Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms (e.g., "I have made a paper house with my children"), avoid repetition, and limit to up to 3–4 short sentences. Add a brief detail using linking words (e.g., "For example,") to explain how you make them or why you enjoy it.

Ví dụ: Yes. I have made paper houses and clothes with my children. For example, we cut and fold colored paper to build small houses, and we often decorate them with markers. I enjoy doing this because it is creative and helps us spend time together.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence about your childhood habit and use correct vocabulary and grammar ("origami," "interested" → "interesting" is incorrect here). Avoid repetition and finish the thought. Use a linking word to add a specific example or reason.

Ví dụ: As a child, I liked making origami and paper houses. For example, I often folded cranes and boats using colored paper, which I found relaxing and fun. This hobby helped me be patient and creative.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use correct phrasing like "I still write letters by hand" and add a brief reason or frequency. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and include a linking word if you add details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still write physical letters occasionally. I usually write to close friends or relatives on special occasions because handwritten notes feel more personal.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason. Use correct grammar ("handwritten letters" and "precious"), avoid filler words, and include a linking word like "because" or "therefore" to connect idea and reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, many people still keep handwritten letters because they are personal and meaningful. For example, people save letters from family members as keepsakes to remember special moments.

Gợi ý: Give a concise, natural reply. Correct unnecessary repetition and odd words (e.g., "pickles," "wrist"). State frequency and a short reason using a linking word like "because" or "so."

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen when I go out because I sometimes need to jot down ideas or reminders. This is useful for shopping lists or quick notes.

× Yes, of course I have been made paper house with my children.

✓ Yes, of course I have made paper houses with my children.

The original uses passive progressive 'have been made' incorrectly; the intended meaning is a present perfect active: 'have made'. Also 'paper house' should be plural 'paper houses' when talking about multiple instances. Use present perfect 'have made' to show experience up to now.

× I usually play with my children to make paper such as paper house and paper clothes and paper

✓ I usually make paper crafts with my children, such as paper houses and paper clothes.

'Play with my children to make paper' is awkward; use 'make paper crafts with my children'. 'Such as' should be followed by example plural nouns 'paper houses and paper clothes'. Remove trailing redundant 'and paper'.

× For example, I sometimes made the paper house or origami.

✓ For example, I sometimes made paper houses or origami.

Use plural 'paper houses' when speaking of repeated activities. The past tense 'made' is fine here because the question asked about childhood; keep tense consistent.

× Orgami is very interested in playing time.

✓ Origami was very interesting to play with.

The student used 'interested' (which describes a person) instead of 'interesting' (which describes a thing). Also 'playing time' is unnatural; use 'to play with' or 'to make' for activities. Adjust tense to past 'was' to match childhood reference.

× So I often I often

✓ So I often did.

The original repeats phrase and lacks a complete verb phrase. For past habitual action, use 'I often did' or 'I often made them' to complete the sentence.

× Yes, I yes I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

Repeated words create redundancy. Use single 'Yes, I do.' to answer current habits.

× I usually usually write handwriting usually write handwrit handwriting letters handwriting handwriting letter is

✓ I usually write handwritten letters.

The original repeats words and misuses 'handwriting' (a noun) instead of adjective 'handwritten'. Simplify to 'I usually write handwritten letters.'

× Yes, I yes, they have been written handwriting letter because handwriting letters is is a is a precious precious things the person who writes

✓ Yes, yes, people still write handwritten letters because handwritten letters are precious to the person who receives them.

The original mixes pronouns and voices. 'They have been written' is passive and unclear; use active 'people still write handwritten letters'. 'Letters is a precious things' has number and article issues: use plural verb 'are' and 'precious to the person who receives them.' Remove repetition.

× Yes, of course. When I go out go out I I need to I need to bring a pen and paper pickles because I sometimes have to write something to do wrist to do it.

✓ Yes, of course. When I go out I need to bring a pen and paper because I sometimes have to write something.

The original has many repetitions and an odd word 'pickles' and 'to do wrist' which are incorrect. Remove repeated fragments and extraneous words. Use simple present 'I need to bring' to state a habitual action when going out.