "carry". Hạn chế lặp lại và sửa lỗi thì.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually carry paper or pens because I use my phone to communicate. Sometimes I bring a notebook and a pen when I go to school for taking notes.

× I was mad and graph with paper but sometimes I don't like graph with graph with paper because I don't have very good art and I don't very good art for Cesar you I don't know good for you, Cesar and I think it's not good for me.

✓ I used to make crafts with paper, but sometimes I didn't enjoy making them because I'm not very good at art and I don't think I'm good at it.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and word choice issues. Use 'used to' to express past habitual activity; 'make crafts with paper' is the correct collocation; 'didn't enjoy' expresses dislike in the past; 'not very good at art' uses the correct preposition 'at' after 'good'. Remove repeated words and unclear names. Suggestion: simplify into one or two clear clauses and use correct prepositions and verb forms. (Explanation in English as requested).

× I in I was trying I graph and draw with bible I went I try because my it's my homegrow and I can't I don't

✓ When I was a child, I tried drawing and folding paper because it was a hobby I developed at home, but I couldn't continue.

The original is fragmented and ungrammatical. Start with a clear time clause 'When I was a child'; use 'tried drawing and folding paper' to express attempts; 'hobby I developed at home' clarifies 'homegrow'; use a coordinated clause 'but I couldn't continue' to finish the thought. Suggestion: form complete sentences with subject, verb, and object and avoid repeating pronouns. (Explanation in English as requested).

× No I don't because no I don't I usually write physical letters anymore because it is much faster to send messages or mails.

✓ No, I don't anymore because it is much faster to send messages by phone or email.

Use 'don't anymore' or 'don't ... anymore' to indicate cessation; 'messages by phone or email' is clearer than 'messages or mails'; avoid repeating negatives. Suggestion: place 'anymore' at the end of the clause and choose correct prepositions like 'by' for means. (Explanation in English as requested).

× For example, I only write a hand writing call for close family on her birthday, but most of the time I use my phone for messages.

✓ For example, I only write handwritten cards for close family on their birthdays, but most of the time I use my phone for messages.

Use 'handwritten' (adjective) instead of 'hand writing', and 'cards' fits the context better than 'call'; use plural 'their birthdays' to match 'close family' and be gender-neutral; 'for messages' is acceptable but 'for sending messages' can be clearer. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and plural pronouns for groups. (Explanation in English as requested).

× Well, I think people still write hand writing letters sometimes especially for special occasions although most vary messages are sent by phone or email because they offer faster letters feel most person and magazine phones.

✓ I think people still write handwritten letters sometimes, especially for special occasions, although most messages are now sent by phone or email because those are faster and feel more personal.

Replace 'hand writing letters' with 'handwritten letters'; 'most vary messages' is unclear—use 'most messages are now sent'; 'offer faster letters feel most person and magazine phones' is garbled—should be 'because those are faster and feel more personal.' Suggestion: keep clauses concise and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct adjective/adverb forms. (Explanation in English as requested).

× For example, people who don't write

✓ For example, some people don't write handwritten letters anymore.

The original is an incomplete fragment. Complete the sentence to convey the intended idea. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments by ensuring each sentence has a subject and a verb and completes the thought. (Explanation in English as requested).

× No I don't because I don't carry paper and bandwidth when I went well because I don't because I use the phone for messages of con with my mom or my dad and I never carry paper and beds but sometimes I carry a band it's go to school and paper.

✓ No, I don't. I don't carry paper or notebooks when I go out because I use my phone to message my mom or dad. I sometimes carry a notebook and a pen when I go to school.

Replace 'bandwidth' and 'beds' with correct nouns like 'notebooks' and 'pen'; use 'when I go out' not 'when I went'; 'use my phone to message' uses correct infinitive and preposition; separate into short sentences for clarity. Suggestion: choose accurate vocabulary (notebook, pen) and keep verb tenses consistent with present habits. (Explanation in English as requested).