Paper— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, fluency and clarity by using a clear topic sentence, correct tense, and concise supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler phrases. Use linking words (e.g., "when I was a child", "for example") and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child I often made paper crafts, especially origami and handmade birthday gifts for my friends. For example, I used to fold paper cranes and make greeting cards for festivals, which made the presents feel more personal.

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural by using a clear comparison and correct grammar. State your opinion in one sentence, then give a reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Ví dụ: Yes, I still write physical letters because I think they are more meaningful than digital messages. For example, on special occasions I write a handwritten note to my family or close friends because it feels more personal and lasting.

Gợi ý: Clarify your idea and avoid vague or incorrect words. Give one clear reason why people keep letters and provide a specific example. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "kept", "memories") and linking words like "because" or "for instance."

Ví dụ: Yes, many people still keep handwritten letters because they serve as tangible memories. For instance, people often save letters from loved ones in a box to remember special moments or relationships.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then explain briefly with clear reasons. Avoid confusing phrases. Use contrast linking words like "because" or "however."

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't carry paper and pens because I use my phone to write notes. For example, it's more convenient to type reminders on my phone than to carry a notebook and pen.

Gợi ý: Use past tense consistently and provide one or two specific examples. Keep answers concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence and add linking words like "for example."

Ví dụ: As a child, I loved making paper models, especially origami and paper airplanes. For example, I often folded cranes and built paper planes to play with my friends.

× Of course when I met I was I was a child I'm always doing origami or some handmade gifts to my friends for occasions like birthday or festivals.

✓ Of course, when I was a child I always made origami or handmade gifts for my friends for occasions like birthdays or festivals.

The original mixes past and present tenses and uses incorrect continuous form 'I'm always doing' for past habitual actions. Use simple past 'was' for the time clause and simple past 'always made' (habit in the past). Also correct plural 'birthdays'.

× I always do crafts with the paper when I was young.

✓ I always did paper crafts when I was young.

The sentence incorrectly mixes present tense 'do' with past time marker 'when I was young'. Use simple past 'did' for past habitual actions and natural word order 'paper crafts'.

× Of course I write physical letters now too because physical letters more meaningful to online digital message because when we when it's the special day.

✓ Of course I write physical letters now too because physical letters are more meaningful than online digital messages, especially on special days.

Missing verb 'are' (be verb) and incorrect comparison structure. Use 'are more meaningful than' to compare and pluralize 'messages'. Also simplify redundant phrases and use 'especially' for special days.

× I write physical letters and I give to my friends or my family.

✓ I write physical letters and give them to my friends or family.

Omitted object pronoun 'them' after 'give'. Also omit redundant 'my' before family in natural English and remove repeated subject for conciseness.

× Yes, I think because hundreds of letters are very meaningful and they're very vital for people I think they keep over it and they keep their own rumour thing.

✓ Yes, I think handwritten letters are very meaningful and important to people; I think they keep them as personal mementos.

'Hundreds of letters' is unclear and likely incorrect quantifier. 'Vital' is too strong; use 'important'. 'Keep over it' and 'their own rumour thing' are ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'keep them as personal mementos' to convey intended meaning.

× Especially I don't keep because nowadays I can write something to my phone and it will be very easier to carry paper and pens.

✓ I usually don't carry paper and pens because nowadays I can write things on my phone, and it is much easier than carrying paper and pens.

Original has 'it will be very easier' which is incorrect comparative and modal structure. Use 'much easier than' for comparison; change 'write something to my phone' to 'write things on my phone'. Also 'Especially I don't keep' is awkward; 'I usually don't carry' is natural.

× I think I'm always not in my form.

✓ I don't always have a pen with me.

Original 'I'm always not in my form' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended meaning is not having pen or being in the habit; provide a clear present-tense expression: 'I don't always have a pen with me.'

× It will be very easy to write something with hand, I think.

✓ I think it is very easy to write by hand.

Use idiomatic phrase 'write by hand' rather than 'with hand'. Also prefer present 'is' rather than future 'will be' when stating a general fact.

× As a child, I'm always doing origami or I'm always doing paper with boards, airplanes or something like that.

✓ As a child, I always made origami or paper airplanes and did other paper crafts.

Mixes present continuous with past context. Use simple past 'always made' for past habitual actions and use natural collocations 'paper airplanes' and 'paper crafts'.

× I'm always I love a play with the paper when I'm a child and I do shape to shape to paper.

✓ I always loved playing with paper when I was a child, and I liked folding it into different shapes.

Pronoun and tense errors: use past tense 'loved' and 'was a child'. Use gerund 'playing' after 'loved'. 'I do shape to shape to paper' is unclear; replace with 'folding it into different shapes' to convey intended meaning.