Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples with simple linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (use past tense consistently when talking about childhood).

Ví dụ: Yes. I often made paper crafts as a child. For example, I folded paper aeroplanes and made paper decorations to hang in my room and at parties. These activities were fun and helped me be creative.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and clarify context. Use correct verb forms and break long sentences into shorter ones. Explain when and why you write letters now with a linking word like "because" or "for example."

Ví dụ: Not often. I only write physical letters for official purposes, such as exams or formal requests, because those places require a signed paper document.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and finish your thought. Use clearer reasoning with linking words (for example, "because", "also"). Provide one or two specific reasons why people keep letters and avoid vague phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, many people still keep handwritten letters because emails cannot replace the emotional value of a personal note. For example, people save letters from loved ones as memories, and they keep formal letters for legal or official records.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer and then briefly explain exceptions with a linking phrase like "only when". Use correct noun forms (paper vs papers) and avoid rambling.

Ví dụ: No, I usually do not carry paper and pens when I go out. I only take a pen and a small notebook when I need to study or visit the library.

Gợi ý: Use past tense for childhood descriptions and keep it to two or three clear sentences. Mention a couple of specific activities and a short reason why you enjoyed them. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: As a child, I loved folding paper aeroplanes and creating simple paper crafts. I also enjoyed writing and drawing on paper because it helped me practice my writing and express my creativity.

× As we like to make craft with paper, usually we used to make craft with paper in our childhood we used to make aeroplanes and many others decorating decoration things to decorate our room and in our parties, etc.

✓ As we liked to make crafts with paper, we usually made paper crafts in our childhood; we used to make aeroplanes and other decorative items to decorate our room and for our parties.

The sentence uses 'craft' where the plural 'crafts' or the compound 'paper crafts' is required (singular/plural mismatch). Also 'decoration things' is ungrammatical and should be 'decorative items'. Verb tense was adjusted to simple past ('liked', 'made') to match 'in our childhood'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for countable items and choose consistent past tense when referring to childhood activities.

× As I still write physical letter not for my personal use I have to write physical letter on examination and other official works with giving our physical letter in that place we use I used to use physical letter.

✓ I still write physical letters, but not for personal use; I have to write physical letters for exams and other official matters, so I sometimes use physical letters there.

Several noun number and tense issues: 'letter' should be plural 'letters' when speaking generally (singular/plural). The original also mixes present simple and past habitual phrases; use present simple 'I still write' and 'I have to write' to describe current routines. Clarify 'examination and other official works' as 'exams and other official matters'. Suggestion: keep consistent present tense for current habits and use plural for general countable nouns.

× As people still keep handwriting letters today because there is a lot of things which we can't do with our only email and other things we have to write a formal letter also as well as some letters are very emotionally given by someone. So, we have to keep that letter for our

✓ People still keep handwritten letters today because there are many things we cannot do with email alone; we sometimes need to write formal letters, and some letters are very emotional, so we keep them.

'Handwriting letters' is incorrect; the adjective form 'handwritten' should modify 'letters'. Also 'a lot of things' should be 'many things' for countable items. The sentence was long and unstructured; it was rewritten for clarity while keeping meaning. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms (handwritten), choose 'many' for countables, and break long sentences into clearer clauses.

× No, I don't carry paper and pens with me when I'm going out for my work and for any other things to do except I only carry books pen, paper with me when I'm just going for my storing story purpose otherwise I will never carry pen and papers

✓ No, I don't carry paper and pens with me when I go out for work or other tasks; I only carry a pen and a notebook when I go to the store, otherwise I never carry pens and paper.

Mixes present continuous 'I'm going' with habitual meaning; use simple present 'I go' for routines. 'Books pen, paper' is ungrammatical; specify 'a pen and a notebook' or 'pens and paper'. Also avoid double negatives like 'never carry pen and papers'—use consistent pluralization and articles. Suggestion: use simple present for regular habits and correct countable noun forms with articles.

× I like to make some aeroplanes by folding papers and sips and many other crafts which we can craft by helping the paper and I am I will try I will very glad to write in the paper because we just learn how to write with the help of pen and paper. Paper is the most important thing.

✓ I liked to make aeroplanes by folding paper and strips, and many other crafts we can make from paper. I was very happy to write on paper because we learned to write with the help of pen and paper. Paper was the most important thing for me.

The response discusses childhood, so past tense is appropriate ('liked', 'was', 'learned', 'was'). 'Folding papers and sips' is incorrect; likely 'folding paper and strips'. 'We can craft by helping the paper' is ungrammatical; use 'craft from paper'. Pronoun and tense confusion ('I am I will try') removed. Suggestion: use past tense consistently when describing past experiences, correct vocabulary ('paper', 'strips'), and simplify sentence structure.