Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并保持语法时态一致。开头用一句主题句说明是否做过纸工艺，然后用1-2句具体细节补充，避免不完整句和多余断句。注意时态（过去发生的事用过去时）和连词使用以增强连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I made paper crafts when I was in kindergarten. We often created animals, fruits and useful items from colored paper, which I found very interesting. However, I seldom make paper crafts now because I am busy with schoolwork.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰且有语法和用词错误。先给出明确的主题句（例如你喜欢做什么），然后用具体细节说明你如何做并举例。减少犹豫词并用连词连接句子。

Ví dụ: As a child, I preferred painting on paper to making crafts. I used colored pens and paints to draw bright pictures of animals and landscapes, and I often decorated them with stickers.

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并纠正语法（过去经历用过去时，表达感谢用正确短语）。可以简要说明原因和频率，使用连接词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: No, I rarely write physical letters now. I only wrote a few letters in primary school when we exchanged notes with students from another school to express our gratitude.

Gợi ý: 回答要更明确并避免口语化填充词。先直接回答问题，然后给原因和具体例子，使用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 来增强逻辑。

Ví dụ: Not many people keep handwritten letters nowadays because most communication happens via smartphones. For example, people in China often use WeChat or WhatsApp since these apps are faster and more convenient.

Gợi ý: 回答结构还可以但要注意拼写和用词（'carry'）。先给简洁的主题句，然后用具体情况说明并用连词连接句子。避免使用泛指 'nobody'，可改为 'I usually don't' 或 'people usually don't'.

Ví dụ: It depends. I usually carry paper and pens when I go to school because I might need them for notes, but when I go shopping or hang out with friends, I usually don't bring them.

× When I was in kindergarten, we have some craft class, some craft lesson.

✓ When I was in kindergarten, we had some craft classes, some craft lessons.

原句时态与时间状语不一致。句首有过去时间状语“When I was in kindergarten”，因此谓语应使用过去时“had”。另外“craft class/lesson”应使用复数形式以匹配“some”。建议在类似句子中注意时间状语决定时态，并确保可数名词在表示多次或若干时用复数。

× We often make different types like animal, fruit or some practical items with paper is really interesting.

✓ We often made different types, like animals, fruits, or some practical items with paper; it was really interesting.

原句存在结构混乱和形容词/名词形式错误。首先时态应为过去时“made”。“animal, fruit”应使用复数“animals, fruits”。此外原句缺少连词或分号来连接并说明“is really interesting”应改为过去时“was really interesting”。建议将句子拆分或用适当连接词，并注意名词单复数和时态一致。

× But now.

✓ But not anymore.

“But now.”为残缺句，缺少谓语，不能独立表达完整意思。改为常见表达“But not anymore.”或扩展为完整句子“But I don't do that anymore.”以符合句子结构要求。建议写完整句子，确保主语和谓语齐全。

× I'd like to join then rather than making some craft umm I can paint, use different color pens to create attractive picture.

✓ I'd rather join in than make crafts; I could paint and use different colored pens to create attractive pictures.

原句中代词与结构使用不当：“I'd like to join then”应为“I'd rather join in”或“I'd prefer joining in”。“making some craft”中“craft”要用复数“crafts”。“different color pens”需用形容词短语“different colored pens”。“attractive picture”应为复数“attractive pictures”。建议使用固定搭配like/rather/prefer，注意动词形式一致及名词复数形式。

× No, I just have one experience that write physical letters in my primary school.

✓ No, I only had one experience of writing physical letters in my primary school.

句子中时态与结构错误。应使用过去时“had”，并用动名词短语“experience of writing”来表达经历。原句“that write”结构不正确，应改为“of writing”。建议用“had an experience of doing sth”或“I once wrote physical letters”之类更自然的表达。

× We need to write letters to another school students to show our grateful.

✓ We needed to write letters to students at another school to show our gratitude.

原句中介词和名词搭配错误。“another school students”应为“students at another school”或“students from another school”。“show our grateful”是不正确搭配，应为“show our gratitude”或“express our gratitude”。时态也与上下文应为过去时“needed”。建议学习常见介词搭配和名词搭配（gratitude而非grateful）。

× Not you sure, people nowadays use more smartphones to communicate, like WhatsApp and WeChat in China.

✓ Not sure; people nowadays use smartphones more to communicate, like WhatsApp and WeChat in China.

原句开头“Not you sure”毫无语法意义，应为“Not sure”或“No, not really”。此外“use more smartphones”在语序上更自然为“use smartphones more”。建议删掉多余词并调整语序以符合英语习惯。

× It depends, if I have to go to school I definitely carry paper and pens, but if I go to shopping or hanging out with my friends, nobody would Curry paper and pen.

✓ It depends. If I have to go to school, I definitely carry paper and pens, but if I go shopping or hang out with my friends, nobody would carry paper and pens.

原句多个问题：1) 逗号拼接句需改为分句或加连词。2) “go to shopping”应为“go shopping”；“hanging out”应与前面并列使用原形动词“hang out”或改为“going shopping or hanging out”。3) “Curry”为拼写错误，应为“carry”。4) 主谓一致与复数形式：“paper and pens”在前面已用复数，结尾应一致为“pens”。“nobody would carry”时态可保留，但更自然为“nobody carries”或“nobody would carry”。建议注意动词不定式/动名词用法、拼写及主谓一致。