Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Старайтесь отвечать короче и структурированно: начните с краткого утверждения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных детали. Избегайте повторов и грамматических ошибок (например, согласование времен).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I used to make paper crafts at school during technology lessons. For example, I often made paper flowers and simple models for class projects.

Gợi ý: Упражняйтесь в порядке слов и точных форм глаголов: сначала давайте прямой ответ, затем одну-две конкретные детали. Избегайте словесных повторах и неточных конструкций (например, "a lot many").

Ví dụ: I loved making origami as a child. I often folded cranes and small animals to give to my parents as handmade gifts.

Gợi ý: Говорите более ясно и корректно: давайте полное утверждение и объяснение с корректной грамматикой. Избегайте лишних слов и незавершённых фраз.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still write physical letters sometimes. I think they are meaningful because they feel personal and more thoughtful than messages.

Gợi ý: Делайте ответ более сжатым и логичным: используйте связку причинно-следственного характера и корректные формы (например, "not many people" вместо "not a lot"). Сформулируйте причину и при необходимости добавьте пример.

Ví dụ: I don't think many people keep handwritten letters today because most communication happens online. For instance, friends usually message each other on social media instead.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте короче и точнее: начните с "Yes" или "No", затем приведите 1–2 конкретные причины или ситуацию. Избегайте повторяющихся выражений и неопределённой лексики.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen. They are useful for taking notes, jotting down ideas, or filling out forms when I'm out.

× Yes, of course I made a lot of crafts with paper when I was a child because in the school we have a technological lesson and in this lesson we need to do a lot of crafts with paper.

✓ Yes, of course I made a lot of crafts with paper when I was a child because at school we had a technology lesson and in that lesson we had to make a lot of paper crafts.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses and has incorrect prepositions. Use past tense consistently (made -> made, we have -> we had, we need -> we had to) because the action occurred in the past. Use 'at school' (common collocation) instead of 'in the school' and 'technology lesson' is the natural term. Use 'had to make' to express obligation in the past. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and choose correct prepositions and collocations.

× Well, I really liked to do when I was a child a lot many origamis and do something handmade for my parents to present that to them.

✓ Well, when I was a child I really liked making many origami figures and making handmade gifts to give to my parents.

The original sentence has awkward word order, incorrect quantifier use ('a lot many') and incorrect verb forms ('liked to do' with repeated 'do'). Use 'when I was a child' at the start for clarity, 'liked making' (gerund after 'liked'), 'many origami figures' (origami is usually uncountable or treated as plural 'origami figures'), and 'handmade gifts to give to my parents' for natural expression. Suggestion: use gerunds after 'liked', correct quantifiers, and logical word order.

× Yes, of course I still write in physical letters because I think it really matters and people can't to be without physical letters like it's a really matter part in

✓ Yes, of course I still write physical letters because I think they really matter and people can't be without them; physical letters are an important part of life.

Errors include incorrect preposition ('write in physical letters' -> 'write physical letters'), unnecessary 'to' after 'can't' ('can't to be' -> 'can't be'), pronoun reference and sentence fragment. Use 'they' to refer to letters and finish the thought. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions, avoid 'to' after modal verbs, ensure clear pronouns and complete sentences.

× Well, honestly, I think not a lot of people keep friend writing letters nowadays because a lot of people now writing something in on the internet and handwriting letters now isn't that important

✓ Well, honestly, I don't think many people keep handwritten letters nowadays because many people write things on the internet and handwriting letters isn't as important now.

Problems: 'not a lot of people' is better as 'I don't think many people'; 'keep friend writing letters' is unclear—use 'keep handwritten letters'; verb forms 'writing something in on the internet' incorrect -> 'write things on the internet'. Also 'isn't that important' is vague; use 'isn't as important now.' Suggestion: use standard quantifiers ('many'), correct adjective order ('handwritten letters'), and correct verb forms.

× Yeah, of course I do it from my point of view, every person needs to get paper and pens when they go out because it can be a lot of situations when they can need it.

✓ Yes, of course I do. From my point of view, everyone should carry paper and pens when they go out because there can be many situations when they need them.

Problems: 'do it' is vague—simply 'I do' suffices; 'every person' -> 'everyone' more natural; 'needs to get' -> 'should carry' is clearer; 'it can be a lot of situations when they can need it' has wrong pronoun number and awkward structure. Use 'many situations when they need them' (plural pronoun for paper and pens). Suggestion: use clear verbs, correct pronoun agreement, and concise phrasing.