Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammar and word-choice errors. To improve, give a direct topic sentence stating whether you have made paper crafts, then add one or two specific examples with brief details (what you made and how). Use simple past for childhood activities and keep it to 1–3 sentences. Avoid invented words and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have made several paper crafts. For example, when I was a child I made a paper book cover and paper masks for a school play, which I decorated with markers and glitter.

Gợi ý: The answer is largely unintelligible. Start with a clear, direct response (yes or no), then explain briefly why using simple, relevant vocabulary (e.g. email, phone, convenience). Keep to 1–3 concise sentences and use correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t usually write physical letters anymore. I mostly send messages or emails from my phone because it is faster and more convenient.

Gợi ý: Your reply is confusing and mixed with irrelevant ideas. Begin with a clear opinion (yes/no/maybe) and support it with one or two specific reasons (sentimental value, special occasions). Use linking words like "because" or "however" to connect ideas and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: I think some people still keep handwritten letters because they have sentimental value. For example, families may save letters from relatives as keepsakes, even though most everyday messages are sent by phone or email.

Gợi ý: The answer is unclear and contains incorrect word choices. Answer directly (yes/no) then explain briefly why, giving a specific situation when you would use them. Use accurate vocabulary (carry, prepared, take notes, jot down ideas) and 1–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen because I like to jot down ideas or reminders. For instance, I use them to write shopping lists or note important information during meetings.

Gợi ý: Your answer is short and partly unclear. Give a clear topic sentence stating an activity you enjoyed, then add a specific detail about how you did it or why you liked it. Keep sentences simple and grammatical (past tense for childhood).

Ví dụ: As a child I liked to make paper airplanes and fly them out of my bedroom window. I also enjoyed drawing on coloured paper and cutting out shapes to decorate my room.

× Well when I was shown I had made a bookcuff and the right to musical being Seeker.

✓ Well, when I was young I made a bookcase and a music box called 'Seeker'.

The original sentence has multiple structure and word choice errors: 'shown' is wrong for 'young', 'bookcuff' is not a correct word (likely 'bookcase'), and 'the right to musical being Seeker' is ungrammatical. I corrected the sentence to a coherent past description that fits the examiner's question about crafts. Suggestion: keep a clear subject-verb structure and use known nouns; if unsure of a word, describe the object ('a small music box').

× I usually buy letter in my phone later than physical because the leader is get my little feather.

✓ I usually buy letters on my phone rather than physical ones because the delivery takes my little time.

Errors include 'buy letter' (countable noun needs plural or article), wrong preposition ('in my phone' -> 'on my phone'), comparatives ('later than' -> 'rather than'), and unclear clause 'the leader is get my little feather' which seems to mean 'delivery takes a little time'. I made the sentence grammatical while preserving contrast between digital and physical. Suggestion: use plural for countable items, correct prepositions for devices, and keep comparative structures simple ('rather than').

× I think someone is still keep handwriting because I like my camera it's up to she can use phone or gmail to send a message, but she know how to hand reading method.

✓ I think some people still keep handwriting because my sister can use a phone or email to send a message, but she knows how to read handwriting.

Multiple issues: 'someone is still keep' mixes progressive with base verb; correct form is 'some people still keep' or 'someone still keeps'. Pronoun references were unclear ('she' and 'my camera'); I replaced them with 'my sister' to provide a clear subject and corrected verb agreement ('knows'). 'gmail' should be 'email' and 'hand reading method' -> 'read handwriting'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree, use consistent subjects, and choose appropriate nouns for services (email).

× I often cry my thing and I prefer to be prepared because it's candyful when I need to wind something down.

✓ I often carry my things and I prefer to be prepared because it's helpful when I need to write something down.

'cry my thing' is a mispronunciation of 'carry my things'; 'candyful' is not a word—likely 'handy' or 'helpful'; 'wind something down' is wrong for 'write something down'. The corrected sentence keeps present tense habitual action and logical reasons. Suggestion: use common collocations ('carry my things', 'write something down', 'handy/helpful').

× with the water on and I like to cut paper airplane and draw it out my window. Yeah.

✓ I used to make paper airplanes and draw them on my window when I was a child.

The student mixes present tense ('I like') with a past context ('as a child'). The phrase 'with the water on' is unclear and likely irrelevant; I replaced it with a clear past habitual 'used to'. 'Cut paper airplane' needs plural/object form and proper verb: 'make paper airplanes'. 'Draw it out my window' corrected to 'draw them on my window'. Suggestion: match tense to the time frame (childhood -> past), use correct verb phrases ('make paper airplanes'), and ensure pronoun agreement ('them' for plural airplanes').