Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答含糊且有许多语法与表达错误，句子不连贯。建议：先直接回答问题（Yes/No），然后用一到两句简洁说明原因或举例，使用简单正确的句型并减少犹豫词（如 "I, I'm"）。练习句型："No, I haven't made crafts myself, but I often watch people making paper crafts on my phone because I find it interesting."

Ví dụ: No, I haven't made paper crafts myself, but I often watch videos of people making them on my phone because I find it very interesting.

Gợi ý: 回答有主旨但词汇与语法不准确，细节模糊。建议：以主题句开头（I liked ...），然后用一两句具体描述你做了什么，使用正确时态和词汇，避免拼写错误（paper cut → paper-cutting/or paper crafts），并加上理由或结果。

Ví dụ: I liked making paper crafts as a child. I often made paper flowers and cut out little smiling faces, and my mother would praise me for being creative.

Gợi ý: 回答简洁且能直接回应问题，但可以更自然并补充一点细节。建议：保持直接回答（No），然后说明你用什么替代以及频率或原因，句子用连词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I don't. I usually send messages online or email instead because it's faster and more convenient.

Gợi ý: 观点明确但表达重复且有语法错误。建议：给出一个主题句，然后用一两句具体说明原因或举例，避免重复词，使用连接词使逻辑清楚。

Ví dụ: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters because they are personal and can hold sentimental value, like old love letters or notes from family.

Gợi ý: 回答含有想法但表达混乱且语法不正确。建议：先简短回答，然后说明具体情境和目的，使用正确时态和词序，去掉多余或不明的词语。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often carry a small notebook and a pen when I go out so I can sketch interesting trees or flowers or jot down ideas when I see something inspiring.

× No, but I, I'm, I think I will see any people to made any crafts with paper in phone. I think it's very interesting.

✓ No, but I think I have seen people making crafts with paper on my phone. I think it's very interesting.

错误类型综述：涉及时态、动词形式、介词和不定式用法。说明：原句中“I will see” 表示将来时，但说的是过去或现在在手机上看到的人，应使用现在完成或现在时“have seen / see”；“to made” 是不定式加过去式，应改为动名词“making”；“in phone” 介词错误，正确用法为“on my phone”。建议：讲述已经看到的事用现在完成或现在时，动词后需要动名词表示正在进行的动作，提到设备用介词 on 和所有格 my。

× I like paper cut. When I was a child, I usually use paper cart, a flower or cut a smile. My mother said I'm a genius.

✓ I liked paper cutting. When I was a child, I usually used colored paper to make a flower or cut out a smile. My mother said I was a genius.

错误类型：过去时使用错误、名词/动名词形式及冠词/词汇选择不当。说明：回答关于童年应使用过去时，所以“like”改为“liked”，“use”改为过去式“used”；“paper cut” 应为动名词或名词短语“paper cutting”；“paper cart” 可能指“colored paper”或“card”需改为合适词汇；“cut a smile” 更自然为“cut out a smile”；最后一处从直接引语时态一致性，母亲当时说过应为“I was a genius”。建议：描述过去经历统一用过去时，使用常见搭配如“use colored paper to make”或“cut out”。

× No I don't. I usually send message online and from e-mail.

✓ No, I don't. I usually send messages online or by email.

错误类型：复数形式、介词和表达习惯。说明：可数名词 message 应为复数 “messages”；“from e-mail” 介词用法错误，正确为“by email” 或“via email”；并且用“or”连接两种方式更流畅。建议：注意可数名词的单复数和惯用介词短语，如“send by email / send online”。

× Of course, I think a keep handwritten letters is very, very good. It's a good memory for people and it's a it's a good thing.

✓ Of course. I think keeping handwritten letters is very, very good. They're good memories for people and a nice thing to have.

错误类型：动词+ -ing 形式、冠词和代词使用。说明：原句“a keep handwritten letters” 结构错误，应使用动名词短语“keeping handwritten letters”；handwritten letters 为复数，后文代词应用复数“they're”且“a good memory” 改为“good memories” 更自然；多余重复“it's a it's a”需删除。建议：用动名词表示持续行为，名词数要一致，避免重复表达。

× Yes, when I walking to the road I will see beautiful things, I can paint the tree of flowers and maybe can meet start. I can signed I can.

✓ Yes. When I'm walking along the road I see beautiful things. I can paint trees and flowers, and maybe I can see the stars. I can sign them.

错误类型：现在进行时、一般现在时、介词、名词复数和过去分词/动词形式错误。说明：描述正在走路用现在进行时“I'm walking”或“when I walk”; “to the road” 改为“along the road”；“I will see” 不需将来时可用一般现在“I see”或现在进行；“paint the tree of flowers” 不自然，改为“paint trees and flowers”；“meet start” 是拼写/词汇错误，应为“see the stars”；“I can signed I can” 结构混乱，应为“I can sign them” 表示签名或标记。建议：选择合适时态描述习惯动作，用正确介词，注意名词单复数和正确动词形式。